Sithmyth99
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@Wit Yo I'd like approval for former affliation with the Jedi, under the rank Padawan. Does it fit, or do I need to change anything?
NAME
"Auri Valelei, the one and only. But please, feel free to call me 'Captain'. Makes me feel all jazzy.”
FACTION
“I go Indie these days. But once upon a time, I was with the Jedi Order. ”
RANK
“I used to be a Jedi Padawan. Now? Well, I like to think of myself as a Captain. Of my own ship. With a crew of two crew members. Both of which like to deny being a part of my crew. But, hey, maybe someday I’ll be a real pirate captain.”
SPECIES
“I’m Tholothian.”
HOMEWORLD
“Born and raised on Devaron. My parents emigrated from Tholoth.”
AGE
“17 standard years.”
GENDER
“I'm a girl. ”
FORCE SENSITIVE
“Yeah, I’m force sensitive. That’s probably screwed me up more than anything. Had I not had an excess of midichlorians floating around in me, I’d probably still be living a happy life as an actress. Being force sensitive just made me an outcast on all fronts. A weirdo among the normal and untalented among the Jedi. Never even finished my training.”
APPEARANCE
“I’m nothing too special in the looks department, but I don’t think I’m an eyesore, either. I’m quite tall, around 1.8 meters (5’11) and I weigh about 140 lbs. I’ve got an athletic build, a squarish face, olive complexion, and indigo eyes. My tentacles are pale with a purple hue and I always wear my Tholothian Headress. These days, I wear an old tricorn hat....one of the two hats my old best friend and I found together back before...before she left. Anyway, I usually wear that and some variation of vests, shirts, hoods, and robes. The Jedi have awful taste in clothing, but their style sort of grew on me. "
"That's me, towards the end of my time as a padawan."
ATTRIBUTES
"I'm clever. I've always been good at improvising, both on stage and and in life and death scenarios. I think fast on my feet and I'm creative. In combat, I'm swift and strong. I connect well with other beings and I've got a knack for reading them, understanding them, and manipulating them. I lie skillfully and effortlessly. I am an excellent actress and my theatrics have saved me more than once. As a general rule, my emotions are my strength, and if I can pour them into something, I will usually find success. I have fairly accurate instincts and I make judgments based more on my feelings that whats rational. I might not be all that educationally intelligent, but I am very people smart and extroverted. I'm a great leader, I know how to take charge, be assertive, and inspire others.
I'm terribly unorganized, never prepared, and awful with planning things. I'm rather lacking in the common sense department. In combat, I lack balance and aim. I'm awful with technology. I'm not very logical and good with things like science and math. I'm a terrible pilot. I don't have a lot of self control. I take things too far and easily get carried away. I rarely ever feel guilt or remorse for my actions, though I know I should. I'm not all that great with lightsaber combat, though I can hold my own against blasters, and a few unskilled light saber wielders. I don't know when to stop and push myself to dangerous limits. I quickly become restless and discontent in peaceful situations and have a damaging craving for adventure."
PERSONALITY
"I've been told I'm vivacious. I have a deep passion inside me that pours through everything I do. I'm very extroverted, I connect well with others, and I'm a natural leader. I am cunning and deceptive. I'm pretty charismatic and charming. I am a dreamer, adventurous and restless. I've got a highly creative mind. I've got a love of acting, and I have a tendency to break into song or quote various characters at random moments. I'm loud, a bit rude, and to some, highly overbearing. My mind is always active and racing, so peace and focus are almost foreign to me. I'm very messy, instinctual, and I typically wing my way through life rather than planning things. "
BIOGRAPHY
"I remember that once, when I was a Jedi Youngling, my best friend, Iraphi Odine and I, were outside the Temple of Eedit, playing pretend. We found two, old, tricorn hats tied together with string, all caught up in a tree. We worked together to get them down and each kept one of them, using them in our games. We made up names for each other; I was Captain Candelaria and she was Captain Aurelei. We promised each other that someday, we would run away together, to become pirates.
