Cnile Mengele

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My name is Cnile Mengele. I was only sixteen when my entire family and I loaded up into the sleeper ship Divination along with thousands of others, bound for some rock on the far side of the galaxy. The Ratakan Empire was in it's waning days, the Jedi a strange cult on Tython, and the Hutts completely unknown to us. That was almost seventeen thousand years ago. Something had gone wrong somewhere along the line, and left the ship adrift just outside the Tapani sector. We had been lucky the that they'd been found at all, adrift in the vast distance between stars.

A Jedi vessel had stumbled across the ship, and had begun rescue operations. They had generously offered to ferry the colonists to nearby unoccupied world, an offer we were in no position to refuse. The world was nice enough, but what really had drew me in was the journey there. Once I had finally shaken off millenia of hibernation sickness, I spent the whole time enraptured by what seemed to be pure magic. Journeys that had once taken centuries, now were a matter of weeks, the laser weaponry, and most impressive of all the signature weapon of the Jedi. When commander of the ship told me that I too shared the gift of the force, I hastily accepted his offer to go train on Ossus. Certainly seemed more interesting than trying to build a colony from the ground up.

The first few weeks on Ossus were disorienting. The worst of which was discovering a massive distaste for the commonplace datapad, I missed the paper and binding books that had been commonplace back on ancient Coruscant. I'd also found most of the droids running about to be unsettling, with the exception of the astromech that trundled around the hangars. And do get me started on cyborgs.

Still, not everything has been completely new. I was quite pleased to finally discover the as part of the academy's combat training, there was a class devoted entirely to martial arts. I excelled there, glad to finally be able to get my body back in shape after milennia of hibernation. Not overly tall, I've always been thin, lithe some would say. But don't let that fool you, I can still pack a hell of a punch.

Anyway, that's me. I understand I'm going to be advanced to padawan soon, and be assigned to a master. I look forward to it, though I've enjoyed my time on Ossus, I look forward to finally getting out and seeing the galaxy at large. Yeah, yeah, I know, “A Jedi does not crave these things.” I've only been at this a few months, can't expect me to be perfect right off the bat can you?
 
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NAME: Cnila Mengele
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Coruscanti
PHYSICAL AGE: 16
ACTUAL AGE: 16,732 (Spent 16,716 years in stasis)
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5' 5”
WEIGHT: Thin
EYES: Green
HAIR: Brunette
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Pair of scars on left cheek
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

FORCE POWERS:
Force Push/Pull (Novice)
Force Leap (Novice with natural talent)
Force Sense (Novice)
Force Sight (Novice)
Force Telepathy (Novice)
Force Speed (Novice)

SKILLS:
Trained martial arts fighter, uses forms similar to that of the Echani. Less stylized, could be assumed to be an ancient form practiced before the Echani left Coruscant.
Skilled Free-runner

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Soresu (Wants to learn, has yet to begin training)

GEAR:
Jedi Padawan Robes
Pair of brass knuckles

SHIP:

PETS:

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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The intention was to keep them separate for easier record keeping, but if that's an issue, I can condense them into the same post.
 

Dmitri

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I've never seen a rule. If you had wanted to, you could probably have even made a post for each section (i.e. page for name, page for age, page for force sensitivity, etc.).

Cnile... Cnile... Senile?
 

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Well anyway, aside from not being able to pronounce the name I like the characer and the profile too.

:CHappy
 

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I like your character and your writing.

Though just for future reference, the Rakatan Empire's waning days were 12000 years prior to our current timeline. :P

Anyway, hope to see you around the RP. Please stick around for more than a few days. :(
 

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That is one of the best Jedi pictures I've seen on this site thus far. Good writing too. Welcome to the RP. Hope to see you around the site.
 

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Hehe, you guys actually aren't too far off on the pronoucation, just have the accents in the wrong spot.

Seh-neel Men-geh-lay is how i pronounced it.

Anywho, thanks for the compliments. Looking forward to growing her in the near future.
 

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There actually is a rule, that there only is more then one post if there is more then 4 pictures, but that applied to reserved posed.
 

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Thank you.

By the way, I keep seeing references to a list of Force powers on this sight and their associated rank. Does anyone have the link to it so that i can look over it? I've been unable to find it.
 

Rev

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Yeah for the most part Padawan's get core basic powers (think Jedi Knight Jedi Academy) Push, Pull, Telekinesis, Telepathy, Jump, Speed, Sight. Then as you go through your training you'll learn the more advanced stuff, can request assuming your trainer knows it as well. For the most part you learn all those core moves in your training though.
 

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You can only have one post when making a profile.

This made me laugh.

This is completely false. Most of my profiles have a second post directly after the first because I use the second post to keep a record of all the threads they participate in and to log the updates to the profiles. Also, I think it's nice that you decided to use the classic character template AND the literary template. I like this profile.

Yet another Jedi to add to my list of kills in the near future :CHappy
 
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