Ziare Hibliss

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NAME: Ziare Hibliss (Zee-Are Heb-Liss)
FACTION: The Jedi Knights
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Sensitive and Trained

APPEARANCE:
Ziare stands at 6'1", Weighs 78Kg, has Brown eyes, White hair and Pale skin. However most of these features are hidden behind his helmet, which completely blocks his sense of sight.

ATTRIBUTES:
Ziare has gained a heightened sense of hearing and touch due to his training without the use of sight. He has a habit of often being rather blunt and straightforward, which usually leads to him often offending people. He has shown quick reflexes and decision making ability but his attacks seem unfocused and sometimes even weak. He has gotten described in the past as "Book smart but blessed with the Social grace of a Gungan." Ziare also struggles to absorb hits from his opponents yet his high stamina allows him to keep his defenses up for extended periods of time. He also has an innate ability to tell when others are lying to him, this stems from his interactions with his Dark Side Corrupted Brother.

Numbers wise:
Strength: 4/10
Dexterity: 5/10
Intelligence: 8/10
Wisdom: 9/10
Constitution: 3/10
Defense: 10/10
Charisma: 2/10

PERSONALITY:
Ziare tends to remain quite distant from other people, always giving the impression that he isn't exactly talking to you. He also has a habit of occasionally looking up at the Sun/Moon and commenting on its appearance, even though he can't see it. Ziare speaks very directly and does not like to dodge around volatile topics, preferring instead to speak his mind. He struggles to open up to people and tries to avoid personal conversations. In combat he fights defensively, preferring to outlast his opponent rather than overpower them. He also possesses an annoying habit of humming during silences.

The thing Ziare fears most is responsibility, having someone or something relying on him puts him in a state of perpetual panic, though he does his best to hides this it has a habit of slipping through the cracks. He considers the virtue of patience to be overrated and unnecessary, believing that inaction is the first step in destruction. Ziare tends to overuse the word 'Exciting' and even winds up using it in situations where it makes little to no sense, for example "This food tastes exciting!" or "This weather is so exciting!" The young Knight regards loneliness as one of the worst things any creature can face and considers it the lowest point of misery. His greatest regret is not being able to save his sister. He has said that when it comes time for him to die, he'd like to be thrown into a beast pit with nothing but his bare hands and the force to fight with, just to see how far he'd get.

(Many thanks to Zenya for helping me flesh out his personality more.)

BIOGRAPHY:

Born as the Eldest of a set of triplets to a common family on Ilum, Ziare often kept to himself whilst his two siblings often went out to mingle with other children. Throughout his childhood, he wanted to be close to his brother Kaeos and his sister Ioniel but could never figure out how to approach them as he shared little to none of their interests, because of this he isolated himself away for most of his early years. A few weeks after their Eighth birthday Ioniel fell ill to an unknown disease, and whilst the doctors tried everything they could, eventually she passed on. After this, Ziare devoted himself to study of the force, a power he had found reference to in the local archives, he put endless hours into studying if there was a certain technique to bring the deceased back to life. A whole year of fruitless endeavor eventually lead to him wanting to join the Jedi Order, Masters of the force, he presumed if he could manage to join this order then perhaps he could manage to find the secret to Resurrection. Over time however, Ziare began to notice Kaeos isolating himself, this was way out of the ordinary for the brother but then again he had not been the same since Ionel's death. Deciding to inform his brother of the things he had found, the two decided they would join the order together, and bring their sister back.

And so the two brothers trained almost every hour of every day, using metal poles as dueling weapons and trying to form a stronger connection with the force as they both had an existing bond. Whilst Ziare near constantly defeated his brother in their duels, Kaeos showed a far greater aptitude with the force than his elder twin, after two years of training with each other they decided to request a meeting with one of the Jedi masters, hoping to show they were worth giving formal training. After a short demonstration the Jedi master informed them that he was impressed, but also gave them some bad news. The Jedi explained that he would bring Ziare to the temple for training, but he would not bring Kaeos as he sensed the anger lurking within his heart. Outraged, Kaeos swore that he would never forgive the Jedi nor Ziare for this betrayal and vowed that he would bring Ioniel back himself. After that Ziare only saw his brother once more, the hood of an escaping sith slipped off and displayed the unmistakable eyes of his brother. What Ziare had seen troubled him greatly, and became part of the reason that he began training without eyesight, so that if he ever had to face Kaeos in combat, he wouldn't have to look him in the eye. Under instruction from the Jedi Council, Ziare long ago abandoned his goal of resurrecting his deceased sister, as they worried his obsession would be his undoing, hesitantly, he accepted. Today Ziare has long finished his training and stands among the ranks of the Order's knights. He hasn't encountered Kaeos since that day, but he knows that his brother is still out there.

