VCX-100 Light Freighter

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VCX-100 light freighter

AFFILIATION
Open Market

MANUFACTURER
Corellian Engineering Corporation

CLASS
Light freighter

ROLE
Transport goods, run bulk

COMPOSITION
Durasteel and Chromium

DIMENSIONS
43.9 m by 34.2 m by 14.5 m

CREW
1 to 2

PASSENGER CAPACITY
6

CARGO CAPACITY
Up to 14 tons

HANGAR CAPACITY
1 - VCX Series auxillary starfighter

CONSUMABLES
One month

SPEED/MANEUVERABILITY
1025 kph

ARMAMENT
  • 2 CEC dual laser turrents
  • Torpedo launcher

EQUIPMENT
  • Loading ramp
  • Sleeping quarters
  • Cargo bay

DESCRIPTION
Made by the Corellian Engineering Corporation, the VCX-100 light freighter was favored among smugglers and tradesman who made their living transporting bulk goods for various companies across the galaxy. Not only capable of transporting several tons of goods, the ship was also outfitted with a set of frontal and dorsal turrents, should the pilot ever need to defend themselves. However, against a full fleet, the light freighter would have a tough time in battle. What it lacked in armor and weapons it made up for in speed and maneuverability.
 

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This submission, unfortunately, has a large number of problems, and I apologize for taking so long to address it.

The first, and most glaring, is that you have completely omitted part of the template. The Legality and Intent sections are missing. These are required for all submissions.

Second, chromium viewports?

Third, the Speed/Maneuverability section for a spacecraft should use MGLT, not kp/h, and you have entirely omitted a maneuverability rating.

Fourth, weapons do not match up with what is portrayed on screen. I have never seen a VCX-100 with a torpedo launcher.

Fifth, your equipment sections lists only things that don't actually have to be mentioned. There are important items that should be listed here, like escape pods and a hyperdrive, but they are not.

Sixth, cargo capacity for a ship this size is well over 14 tons. Easily.

Seventh, the description is much, much too short, especially for a vessel with a prominent canon presence on screen.

In conclusion, while I appreciate the effort made, I am going to have to archive this for the reasons stated above. I highly suggest you review the tech rules and the official tech templates, and have a look at some examples of previously approved tech here. They will all give you some pointers for future submissions.
 
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