Coro Sen

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NAME: Coro Sen, Nickenamed Master Sensetive by Kira Ava'ne his former Padawan
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Torgruta
AGE: 56
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Force-sensitive, trained

APPEARANCE: Coro is a Orange skinned and blue eyed Torgruta he stands at 6"2 and weighs 188 pounds he is quite muscular and he has some facial markings on his eyes he has a diamond shaped face and his nose is slightly crooked after getting into a nasty brawl in his younger years. he has a few small scars on his mid and upper back from his days as a slave on Hutta

ATTRIBUTES: Coro is known for being quite stoic or he tries to be as he acts in a cold demeanor so he won't get attached to people as those that he was attached to died. However, if one were to spend lots of time with him they would find out he is a lonely and scared man afraid of connections and attachments. While this may make him a good Jedi in theory in reality he's very disconnected. The few people that have bonded with him have know him as a gruff, yet kind person. He's very adept in the Force having been trained since he was 12 after he was wandering the underbelly of Curoscant a young Jedi Knight found he was Force-sensitive he took Coro in kicking and screaming and trained him in the ways of the Jedi. He's not very good with interpersonal relationships and he isn't very good with blasters he is however, great with a lightsaber and uses form IV he also is good at using the Force to mind trick others.

PERSONALITY: a cold yet kind Jedi. he tries his best to follow the Jedi Code strictly even if it is to his determent. he focuses his energy into becoming the best Jedi that there is in order to help anyone he comes across. his weakness is for the helpless and the enslaved it provokes anger in him that if the situation is not solved will leave him silently steaming for weeks at a time he will usually meditate and if he sees there is no other way he will give in and help them himself. while not one to normally given into passion or rage he does admit it can get the best of him he also has a soft spot for animals and has been known to sneak in baby animals into his chambers causing him to get yelled at as such, he hates loud noises and hates nosy people.

BIOGRAPHY:Born a slave on Hutta Coro worked hard to try and earn his freedom when that didn't work he got an idea and joined a small group of slaves and managed to sneak out of the camp and into a smuggler's ship he was found out and in order for him to stay he did menial tasks around the ship which gave him a small amount of practice working with electronics. Eventually, they landed on Curoscant where he went to the underbelly of the city and worked as a Currier for various people from crime lords to bounty hunters this gave him the ability of being pragmatic and quick on his feet. when he turned 12 a Jedi knight named Ry'toya Starwind saw his potential and he basically kidnapped him with Coro resisting slightly into the Jedi temple on Dantooine where he was trained as a Jedi Knight This process was not easy as he had to learn to let go of his anger at the empire so for the majority of his training he'd bottle up his emotions and project the illusion of what he thought the perfect Jedi was. To him that Jedi was a cold, calculating, and intelligent person that saved people so that when in battle they would be able to kill without any repercussions. He did however find a small thing he enjoyed and that small thing was named Nanali Rone a red skinned female Torgruta. He trained with her frequently and feelings began to grow within him he took a chance and asked her to marry. Nanali was happy to marry him on the condition that they would after they became Knights. As the republic kept falling he strived to become better then the rest stronger and more agile so that he could save everyone. He trained for many nights worrying his master and a few others. He passed the Jedi knight trials with flying colors and soon he and Nanali got married they were happiest they had ever been in a long time and after two years of wedded bliss they had a daughter named Ahsoma however, in order to protect his wife and child he decided to keep up his illusion in order to go on a mission as soon as possible. After many missions he was considered by thoughs who fought with him a strong warrior and a shining example of a knight displaying compassion for the weak and serenity on the battlefield. Once he returned to the temple on Dantooine he decided to take on a Padawan. The Padawan he chose was a named Kira Ava'ne. When they first trained together Coro tried to keep his emotions under wrap but Kira's sarcastic and excitable personality would often make him smile or laugh which is something he usually did in private with his family. Coro had once asked his Padawan about her life he did not get very far on the topic and just continued to leave it in secret he was however suspicious. From that moment until Kira herself became a Knight he kept careful watch over her and made sure she followed the Jedi Code. However, a few years after she had become a Jedi Knight she had run off somewhere he tried desperately to find her using meditation to at least tell him where she could be but it was all in vain as he couldn't find her. He lamented his lost Padawan for months causing a small rift between his wife and his child. A few year after Kira's disappearance however Curoscant had fallen saddening him greatly. He thought of it as his homeworld and seeing it fall into the hands of the Imperials made him feel a great loss.
he went to Onderon with his family and to the Jedi Temple there he studied everything he could about the Force after years of studying he noticed a familiar yet slightly different Force Signature he approached it yet what he saw was not Kira but a small youngling that looked only slightly like his Padawan. He shook his head and went back into the library studying all he could. He later meets the new youngling he learned her name was Mira Starwind. Coro thought that she was his Master's Granddaughter and her Master Jalen Kron. he felt in the Force that things were about to go completely haywire.