I never forgot that promise I made. After all, I had never felt as close to another being as I did with Iraphi. When I first came into the Jedi Order, things were difficult. Most of the other younglings in my clan had spent the first 7 years of their life training, I had spent mine acting. Everything that people used to love me for, my passion, my theatrics, were now looked down upon. I didn’t have the peace or focus required for much of the Jedi training, and I was desperately behind. Iraphi was my first and only friend in the Jedi Order. She, too, didn’t fit in with the Jedi. She was ambitious and outspoken. So, we stuck together, and Iraphi made my time with the Jedi a bit more bearable.
Of course, I wouldn’t have been in the situation in the first place, had my mother not gone psycho on Crude and tried to remove and sell one of my kidneys. My mom was the last thing standing in the way of me and the Jedi Order. When I was born, the blood tests ran on me in the hospital showed qualifying levels of midichlorians. The Jedi just kept coming and coming, trying to recruit me, but my stubborn mother refused, even withstanding their mind tricks. But after she lost it….the Jedi had an excuse to whisk me off, away from unstable mother who clearly wasn’t an adequate caretaker.
But I understand what happened to her, to an extent. A few months before I was born, my father died. She always refused to talk about him, but she didn’t need to. I could already tell he was her everything. She never quite figured out how cope with her grief. I hardly ever saw her, as a kid. She was almost always off at a bar, drinking and gambling away. Me, I was a painful reminder of the lover and the future she lost, so I get why she left me with our neighbor all the time to be babysat. Had she not, I probably wouldn't have had an acting career.
Despite my mom always being gone, I had a fairly happy childhood. I loved playing pretend. I remember making up small plays and performances for all my neighbors ever since I was only a few years old. Apparently, I showed a genuinely surprising amount of talent at a young age and word spread. I got invited to an audition for a holocomedy, and I got the part. They signed me up with a deal and my mother happily agreed. It was a great opportunity to distance herself from me, and 'borrow' my earnings to buy more of the heavy stuff, like Glitterstim. I loved my acting career! It was so fun and perhaps the happiest times of my life. It earned me the nickname 'Darling of Devaron'.
Of course, when I ended up in the temple. That all changed. I hated life in the temple. So. Very. Much. So did my friend Iraphi, and when we promised to someday run away together, I thought we were serious. But when we graduated and became padawans, we drifted a bit, in our separate ways. But I never forgot her. I have to say, I grew into a reasonably good Jedi. I hated everything about the Jedi life, but I was good at hiding that. I grew extremely adept with Jedi mind tricks, it came almost naturally. My master would often take me on diplomatic missions, as I was very...persuasive. But secretly, the only reason I was still there was Iraphi. But it was only a few weeks ago that everything changed.
"Jedi Temple of Eedit on Devaron."
Iraphi had been acting strange and one night, she snuck out of the temple to a mysterious ship. She must have been finally running away, I assumed, though I was a little hurt she was leaving without me. I snuck aboard and confronted her about it, but there was something wrong with her. Iraphi's eyes were a fiery scarlet and they coarsed with hatred. She was shocked and furious with me for following her and dismissed our old promise as a silly child thing. She demanded that I leave her, but I refused to abandon my best friend. She pulled out a red lightsaber in an almost possessed manner and tried to kill me. We fought and I almost lost, she kicked my butt when it came to lightsaber combat, but I attacked her mentally and was able to escape with most of me in one piece. She left me with 1.5 hands, but thats alright. It could have been worse.
I returned to the Temple of Eedit, but those pompous jerks on the Jedi Council refused to let me or anyone else go to look for her or assist her. They dismissed the incident as her being a traitor of her own free will who had turned to the dark side and would be arrested, if she ever surfaced. But that wasn't enough for me. There was something wrong with Iraphi, she needed help. I could feel it.
Not long after, some rough looking Devaronian bounty hunter, who just got out of prison came looking for his little sister..Iraphi. The Jedi wouldn't help him much, but this guy was my chance to go find Iraphi and start my future as a pirate. I could use him on my crew. Together, we could find her.
