Independent Xaltienne

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_N A M E
XALTIENNE

_F A C T I O N
UNAFFILIATED

_R A N K
FREELANCE DOCTOR

_S P E C I E S
HUMAN

_A G E
43

_G E N D E R
MALE

_H E I G H T
6'1"

_W E I G H T
188 lb.

_B U I L D
AVERAGE

_F O R C E
UNTRAINED/UNAWARE


I N T R O

Oh, Lena Goordayr

I must declare

When you gave me pause

My heart felt a buzz

For all that I dream

Is for us to be a team

You reside in my heart

I dread when we're apart

You are my sunshine

Your body is fine

You make my day

I hope you're not gay

You leave me amazed

That you lead the crazed

You need to let loose

I'll tend to your caboose

We'll become one

When my knife is done

Let me drain you of blood

To spray a vermilion flood

I'll rip out your back

With a surprise attack

Always I will love you

Even when your lips are blue

Until you are dead

I shalt not go to bed

Good night, my love

Your bed I forever stand above​


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B I O G R A P H Y
Xaltienne was born on Iego 43 years ago. He lived with his parents in a normal livelihood, though with whispers of something being... off. He went to university in a nearby star system, where he acquired his medical license and doctorate, slightly above average for his class but nothing to parade. In the first few years after graduation, he set up a practice on Lothal.

Four years in, an epidemic broke out in his town. The Jedi brought in a Jedi healer named Lena Goordayr to assist in relief and treatment. The epidemic was quickly squashed, but it would have unknown consequences. During Goordayr's short-lived stay, Xaltienne had met the brilliant healer. He began to think of her constantly, her plaguing his mind; at times, when treating a patient, he would ponder 'what would Lena do in this situation?' Eventually he came to terms of his infatuation with the Zabrak Jedi. Over days, Xaltienne worked up the bravery to ask out the Jedi healer. However, just as he steeled his nerves, the epidemic ended and the Jedi left to tackle the next disaster, Xaltienne left without the opportunity for closure.

Over the next year, Lena Goordayr continued to haunt his dreams, bleeding into waking hours. Deciding he needed a fresh start, to get his mind off of Goordayr, he left the planet. For the next several years, he would wander from port to hub, taking on the odd job as a doctor; he even took a 2-year stint as a field medic for the Sector Rangers before he quit, feeling restless bound to one place. (Hadn't helped that he made no friends while in the Sector Rangers.) Alas, even after all this time, he could never let go of his true love. For that was what it was, in his mind. True love. They were soulmates. How come the Force didn't Goordayr tell her this? No matter.

He would.


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P E R S O N A L I T Y
At face value, one might describe Xaltienne as a manic pixie dream boy. At least that's what Xaltienne personally things. Lena would like that, right? Of course she would. They're soulmates.

In truth, Xaltienne is somewhat of a whimsical man, allowing himself to be carried by whatever carries his fancy; chief among them is his obsession with the Jedi Councilor Lena Goordayr (a woman who honestly probably has no idea he even exists). Undiagnosed with bipolar disorder, his approach-ability depends on which way the pendulum swings; he is self-medicated, debatable if successful. Some old colleagues suspect some other diagnoses burrowed away in his noggin, but nothing that could be put in writing.

Xaltienne has the charisma of a gizka, no matter what he thinks of himself. He can show a surprisingly decent bedside manner, though only for civilians. He can be quite blunt to those he deems as combat-professionals, believing they shouldn't be sugar-coated; a little rough too (at one point accidentally broke a man's arm when trying to reset the man's shoulder).


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A B I L I T I E S
Xaltienne is a trained medical physician and surgeon. He is no pediatrician, and is recommended by many medical boards not to treat children (in large part due to not always taking into account the smaller body mass when making medical decisions). He has been trained by the Sector Rangers in marksmanship, particularly a blaster pistol, though his skills are average. His melee skills can be wrapped up in the phrase "hit everything wildly with a pulse"; with a scalpel, he tends to aim for the throat.
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A S S E T S


  • Generic Outfit (may change; update will be notified to staff)
  • "Lucky" hat (picture of Lena Goordayr hidden under fabric)
  • Phrik Vibroknife
  • Vibroscalpel
  • Comlink
  • Datapad
  • Medic-grade Medpack

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T H R E A D S

1. Galaxy in Crisis {Coruscant}
 
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Might want to tweek your coding a bit since the first few categories look misaligned.

Can you give an approximate weight for Xal?

Can you expand on what may have been the cause for him to be dishonorably discharged? That seems glossed over but still something that is worth explaining.
 

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Might want to tweek your coding a bit since the first few categories look misaligned.

Can you give an approximate weight for Xal?

Can you expand on what may have been the cause for him to be dishonorably discharged? That seems glossed over but still something that is worth explaining.
The coding's off? I'm not seeing any problems.

Not sure how I missed weight. Added.

Honestly, hadn't thought of a concrete reason. Kinda just envisioned he was doing a lot of creepy things and eventually something was the final straw.
 
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