SKILLS: Coro can speak Basic, Huttese, and Torgruti. he has minor knowledge in medical and technology from his days as a Currier he can fight very well and uses his acrobatics to dodge and evade attacks as well as counter-attacking. he can climb up almost any building in order to escape. he's usually very good at persuading people to do the right thing or to go with his side he's quite good at picking locks though he won't do it often unless absolutely necessary. He's a hard worker and if he can't find a solution he'll make one up on the spot using previous knowledge he gained from studying almost non stop at the temple.

GEAR: A Green lightsaber he crafted himself and a small tin box full of momentos from his youth like the slave chip from his collar and a bolt from the ship he stowed away on and his padawan beads.
 
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Hey @Eolhcmonkey! I have a few comments on the profile before approval.
  • Padawans: This is an exceedingly minor point, but we don't have Padawan's but Initiates.
  • History: This is largely fine and hits the major notes I look for. A couple of things I would like to see are how he joined the Jedi Army. Either A: Joined when the war first started or B: survived the Order's destruction on Tython and joined afterward. That is an important historical event in any Jedi backstory. You will need to remove the mention of the Padawan being half-Sith. That is only permitted in extraordinary circumstances. Lastly, I would suggest making his planet of origin a planet besides one of the most well-known Sith worlds.
  • Profile Overall: So, there are some things that make the character seem a lot younger than 56. He has been a Jedi for almost 4 decades but struggles with many of the things a fresh Knight or Initiate would struggle with. Overall, that is slightly concerning. Another small note is he would be allowed to keep whatever pets he like. It is important to remember the Jedi are not the super duper strict no fun Jedi of the prequels. There is lots of room for personality and all types of Jedi. Lots of "rule bending."
 

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I see I was basing him off of what limited knowledge I had mainly the original trilogy and SWTOR. What age would you suggest he be?
 

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@Valen Pelora Specifically concerning the padawan thing, the character mentioned as being Coro's "padawan" is actually a Jedi knight nearing the age of 30 if I'm remembering what me and @Eolhcmonkey discussed over PM, so she would have been a padawan before the Army of Light was really up and running. Any Jedi who has been a knight more than 10-15 years was likely called a padawan at the time.

Eolhcmonkey, you might want to mention his former padawan being knighted.​
 

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@Valen Pelora Specifically concerning the padawan thing, the character mentioned as being Coro's "padawan" is actually a Jedi knight nearing the age of 30 if I'm remembering what me and @Eolhcmonkey discussed over PM, so she would have been a padawan before the Army of Light was really up and running. Any Jedi who has been a knight more than 10-15 years was likely called a padawan at the time.

Eolhcmonkey, you might want to mention his former padawan being knighted.​

Well, the first mention of taking a Padawan appears after the fall of Coruscant in the history. If he took the Padawan before then, or passed the trial before then, the history needs to be switched around.

Overall, if this is the history and personality I would say mid-twenties is how old the character reads to me.
 

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Got it so switch the fall of Curoscant and all is good biography wise?
 

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@Undine didn't we chat in PM about the whole Kira and the council letting her in because if not she'd end up a Sith and the Jedi was a way for her dad to kinda sorta protect her? Or that she had to basically hide her heritage from everybody else in order to even get people to trust her. I honestly forgot what our justification was.
 

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@Eolhcmonkey you also went into depth about Kira and her history during our discussion. It made sense but as it is Valen has nothing to go on about Kira in this profile. If your set on having her be half sith than you need to work it out with Valen. Just PM him with your ideas for Mira, Kira, and Coro to see what he thinks.​
 

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Please tag me or another member of the team when the changes we discussed have been made.
 
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