There was nothing for me in the Jedi life. I was done. Permanently. I attempted to sneak out, but my old master caught me and tried to talk me into staying. I refused, and they told me that the old way I was leaving was if I bested them in a duel, which, of course, there was no way I could do. I didn't even pull out my lightsaber. I imagine they thought I was surrendering as I walked up to them...and then proceeded to throw my fist in their face, knocking them unconscious. I shoved my padawan beads up their nostrils and left to catch up with Illev Odine. He was one of the few people who almost immediately found me obnoxious, but we made an agreement to work together to find his sister."
SKILLS
“As far as gear goes, I don’t really have much. Just a standard lightsaber with an indigo blade I kept back from my time as a Jedi.”
RELATIONSHIPS
Illev Odine- "Illev is my...shall we say ally? I really don't know him all that well yet, but I hold a reasonably deep respect for the guy, though he doesn't seem to like me at all. But regardless, he's a member of my crew whether he wants to be or not and right now we're united by a common goal. Find my best friend and his sister, Iraphi Odine."
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/illev-odine.72658/
SHIP
“Ahhh, The Indigo Star. I love her. She’s a Rim-Dancer Trade Vessel I talked someone into giving me just a bit after I left the Jedi Order. She’s a little small and cheap, but she’s swift and maneuverable. This baby can compete with even some low end starfighters.”
DROIDS
“I’m not very fond of droids. They’re difficult to manipulate and, well, I’m more of a people person. But I’m awful with technology and I have no idea how to fly my new ship, The Indigo Star, so I ‘borrowed’ a GE3 protocol droid to pilot it. B9-A9 is his name, but I only call him that when I’m angry. Generally, I just call him Eivo. He’s judgmental, rude, and antagonistic, but he’s a dang good pilot, so I don’t really have any choice but to keep him around as part of my crew.
NAME
"Auri Valelei, the one and only. But please, feel free to call me 'Captain'. Makes me feel all jazzy.”
FACTION
“I go Indie these days. But once upon a time, I was with the Jedi Order. ”
RANK
“I used to be a Jedi Padawan. Now? Well, I like to think of myself as a Captain. Of my own ship. With a crew of two crew members. Both of which like to deny being a part of my crew. But, hey, maybe someday I’ll be a real pirate captain.”
SPECIES
“I’m Tholothian.”
HOMEWORLD
“Born and raised on Devaron. My parents emigrated from Tholoth.”
AGE
“17 standard years.”
GENDER
“I'm a girl. ”
FORCE SENSITIVE
“Yeah, I’m force sensitive. That’s probably screwed me up more than anything. Had I not had an excess of midichlorians floating around in me, I’d probably still be living a happy life as an actress. Being force sensitive just made me an outcast on all fronts. A weirdo among the normal and untalented among the Jedi. Never even finished my training.”
APPEARANCE
“I’m nothing too special in the looks department, but I don’t think I’m an eyesore, either. I’m quite tall, around 1.8 meters (5’11) and I weigh about 140 lbs. I’ve got an athletic build, a squarish face, olive complexion, and indigo eyes. My tentacles are pale with a purple hue and I always wear my Tholothian Headress. These days, I wear an old tricorn hat....one of the two hats my old best friend and I found together back before...before she left. Anyway, I usually wear that and some variation of vests, shirts, hoods, and robes. The Jedi have awful taste in clothing, but their style sort of grew on me. "
"That's me, towards the end of my time as a padawan."
ATTRIBUTES
"I'm clever. I've always been good at improvising, both on stage and and in life and death scenarios. I think fast on my feet and I'm creative. In combat, I'm swift and strong. I connect well with other beings and I've got a knack for reading them, understanding them, and manipulating them. I lie skillfully and effortlessly. I am an excellent actress and my theatrics have saved me more than once. As a general rule, my emotions are my strength, and if I can pour them into something, I will usually find success. I have fairly accurate instincts and I make judgments based more on my feelings that whats rational. I might not be all that educationally intelligent, but I am very people smart and extroverted. I'm a great leader, I know how to take charge, be assertive, and inspire others.
