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[Sangga]

What is going to happen in your plot? - Upon entering the base, the old security system activates and the Jedi have to disarm it and defend themselves from the droids. Once this is done they find evidence of the abominations and he remains of those too slow to flee. Upon moving to the caves, the abominations will begin to swarm and the Jedi will need to secure a foothold in the caves. Finally, after deciding to delve deeper into the caves in order to root out this threat. The team will find the epicentre of this hive, the Queen. Once defeated the Jedi will finish clensing the caves of any remenants and make it back to the surface having defeated this threat to secure Ilum.

What other players will be a part of this? - @GABA @Phoenix @Plebometer

Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place? - Ilum [G-7]

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. - Thread 1 (Self-DM) having landed the team enter an old Sith base and must eliminate the security systems including droids, doing this they find why Ilum is abandoned (Think John Carpenter's The Thing/Alien). Thread 2 (Dice) will be getting to and establishing a foothold in the Crystal Caves. Thread 3 (Staff DM) will involve delving into and rooting out the Hive of Abominations, thus clensing Ilum of their Darkside taint.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"? - Secure an old base on Ilum to ensure this sacred site is available to the Jedi and the Rebellion.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. - Yes, could Thread 3 please be Staff DM'd?

 

[Nefieslab]

What is going to happen in your plot? - Thread 1 will conist on gathering on the surface, forming a campsite and establishing that there is a threat that needs to be defeated. Thread 2 will be getting to and establishing a foothold in the Crystal Caves. Thread 3 will involve delving into and rooting out the Hive of Abominations, thus clensing Ilum of their Darkside taint.

What other players will be a part of this? - @GABA @Phoenix @Plebometer

Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place? - Ilum [G-7]

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. - Setting up the base camp will reveal how much all is not well when a droid goes missing or equipment is damaged and dark shadows are seen passed the edge of the camp. Upon moving to the caves, the abominations will begin to swarm and the Jedi will need to secure a foothold in the caves. Finally, after deciding to delve deeper into the caves in order to root out this threat. The team will find the epicentre of this hive, the Queen. Once defeated the Jedi will finish clensing the caves of any remenants and make it back to the surface having defeated this threat to secure Ilum.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"? - Secure a settlement on Ilum to ensure this sacred site is available to the Jedi and the Rebellion.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. - No

Alright so this plot submission needs a lot of work man;

• Why is the timeline in the summary area and vice versa?
• Each thread needs to have an idea as to what threat level will be used; Self-DM, Player DM, Staff DM, Dice or Open PvP
• Thread 1 is literally "we talk and accept there's bad mojo" - could you maybe make it a thread of actual worth?

Finally though;

• The timeskip will be happening in roughly a month's time - do you think you can complete this plot before the timeskip?

 

[Sangga]

Thank you for the immediate response. Sorry I am no good at this plot stuff... I have given it a look over and changed according to instruction:

• Why is the timeline in the summary area and vice versa? - Swapped and edited for changes.
  
• Each thread needs to have an idea as to what threat level will be used; Self-DM, Player DM, Staff DM, Dice or Open PvP - Threads have DM requirement in brackets.
  
• Thread 1 is literally "we talk and accept there's bad mojo" - could you maybe make it a thread of actual worth? - This has been expanded to have us take an old base on the surface and have to overcome its defense network.

As for if we can, we are ready and raring to go, just need the greenlight. I have no other threads so I can get the opening going in those that don't have an external DM.

 

[Nefieslab]

Thank you for the immdeiate response. Sorry I am no good at this plot stuff... I have given it a look over and changed according to instruction:

• Why is the timeline in the summary area and vice versa? - Swapped and edited for changes.
  
• Each thread needs to have an idea as to what threat level will be used; Self-DM, Player DM, Staff DM, Dice or Open PvP - Threads have DM requirement in brackets.
  
• Thread 1 is literally "we talk and accept there's bad mojo" - could you maybe make it a thread of actual worth? - This has been expanded to have us take an old base on the surface and have to overcome its defense network.

As for if we can, we are ready and raring to go, just need the greenlight. I have no other threads so I can get the opening going in those that don't have an external DM.

Alright man, I'll approve this plot but you had better get a move on my man! This is going to need to be completed before the timeskip - I'm not going to be approving a completed plot that involves people having to do threads set like 10 years in the past after all.

With that understood?

APPROVED

 

[Sangga]

@Raydo @Darasuum

Could we possibly have one of you DM thread 3? That being the one with the big Abomination 'Queen'?

 

[Darasuum]

Sure