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What is going to happen in your plot?

After hearing rumors about a explorer who had finally found the coordinates of Dromund Kaas after years of work, a group of three legionnaires led by Jerex Dorn will visit the explorer's last coordinates to take the information from him, only to find out his ship landed abruptly on Felucia for unknown reasons. After surviving the local fauna and getting to the ship, the sith group will find the explorer dead. Luckily for them, the ship would still have that information stored in it.

The three of them would land in Kaas city, a great city that now belonged to nature, and search for the ancient sith tombs located in the planet, facing against whatever creatures got in their way.

Finally in the tombs, the legionnaires will visit the tomb of Lord Andros, one of the most important figures buried there, and retrieve his writings after overcoming whatever security measures he had put in his resting place.

What other writers (and their characters) will be a part of this?
@Painus as Ana Damico, @Bran as Trinity, and of course me as Jerex Dorn
Where are all the locations in which your plot will take place?
Felucia and Dromund Kaas
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. Include opposition type for each thread:
Thread 1(Ask/Dice): Land on Felucia, make our way to the explorer's ship
Thread 2(Ask/Dice): Retrieve the coordinates of Dromund Kaas after fighting whatever struck down the explorer.
Thread 3(Ask/Self-DM): Land on Kaas city, make our way to the tombs.
Thread 4(Aks/Self-DM):Loot lord Andros' tomb after facing whatever he had as security for his resting place
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game?” Link any items you’re seeking if applicable.
My character hopes to rediscover Dromund Kaas and retrieve the Writings of Lord Andros, which he thinks will come in handy for future expansions of the sith Eternal.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
Nope
 
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"aside from those knowledgable about Sith history or architecture, his name faded from the public light after his passing "
Lord Andros was a noteworthy person back around the Great Galactic War (3681 - 3653 BBY) so I think with it being over three thousand years his specific tomb would have even less known about along with his writtings.

I think first and foremost its more likely that someone would hear about Dromund Kaas before they heard about Lord Andros's writtings and so finding the planet could be a starting plot if its been lost from the rest of the galaxy for so long. I think that would certainly be a noteworthy thing to do in of itself but I don't think discovering an entire planet and also just doing all that just to raid a specific yet obscure sith architect's tomb at the end seems tacked on. I think a plot about hearing rumors about the specific sith architect and then going through another series of events is what's warranted for Lord Andros's writings alone.

I think it would be wise to only do one objective in a plot so making this plot about just finding Dromund Kaas with the first thread actually being about hearing the rumor of the explorer. The second can be the Felucia thread, third would be returning to their own ship and fighting the local danger, fourth would be getting to Kaas City and just setting up some kind of beacon if you want to then allow other people to come and go from there.

If you want to essentially "map" a route to Dromund Kaas, or in this case take the map of a dead man and present it as your own (re)discovery, then you can choose to keep it to yourself. That would be a character plot. But if you want to discover it and have it set up with a base for the Sith Eternal then this would probably be a Faction Plot.
 

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Well, talked with the other two participants and yeah, we are gonna make it a faction plot in order to rediscover Dromund Kaas for now.

I'll make the edits later, should I submit the plot again or can you move this thread to the faction plots?
 

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Well, talked with the other two participants and yeah, we are gonna make it a faction plot in order to rediscover Dromund Kaas for now.

I'll make the edits later, should I submit the plot again or can you move this thread to the faction plots?
I have moved it.
 

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@Versok let me know if you still want to do this plot or not. I haven't heard from you regarding this plot in some time.

edit 7/14/2020: considering abandoned
 
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