I'm terribly unorganized, never prepared, and awful with planning things. I'm rather lacking in the common sense department. In combat, I lack balance and aim. I'm awful with technology. I'm not very logical and good with things like science and math. I'm a terrible pilot. I don't have a lot of self control. I take things too far and easily get carried away. I rarely ever feel guilt or remorse for my actions, though I know I should. I'm not all that great with lightsaber combat, though I can hold my own against blasters, and a few unskilled light saber wielders. I don't know when to stop and push myself to dangerous limits. I quickly become restless and discontent in peaceful situations and have a damaging craving for adventure."
PERSONALITY
"I've been told I'm vivacious. I have a deep passion inside me that pours through everything I do. I'm very extroverted, I connect well with others, and I'm a natural leader. I am cunning and deceptive. I'm pretty charismatic and charming. I am a dreamer, adventurous and restless. I've got a highly creative mind. I've got a love of acting, and I have a tendency to break into song or quote various characters at random moments. I'm loud, a bit rude, and to some, highly overbearing. My mind is always active and racing, so peace and focus are almost foreign to me. I'm very messy, instinctual, and I typically wing my way through life rather than planning things. "
BIOGRAPHY
"I remember that once, when I was a Jedi Youngling, my best friend, Iraphi Odine and I, were outside the Temple of Eedit, playing pretend. We found two, old, tricorn hats tied together with string, all caught up in a tree. We worked together to get them down and each kept one of them, using them in our games. We made up names for each other; I was Captain Candelaria and she was Captain Aurelei. We promised each other that someday, we would run away together, to become pirates.
I never forgot that promise I made. After all, I had never felt as close to another being as I did with Iraphi. When I first came into the Jedi Order, things were difficult. Most of the other younglings in my clan had spent the first 7 years of their life training, I had spent mine acting. Everything that people used to love me for, my passion, my theatrics, were now looked down upon. I didn’t have the peace or focus required for much of the Jedi training, and I was desperately behind. Iraphi was my first and only friend in the Jedi Order. She, too, didn’t fit in with the Jedi. She was ambitious and outspoken. So, we stuck together, and Iraphi made my time with the Jedi a bit more bearable.
Of course, I wouldn’t have been in the situation in the first place, had my mother not gone psycho on Crude and tried to remove and sell one of my kidneys. My mom was the last thing standing in the way of me and the Jedi Order. When I was born, the blood tests ran on me in the hospital showed qualifying levels of midichlorians. The Jedi just kept coming and coming, trying to recruit me, but my stubborn mother refused, even withstanding their mind tricks. But after she lost it….the Jedi had an excuse to whisk me off, away from unstable mother who clearly wasn’t an adequate caretaker.
But I understand what happened to her, to an extent. A few months before I was born, my father died. She always refused to talk about him, but she didn’t need to. I could already tell he was her everything. She never quite figured out how cope with her grief. I hardly ever saw her, as a kid. She was almost always off at a bar, drinking and gambling away. Me, I was a painful reminder of the lover and the future she lost, so I get why she left me with our neighbor all the time to be babysat. Had she not, I probably wouldn't have had an acting career.
Despite my mom always being gone, I had a fairly happy childhood. I loved playing pretend. I remember making up small plays and performances for all my neighbors ever since I was only a few years old. Apparently, I showed a genuinely surprising amount of talent at a young age and word spread. I got invited to an audition for a holocomedy, and I got the part. They signed me up with a deal and my mother happily agreed. It was a great opportunity to distance herself from me, and 'borrow' my earnings to buy more of the heavy stuff, like Glitterstim. I loved my acting career! It was so fun and perhaps the happiest times of my life. It earned me the nickname 'Darling of Devaron'.
Of course, when I ended up in the temple. That all changed. I hated life in the temple. So. Very. Much. So did my friend Iraphi, and when we promised to someday run away together, I thought we were serious. But when we graduated and became padawans, we drifted a bit, in our separate ways. But I never forgot her. I have to say, I grew into a reasonably good Jedi. I hated everything about the Jedi life, but I was good at hiding that. I grew extremely adept with Jedi mind tricks, it came almost naturally. My master would often take me on diplomatic missions, as I was very...persuasive. But secretly, the only reason I was still there was Iraphi. But it was only a few weeks ago that everything changed.
"Jedi Temple of Eedit on Devaron."
