Toxic Force: Punctuation in/around quotes; *mysterious; *tread; period at the end of a sentence; capitalization; *wondered
It's actually best not to speak so colloquially so regularly. (ex. 'way longer,' 'heavily packed at all,' etc.) It has its uses, but try to realize when you're using colloquial language and that it has a purpose other than simply describing something because it usually can be described with greater clarity in a more formal manner.
Oi, contradictory to what others may say, there ARE actual books in the Jedi archives. The Jedi understand that some enjoy actually leafing through pages and many recent, up-to-date and current personal diaries are handwritten books, not stupid holocrons.
Just popping in to say that so others do not confuse you.