Talon Maa'ra

Talon maara

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NAME: Talon Maa'ra
FACTION: independent
RANK: independent
SPECIES: Codru-ji/anzat hybrid
AGE: unknown
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 1.6 meters tall
WEIGHT: 200lbs
EYES: violet
HAIR: brown/grey
SKIN: tan
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes

STRENGTH: 8/10.
DEXTERITY: 9/10.
CONSTITUTION: 7/10.
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10.
WISDOM: 7/10.
CHARISMA: 4/10.

PERSONALITY: sort of a recluse, tends to carry on conversations with himself. Can be very biased and also bipolar. Highly xenophobic, Talon is reluctant to allow members of other species access to his social life, Loves to hunt.

BIOGRAPHY:
Talon was a prince, born on the planet Munto Codru. At an early age talon had a nack for combat, Being able to wield multiple (4)blades at once, he caught the attention of the Dark lord of the Sith.

Being kidnapped as a child by the sith, the DLotS raised Talon in the sith arts brainwashing him to hunt and kill Jedi, which resulted in him becoming an adept in the dark arts of the force. Carving his way through many adept Jedi simultaneously with his 4 blades he came face to face with the Grandmaster of the order. Whom matched his skills masterfully, only resulting in Talon failing to assassinate him.

During his bout with the GM, he spoke to Talon only of his wrong doings, and how he could still return from once he came. Talon returned to the DLotS only for his fellow sith detaining him, and beating him. All while he was being tortured his anger rose up but not against the jedi but against his brotheren. After weeks had passed Talon started feeling doubt in his heart and mind and turned his back on the DLotS. After he had attempted to leave his fellow sith targeted him and moved in to kill him, for turning his back against the sith.

Talon fled after a squirmish with a few, in search of refuge, Finally resting down in naboo talon was approached once again by the JGM and another fellow jedi in attempts to persuade him to join the jedi council. After a few long months Talon attended the jedi academy and learned these said ways.

Talon set out to help the jedi aid in the defeat of the dark side. In combat amongst a sith outpost Talon proved his expertise not only in the dark arts but also the light side as well. Showing how well the JGM had trained him the sith fled, Once gaining the outpost Talon once again began to doubt himself and the jedi ways.

disagreeing with some of the jedi teachings, he left the order, In particularly he felt that the force was not two seperate sides but only one. He felt the force could be controlled as a whole and not be picked apart like both the sith and jedi believed. Talon continued his pursuit in gaining wisdom And knowledge of the force. Being able to tap into both the "dark" and "light" sides of the force and not falling to either side he became a formidable force user.

Over the years Talon has ran from returning to claim his right on Munto Codru and sat out to take up his own apprentices, in hopes to help keep the balance amongst the jedi and sith.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Super sonic hearing, high regenerative capabilities, 4 arms, extensive eye sight, photogenic memory, total recall of his brain, he could go days without food and water and had senses that allowed them to scan the surrounding area. His brain was highly evolved which caused his visual receptors to also see radio waves. Hidden proboscises, exceptional longevity.

FORCE POWERS:
A formidable force user.

SKILLS: Creating weapons mostly lightsabers and armor.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS
Uses trispzest, tràkata, sokan, telekenetic, dun möch, double bladed and dual saber, Shii-cho, makashi, soresu, ataru, shien/djem so, niman, juyo/vaapad, strong/medium/fast style, mounted, lus-ma, su ma, and lightwhip styles.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
His Strengths in knowledge of the force and abilities to use it in and out of combat. Amazing detective skills. Knowledge of saber combat.

His Weaknesses lie in his inablilty to make up his mind. He is torn apart by his knowledge of both jedi and sith teachings. his emotions tend to get in the way, and is untrustworthy of most. Has a form of ptsd simply for his drastic life choices he has made and the battles he has fought. Talks to the dead alot, and has random visions that hinder his focus.

GEAR:
Carries 4 purple bladed lightsaber-blaster hybrids. That can connect at the hilt to be used as a double bladed lightsaber. Wore a cloak over his custom mandalorian type armor. Wore a small crown.
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Armor of this design
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SHIP:
Destroyed
 
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@Talon maara

Just to let you know, that you can't have that kind of bio full with being the ex grandmaster, I'm sorry but new people to this site usually start at the highest Jedi knight level. If you wish can see that we are making a new timeline where you can focus on making a character that wouldn't be considered not allowed because of just how powerful he is. @Brandon Rhea or @Green Ranger or any of the admins for help.
 

Talon maara

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Thats what i need is a little help constructing, so criticism is highly encouraged.
 
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