Allana Bestir

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NAME: Allana Bestir
FACTION: Republic
RANK: Recruit
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5’ 4’’
WEIGHT: 112lbs
EYES: Piercing green
HAIR: Bright orange
SKIN: Pale tan
CREDITS: 540
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scars all along her arms from cutting herself
DOMINATE HAND: Left
FORCE SENSITIVE: Barely

STRENGTH: Allana is very strong for a small woman. She tries to not be the weakest link on a team no matter what. 8/10
DEXTERITY: As a field medic, Allana knows the value of being fast. She trains daily to be sure she is as fast as she can be. 7/10
CONSTITUTION: Her health isn’t the best it could be because of her attempts to commit suicide at a young age. She takes a long time to heal from injuries, but rarely gets sick. 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: She takes some time to figure things out, and isn’t the brightest person around. She can be fooled easily, but not all of the time. 5/10
WISDOM: Allana may not be the smartest, but she has a lot of common sense. She knows better than to do something completely stupid, and will try and figure out a way to do what is needed that is smarter. 9/10
CHARISMA: She has very limited people skills, and isn’t good at motivating people to listen to her. She prefers to be a follower, and doesn’t want to lead anything. 3/10

SKILLS:
Allana is a very adept medic; she knows what she’s doing, even under pressure. Precision shooting, if needed Allana can be very precise with a fire arm.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Her overconfidence in her abilities can get her into trouble. She takes unnecessary risks, and doesn’t analyze the area before committing to do something. Also, her hyperactive nature is a bit of a problem for most people, she can’t stay still. Her willingness to be helpful is a strength that has helped her; she will never give up on anything as long as a companion is still fighting for it. She wants to help them, and won’t desert them.

GEAR: Allana keeps a few viroblades in her belt, and a viro knife in her boot. Wears slightly worn clothes that are mostly black, and she has a small slug thrower pistol.

SHIP: None

PETS: None

PERSONALITY:
Allana is a very shy person, and it takes a lot for her to open up to someone completely. She’ll talk to them when someone starts to speak with her, and may get very animated in the conversation. However, she won’t completely confide what’s she’s thinking to them. She is hyperactive, and needs something to do most of the time. She can never sit still, and her hyperactivity gets worse when she’s nervous or something is bugging her. It does calm down though when she calms down, but it never goes away. Allana is a very apologetic person, so if she thinks she’s upset someone or done something wrong, she won’t stop apologizing for a while. Around her, the word “sorry” can be a lot of trouble.

HISTORY:
Allana had a very troubled childhood on Coruscant; her mom was always getting a divorce of some kind, and had way too many boyfriends to count. This caused Allana to be put on the wayside while her mom went out being a slut. Allana was taken care of by her neighbors in the complex that she lived in since that’s where her mom would dump her off when she went out to party. Allana was raised by them, and competed with their three boys in everything. This continued up until Allana was 13, when her real father finally got wind of what his ex-wife was doing. He took her away from her mother and her neighbors, to live with him in the complex next door.

Allana didn’t live better with her father. He was always too busy with work, since he now had to take care of Allana. He started to work multiple jobs to take care of her and the family that he had. Meanwhile, Allana continued to go over to her old neighbors’ residence. She and the boys had grown close, like brothers and sister. She grew stronger by hanging out with them, but one night when her father came home, he found out that she wasn’t there. When she got home, he forbade her from going over there again, and moved his family far away from them.

This caused Allana to fall into depression. When she was 17, she started to cut herself because she missed the boys who were her brothers. She hadn’t seen them for 2 years. She did this for about a year before her step-mom caught her, and put her into therapy. After staying in therapy for a whole two years, Allana finally started to come out of her depression. A month later, she was released from the facility. As soon as she was released, Allana knew she needed to enlist. They boys said they were going to when they were younger. They’d be there, and she’d be home again.

KILLS: None
DUELING RING MATCHES: None
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: None
ROLE-PLAYS:
 

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DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scars all along her arms from cutting herself

CONSTITUTION: Her health isn’t the best it could be because of her attempts to commit suicide at a young age. She takes a long time to heal from injuries, but rarely gets sick. 4/10

This caused Allana to fall into depression. When she was 17, she started to cut herself because she missed the boys who were her brothers.

I don't believe even Masq has done something like this yet. Original.


Not a bad character. Pretty evened out with abilities.
 

Ser Yorick

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I hope this isn't you in Star Wars-form.
 

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You say she is 9/10 wise, which is like Confucious wise...and she cuts herself? What?
 

Ser Yorick

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I liked the "I am Boxxy, you see?" expression better.
 

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CRAWWWWLLING IN MY SKIIINNNN!

THESE WOUNDS, THEY WILL NOT HEAAAAALLLL!!

q.q
 

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CRAWWWWLLING IN MY SKIIINNNN!

THESE WOUNDS, THEY WILL NOT HEAAAAALLLL!!

q.q

FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR IS HOW I FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL
CONFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSING WHAT IS REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAL.

x.x
 

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Seriously though, she's applying for the Republic military? Don't you think the recruiters would screen for psychological issues?
 
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