Sith Empire Yaerius

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YAERIUS

AGE

► 26
SPECIES
► Human
HEIGHT
► 6'3"
WEIGHT
► 217 lbs
EYE COLOR
► Green
HAIR COLOR
► Blonde
HOMEWORLD
► Iego
GENDER
► XY
FACTION
► Sith Empire
RANK
► Inquisitor - Black Hand / Sicarii
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes
BIOGRAPHY


Yaerius the Wraith, or commonly just Yaerius was a human male, force sensitive who lived during the Force Eternal era. He served as a Sicarri / Black Hand Inquisitor for the Sith Empire. His real name was Bradford Algo and was born to an upper middle class family during economic prosperity on Iego. There was strong affiliation with the Sith Eternal cultists in his family, Bradford as a young child vaguely remember men dressed in darkened robes converging at odd hours of the night in his basement lair. He didn't think much of it at that point but as he grew older, the choice to join the Sith Academy on Dromund Kaas was all but out of his hands. Bradford had no qualms however, his own force sensitivity becoming apparent at a young age, he pursued his Imperial education with enthusiasm and dedication.

A rigorous selection process testing his force aptitudes as well as both firearm and unarmed/lightsaber combat prowess brought him into the final selection candidates for Inquisitorious. Out of an initial class of almost 50 applicants, only five were chosen to fill the five current functioning houses. Chosen by Master Inquisitor Tyrael, Bradford re-located to Adumar so that he could complete his acolyte training. As a component of his decision to venture in the path of the Sicarii was learning several unarmed methodology, including the work of Matukai. As with any covert operations and assassinations, it was imperative that these Inquisitors' deadliness did not diminish even in the absence of their weapons.

Upon completion, the identity of Bradford Algo is essentially vanished, relegated to memories that only his closet family and friends may share. While he may still be in touch with them on a personal level, as far as all Imperial connections are concerned, Yaerius is of sole importance.

EQUIPMENT
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+ Sith Warblade - Sith Swords were often the weapon of ancient Sith Lords and even today are used by certain Sith who prefer the feeling of cutting flesh with a blade rather than plasma. The weapon is forged and enhanced with Sith Alchemy, capable of withstanding lightsaber blows indefinitely and can both block and deflect blaster bolts.
+ Inquisitor Robes
+ Computer spike
+ Datapad
+ Comlink
+ Recording Device
+ Upsilon Shuttle
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The sword you're using is a unique weapon, effectively an artifact, so would need to be earned through RP instead of just being tossed into a bio. And your armor might need some work as well, because your bio doens't really have any justification for having a pair of matukai gauntlets. From the matukai gauntlet write-up "One would likely need to either be a Matukai or (if not) have a good explanation why they even know that these exist if they are going to use them." The Matukai tradition is pretty niche, so you'll either have to explain how he learned it, or ditch the gauntlets. If you're already going for a sword then you probably don't need the gauntlets as they're meant to be for exclusively hand to hand combatants.
 

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The sword you're using is a unique weapon, effectively an artifact, so would need to be earned through RP instead of just being tossed into a bio. And your armor might need some work as well, because your bio doens't really have any justification for having a pair of matukai gauntlets. From the matukai gauntlet write-up "One would likely need to either be a Matukai or (if not) have a good explanation why they even know that these exist if they are going to use them." The Matukai tradition is pretty niche, so you'll either have to explain how he learned it, or ditch the gauntlets. If you're already going for a sword then you probably don't need the gauntlets as they're meant to be for exclusively hand to hand combatants.

I was a little surprised by the sword but its in the tech section and not the artifact section, so I wasn't sure if it was meant as a generic piece of technology anyone could use or it had to be pursued like other artifacts. Hmm, fair points on the gauntlets.

But anyways, I made some changes.
 
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@Faded Please remove the Matukai gauntlets. Yaerius isn't from the Matukai or a similar tradition, isn't trained to fight like them, etc. He can learn some of the martial arts they practice, but that's not the same as being one. The bio shows him to be a swordsman as-is.
 

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@Faded Please remove the Matukai gauntlets. Yaerius isn't from the Matukai or a similar tradition, isn't trained to fight like them, etc. He can learn some of the martial arts they practice, but that's not the same as being one. The bio shows him to be a swordsman as-is.

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