Silva Joyce

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http://www.wizards.com/global/images/starwars_article_BP3Tyrnia_pic1_en.jpg :Picture Of Silva Joyce On a bad day.

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Silva On a good day, And dyed her hair blonde:http://blastr.com/assets_c/2010/09/star-wars-girl-1-thumb-smalll-thumb-429x359-46825.jpg.

Another Hot Sexy Pic of me:http://www.geekologie.com/2010/04/06/star-wars-prop-8.jpg.

And Another:http://www.babble.com/CS/blogs/fame...ce-Jordans-pole-strip-sex-boobs-tits-nude.jpg.

One more Sexy One:http://www.advocate.com/uploadedImages/ADVOCATE/NEWS/2010/2010-08/2010-08-19/ToplessWomenx180.jpg

Are You Busy Tonight
I'm Available,Anytime......Anytime

NAME:Silva Joyce
FACTION:Hutt Empire
Rank:Private
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 26
Past Jobs:Assassin/Spy
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5' 8"
WEIGHT: 136 lbs.
EYES: Blue
HAIR:Brown
Race:Hispanic/Italian
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:Scars On her cheek,
FORCE SENSITIVE: Maybe
STRENGTH: Silva has average strength.
DEXTERITY:She can sprint far,very flexible but tires out if free running.
CONSTITUTION: Healthy,other than A cold
INTELLIGENCE: She has field smarts,hacking smarts,And awesome seduction
WISDOM:Average wisdom,but knows most things about seduction than others.
CHARISMA:she has high Amounts of charm,Just her look makes A man tingle.
SKILLS:
-Pinpoint accuracy with Dual Blaster Pistols
-Average Martial Arts Fighter
-Sniper rifle marksman
-Knife Throwing specialist

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Her marksman ship can stand out to most People,who want her skills,She is dangerous with dual Blaster pistols If she Takes them out you better run,Sometimes she may Go out Of her way to get something done,and ends up going to fast,such as if someone Wants a target dead or alive she brings them dead.

GEAR:
She wears An all Black Leather suit,Waterproof black Gloves,Steel toed Black Leg Boots.Utility Belt,Dual Blaster Pistols,Bothan Shrieker,Sonic Grenade,Thermal detonator,Dont forget her red lipstick.

SHIP: A rare, best-in-class vessel, the D5-Mantis is an alpha predator in the cold depths of space. Designed to meet the hefty demands of a much larger interdiction vessel, the Mantis has a compact frame and above all-- is built to fight. By employing three retractable weapon foils with independent power supplies, the Mantis is capable of safely utilizing armament intended for larger class vessels, as well as reducing its profile significantly in order to be packed tightly into carrier ships with a surprising number of other Mantis crafts. To mitigate what would otherwise be an extremely cramped interior, the engineers of the D5-Mantis make efficient use of vertical space and minimized bulkheads to provide more open areas and ensure ease of access for maintenance. Due to the prohibitive cost of building a completely

PETS:N/A

PERSONALITY:If she Gets A male Target,she loves using her sexual Personalty To lure him Into Her web And eat him For lunch,she Is always ready for seduction,and Sex to get what she needs,She has a tough attitude that some Get afraid,If another female Gets in her way She will Beat Her***and pull out her hair and hang it on her Wall.


BIOGRAPHY:Silva Was born On the Harsh Planet of Tatioone,At age 9 Her Parents were killed By A Bounty Hunter named Uley,He kidnapped her,Making Her a sex slave at the Age Of nine.He would beat her with a whip if she did not listen,He made her have sex with numerous human Men And alien Men.
When She Turned 10 he forced her into harsh training with him and his Bounty Hunter's Training her To Steal,Shoot,Kill,And gain him victory.

He began to fear of her skills as she grew older she began to get better And better,It was probably because of the Missions he sent Her on,some He thought she would die On,but she didn't.she became a Master Of dual Blaster Pistols,even using The Vibroblade,She was His personal Assassin His And no One elses.

When she Turned 20 She exacted her revenge,in the middle of the night silently She Killed Uley by Beheading him with A vibroblade after she Had sex with him,She even Finished Off all his men By poisoning there Brunch,She stole his ship The D-5 Mantis and flew off To find work,and leave that Planet To rot in hell.A Few years later she meet a mandolorian Warrior,She liked his weapons and Attempted to steal them,She had sex with him over five times to get him comfortable to her then When he had enough and had to go train she tried to steal his weapons.

He caught her Red handed,He Beat her up.as she was beaten she used her sexual charm to have him not kill her it worked,she liked the way the mando worked and attempted to work for them.

Journal Entry Written In Blood:
He,makes me sick sitting there With his ugly***face he thinks That he can control me for the rest of my life,But he can't That's Why I poisoned Your Men you Bastard,And Tonight after I pleasure You With my Body im Going To Cut off your Mother*****Head,And Eat It.**********...*****


KILLS:N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Allu'rah Danan

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I think you could use to work on your grammar. The personality appears to be one run-on sentence and you have a lot a capitalization where it does not belong. Perhaps you should think about running your profile through a word processor to try and help you fix it up a bit? Also, while the journal entry itself is a good touch, having it written in blood is a little excessive, especially since most book keeping is done on datapads and few people actually have paper around.
 

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It's not bad considering he's allowed to use whatever he likes to suit his character. And while grammar may be bad, no one is perfect, so there's no need to attack his character for that. If he wants to fix the way he writes or types, then he can fix it. The point of criticizing a character profile is to comment on what needs to be changed about the personality or history. Maybe even the powers if needed. Other than that, the profile looks fine to me.
 
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Thankyou,yes the grammer is a little off But,Its a profile I would not like to have it talked like it is trash,But I will take Advice,
 

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I don't think it's trash. I didn't mean to make it sound as if I was trying to tear you down, and if that's how I came across I sincerely apologize.
 

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It's Perfectly Fine,I mean I will take some Advice If needed,Because Im Trying to get my character More on the role,Including Raxus Pesanka
 
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