Carud Aaray.''

[Vencu]

Much better. This is still a work in progress, as there is much you can improve on, but I'll add him to the roster so you can get started. As your character grows and gains experience, you should come back here and add to it. As a writer, you may eventually decide to rewrite the entire profile to make it even better. Just don't let it end here. Don't let this be the last time you consider changing anything. You should always aim to improve your work. Anyway, best of luck.

 

[Carud Aaray]

Thankyou very much, Sorry for the attitude I appreciate this. :)

 

[Apollyon]

Minor fix real fast, Mandalorians don't have pure beskar'gam it was considered op, we wear beskar alloy armor. Might want to fix that mate :)

Looking forward to our pvp thread, I hope you are ready for me!

 

[Carud Aaray]

Thanks and Yes I am ready but not just yet. Give me about a month to do some other things lol.

 

[Apollyon]

Take your time I am busy with setting up a factions and training pupils in the Jedi and Sith anyways

 

[Carud Aaray]

Ok no problem thanks man. Yeah I got some bounty's, assassinations, and some revenge first. Im looking forward to it though :)

 

[Apollyon]

Make sure you are good and ready, also be prepared to possibly lose him as a character (I don't leave survivors) and I will do the same. But most and importantly have fun :)

 

[Carud Aaray]

Thank you, I dont intend on dying I think its vice versa ;). I understand that I am the underdog here and Im underestimated but I will kill you. I will not stop until you are dead and I reign supreme ruler of the Mando's.

 

[Apollyon]

Then you should be hitting Vencu not me lol Vencu is the Manda'lor

 

[Carud Aaray]

Hmmmm You actually are right.Ill look into that.

 

[Apollyon]

Yeah, and assassinating him Wont make you Manda'lor you have to challenge him for the right to lead the Mandalorians and have decent reasonings for it. We aren't savages anymore after all.

 

[Carud Aaray]

Ok then I shall do that.