The Darken family

[ren darken]

Name: darken family
First family member: Gascoigne
History: this family was around about the same amount of time the jedi have been a thing but are some of the few verminion who avoid eating the flesh of most sentient creatures but are bated by the sith as the members of the family in the darken manor were slain as well as there guards apparently one of the guards was payed to tell the sith the way to the manor then was when they were all slain but 2 of the children survived Loretta and ren who were taken into a ship by a trusted friend of the family who was also a jedi

 

[Logan]

Seems unlikely that any family - especially one comprised of a race that lives like 20 years - could stretch back as far as "the jedi have been a thing."

I think you should retool some of the details and look at other Family Lore articles for the kind of details/things that we generally look for when it comes to Lore submissions. I'm going to archive this but feel free to give it another shot.