Iraphi had been acting strange and one night, she snuck out of the temple to a mysterious ship. She must have been finally running away, I assumed, though I was a little hurt she was leaving without me. I snuck aboard and confronted her about it, but there was something wrong with her. Iraphi's eyes were a fiery scarlet and they coarsed with hatred. She was shocked and furious with me for following her and dismissed our old promise as a silly child thing. She demanded that I leave her, but I refused to abandon my best friend. She pulled out a red lightsaber in an almost possessed manner and tried to kill me. We fought and I almost lost, she kicked my butt when it came to lightsaber combat, but I attacked her mentally and was able to escape with most of me in one piece. She left me with 1.5 hands, but thats alright. It could have been worse.
I returned to the Temple of Eedit, but those pompous jerks on the Jedi Council refused to let me or anyone else go to look for her or assist her. They dismissed the incident as her being a traitor of her own free will who had turned to the dark side and would be arrested, if she ever surfaced. But that wasn't enough for me. There was something wrong with Iraphi, she needed help. I could feel it.
Not long after, some rough looking Devaronian bounty hunter, who just got out of prison came looking for his little sister..Iraphi. The Jedi wouldn't help him much, but this guy was my chance to go find Iraphi and start my future as a pirate. I could use him on my crew. Together, we could find her.
There was nothing for me in the Jedi life. I was done. Permanently. I attempted to sneak out, but my old master caught me and tried to talk me into staying. I refused, and they told me that the old way I was leaving was if I bested them in a duel, which, of course, there was no way I could do. I didn't even pull out my lightsaber. I imagine they thought I was surrendering as I walked up to them...and then proceeded to throw my fist in their face, knocking them unconscious. I shoved my padawan beads up their nostrils and left to catch up with Illev Odine. He was one of the few people who almost immediately found me obnoxious, but we made an agreement to work together to find his sister."
SKILLS
- "Mind Tricks is massive strength of mine. I was never successful at very many force abilities, but mind tricks came naturally to me. I generally practice force persuasion, force mind control, and force fear, though the latter two are more exhausting. I'm extremely adept with these and even the Jedi were impressed with my progress in this area. "
- "My charisma has saved me more that once. I know how to charm, inspire, and manipulate. Reading people has always come easy to me, but I've worked hard to fine tune my charisma. I tend to tie my mind trick and acting skills into it, to a high rate of success. "
- "My acting abilities even surprise myself sometimes. I am an excellent performer, capable of easily getting into character, and portraying an immense amount of emotions."
- "Lightsaber Combat....definitely not my strong suit, but I do know more than your average Joe. I can practice the basics of Form V and deflect some blasters, and maybe...and I mean maybe, hold my ground against equally untalented lightsaber wielders. None of the forms taught to me ever really stuck well."
- "Hand to Hand Combat, I can do. I'm swift and strong...I just need to work on my balance and aim. I'd say my skills are above average, but not mastered."
“As far as gear goes, I don’t really have much. Just a standard lightsaber with an indigo blade I kept back from my time as a Jedi.”
RELATIONSHIPS
Illev Odine- "Illev is my...shall we say ally? I really don't know him all that well yet, but I hold a reasonably deep respect for the guy, though he doesn't seem to like me at all. But regardless, he's a member of my crew whether he wants to be or not and right now we're united by a common goal. Find my best friend and his sister, Iraphi Odine."
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/illev-odine.72658/
SHIP
“Ahhh, The Indigo Star. I love her. She’s a Rim-Dancer Trade Vessel I talked someone into giving me just a bit after I left the Jedi Order. She’s a little small and cheap, but she’s swift and maneuverable. This baby can compete with even some low end starfighters.”
DROIDS
“I’m not very fond of droids. They’re difficult to manipulate and, well, I’m more of a people person. But I’m awful with technology and I have no idea how to fly my new ship, The Indigo Star, so I ‘borrowed’ a GE3 protocol droid to pilot it. B9-A9 is his name, but I only call him that when I’m angry. Generally, I just call him Eivo. He’s judgmental, rude, and antagonistic, but he’s a dang good pilot, so I don’t really have any choice but to keep him around as part of my crew.
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