No problem they would advice you if you need to edit it when you put it on the sign up thread and they see it. But from what I saw it seems your character would be accepted
Hey if you want I can be your characters recruiter into the Jedi order once he is accepted just need to go to the New Jedi order forum and place your jedi's profile in the sign up thread, than we can go and do a thread getting your character formally into the order