It was not long after his full initiation as a knight of the Jedi order that he was given a mission that would wind up changing the course of his future. On the way back from a simple escort mission Ziare was forced to make a pit stop on the desert planet of Tatooine to refuel and recharge. Whilst wandering about the market, the Knight bumped into a young girl and her sister. This girl, whose name he later found out was Lanna, was sensitive to the force. So after talking it over with her parents, he brought her before the Jedi council to try and find her a teacher. For reasons unknown to Ziare, they assigned the Girl to him, and though he was at first hesitant, he has since grown a strong bond with Lanna, and the two contrast each other well. Though the idea of the responsibility he has for her still terrifies him secretly.

He did approach the order about a potential force ability to revive his Sister, and after much hesitation and argument, they convinced him to let his Sister be at peace, there was no force ability that powerful. At least...that's what they told him.



SKILLS:
- Expert Duelist
- Master of Soresu form.
- Skilled in use of Force abilities that have enhancing properties, such as Force Speed.
- Quick reflexes
- Employs various defensive techniques such as:
. Saber Cross Barrier - He places both his lightsabers together in an X pattern which more strongly hold against enemy strikes.
. 'Give no ground' - A technique he himself invented, he embeds one saber in the ground whilst defending with the other, the embedded lightsaber gives him a stable platform with which to outmanouevre his opponent without giving them any ground.
. Clash Ender - If his saber becomes locked with an enemy saber for an extended period of time he will quickly switch off his sabers and spin out of the way before swiftly re-igniting them and taking down his foe while they recover. (He doesn't employ this often because of its risky nature.)

GEAR:
- Armoured helmet that blocks sense of sight
- White robes that cover a silver armoured chestplate
- 2 Light Blue coloured Lightsabers, his left blade has a bulky top and bottom with a thin middle portion for grip, it is Silver with minor gold trim. His right blade is slightly greyish, skinnier and has a short metallic 'blade' that runs perpendicular to the bottom part of the laser portion, the name 'Ioniel' is engraved on this Saber.

ROLE-PLAYS:


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RELATIONSHIPS:
- His Brother Kaeos, who has been corrupted by the Dark side of the Force, Estimated relationship level, 2%
- His Padawan, Lanna Singh, Estimated relationship level, 87%


SHIP:

He does not currently own his own ship.

DROIDS:
He does not currently own any droids.

PETS:
He does not currently own any pets.

KILLS:
0 Confirmed kills so far

COMBAT:
None
 
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Really cool! I like his backstory a lot, and I would love to hear more about him, eventually. :)
 

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Oh gee, thanks :oops:, I was expecting this to be someone telling me something I need to fix. I would love to rp with you at any point and maybe eventually I will actually think of more to tell you :P
 

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If you want critiques, all I would say is I'm super curious about more of his personality o3o
And great! I'm excited to RP with you too~
 

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Yeah, personality is always a weakpoint for me when it comes to characters, as I tend to work it out more after actually using them.

And if you're happy to post the start, I'll happily Rp with you immediately-ish

(Simply because I'm not good at starts *cries*)

Edit: I'd also like to read up on your character, could you drop a link since I'm too lazy to find it. :P
 

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Well, at the moment I am characterless, but I would be more than happy to role play once I have one! I'm currently trying to decide if I would rather be a sith, or a Jedi .___.
Oh, and if you want, I can try to help you out with your character's personality. I don't know how it would work, but we can figure something out I'm sure.
 

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I've booted up a conversation if you want to talk more about it. :)
 

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The only thing I would be hesitant on is that when he was brought to the Jedi Order, he truly in his heart gave up the dream of resurrecting his sister. As I am sure the Jedi would sense that if this were not the case.
 

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Alright, I will tweak it a bit so it makes more sense.
 

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The only thing I would be hesitant on is that when he was brought to the Jedi Order, he truly in his heart gave up the dream of resurrecting his sister. As I am sure the Jedi would sense that if this were not the case.
I've added in a small extra part that explains it, to sum up, he was informed there was no such force ability, and was convinced to stop pursuing the idea.
 

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Quite an interesting character, I like how he chose to face the world blind so he never had to look at his brother again.

My only comment would be you might want to expand on his dueling techniques a bit more. It's not required, but since he's very good at it you'll probably be fighting lightsaber to lightsaber a lot. It makes a much more consistent fighting style if you des orbs it in your character sheet.
 

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Quite an interesting character, I like how he chose to face the world blind so he never had to look at his brother again.

My only comment would be you might want to expand on his dueling techniques a bit more. It's not required, but since he's very good at it you'll probably be fighting lightsaber to lightsaber a lot. It makes a much more consistent fighting style if you des orbs it in your character sheet.

I will certainly act on these changes as soon as I have time, apologies for not noticing your comment sooner.
 
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