D' Orrin Kelvash

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Name: D'Orrin Kelvash/ The Ghost
Faction: KES

Rank: PMC Opetative/ Engineer/ Shadow Squad CO

Species: Human/ Cyborg
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 6'. Six foot
Weight: 450lbs
Eyes: Left Eye- Brown/ Right Eye- Blue cybernetic optical replacement
Hair: Black, Shoulder Length
Skin: Mahogany
Credits: 1,000
Distinguishing Marks: A scar stretching down his right eye vertically. A mass of tribal tattoos as part of his culture, as well as a means to cover scars from a medical procedure.

Force Sensitive: Yes

Gear: A twinned set of vibro blades referred to as Fangs. The vibration rate is five times the norm. The edge of the blades are covered with diamond and blue force crystals, the runes etched into the center of the weapons are inset with the same. Each sword has a pneumatic tubing system set close to the back of the blade that aids in coating the edge in poison. Styled after katana swords. More specifically, Saya's sword from the Blood series.

Two Custom Cased Hiraku Heavy Blasters

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...utions-PSB-3hv-quot-Hiraku-quot-Heavy-Blaster

Pouches on gun holsters contain flechette rounds.

Utility belt equipped with shuriken, slugs (bullets), thermite grenades, smoke orbs, poison vials, power cells for his pistols, liquid nitrogen ampules, flash orbs- small circular devices with six lenses equipped on them to help focus the UV light emitted. Single use only, before they need to be recharged, tranquilizer darts, acid ampules.

Ten pouches in all, each is heavily cushioned for shock, so that the equipment doesn't break open and destroy the belt, or the user.


Custom muscle suit situated under one inch carbon titanium plate armor. Based off of reverse engineered technology from imperial armor,, a neural collar is situated in the armor. Small power cells are located throughout the armor to power an electro discharge system located in segments of each finger. The power cells also energize a liquid metal discharge system Ghost manipulates via the Force. The armor is also equipped with a stealth and camouflage system that allows Ghost to be rendered invisible, or to change his appearance via holographic technology. The armor also has a comm link and a broadband antenna/ signal interceptor.
Update to Armor- in addition to the liquid metal discharge system, a number of nano droid bombs ate kept in a holding and discharge system in the forearms. A transmitter added to the armor causes the nano droids to explode after expulsion. Each arm houses five shots.
The internal frame is equipped with its own processor linked and slaved to the user, as well as a holonet connection.

Internal Frame underwent a point of upgrading via a systematic injection of nanotechnology into the subject. After integration was confirmed successful, nanites integrated with internal frame, boosting processor function and due to linking with holonet systems, allows processor a function mimicking that of a cryptographic sequencer. Firewalls are put in place to ensure that no virus attacks the processor, but as any good splicer knows, all one needs is a connection and time to crack such things.

Secondary upgrade- Subject displays obvious use and affinity in energy field referred to as The Force. One ability in particular is the generating and discharge of bio electric energy often referred to as Force Lightning, or Sith Lightning. Secondary upgrade compliments named ability. Through a point of trial and error, calibration of proper output was possible. Though not without difficulty resulting in slight subject malfunction ranging from tingling in extremities, numbness, slight loss of manual dexterity, to severe malfunctioning such as full loss of extremity control and points of muscle damage and varying degrees of burning that needed to be repaired. After calibration was completed, secondary upgrade was capable of complimenting subject's "Force Lightning" with a discharge resulting from using subject's bio thermal energy as power source in thermal couple conversion.

Third upgrade of subject. Subject has, in my professional opinion, either an obsession with physical power, or a fear of being defeated in unarmed combat. If not having both prior stated conditions. Subject was originally two hundred forty standard unit pounds prior to procedure. Subject has taken new nano droid injection. Increasing muscle mass by fortifying existing muscle tissue and creating a small network of synthetic nano droid muscles.

Note: Toomuch power in opinion. Will not perform further upgrades, even under penalty of death. Was already aware that subject was a mercenary, but subject seems to want to be nothing more than a living weapon for use of new alliance. Will not perform further upgrades for subject, only maintenance. Will destroy lab and research if need be.

Right Eye is equipped with a multi optic option.
Telescopic Vision. X 4 magnification
Macro lens Vision- X 8 magnification
Passive Night Vision
Polarized Vision
Infrared Thermo imaging
Targeting System HUD


Orrin keeps a small number of needles by his firearms in case he needs to buy time to get another weapon, or is using a trick in close quarters combat.

Ship: The Phantom- 20 meters long, 25 meters wide, 20 Meters tall. Equipped with basic blaster cannons, proton torpedoes and forward locked E Web 15s.

Droids: Five refurbished Assassin Droids used as sparring partners and aid with running the ship, and one R2 astromech droid to help with piloting

Pets: Scalewolf- Like Orrin, the scalewolf was an experiment. The beast stands three and a half feet at the shoulder, and is five feet long, excluding its tail. Most of its body is covered in fur, except for its underbelly. That area has thick black scales adorned there. Three eyes glare from each side of its head, making for six in all. No special abilities, or any such thing. It simply looks different. Orrin's taken to calling him Slayer.

Personality: Quiet and reserved for the most part. Mostly because he doesn't like many people. Part of that stems from trust issues due to personal trauma he's experienced. He can be quite stand offish due to a mass of personal issues. This sometimes leads to him getting into fights that he could have otherwise avoided. But aside from his great dislike of others, he has one thing he's gained from his training. Patience. If someone has a bad first impression with him, which is most everyone, he has the patience to see if they can change his mind.

Biography: A native of the planet Naboo, Orrin is the older brother between he and his twin brother. Both were apart of a village that adhered to the Zenkai Force tradition. Not many existed, about thirty to forty in total. Their training began at a young age. With them trained a female friend named Katryna. Almost immediately Jathe was smitten with Kat, but she held eyes for Orrin.

Over the years feelings grew between them all. Jathe's feelings were unrequited, while Orrin took note of and accepted Kat's feelings. This angered Jathe, but it was also just a prelude for what was to come. Orrin and Kat wed when they were eighteen, further infuriating Jathe, as he knew he could not have her. What drove him over the edge was when the two had a son.

That was when Jathe began his study of the Dark Side. Perverting the lessons he had learned up to that point. Jathe also fell in with local bandits, forcing them to submit to his whims. And thus, with a force backing him, Jathe attacked his own village. This forced Orrin to fight his own brother. To which Jathe was all too eager.

Jathe found that even with his new abilities granted to him by using the Dark Side, he and his brother were still evenly matched. Until Jathe's bandits managed to capture some of the defenseless members of the village. The exchange was supposed to be simple. Their lives in exchange for Orrin's life. And so Orrin surrendered. But Jathe far from kept his promise.

Instead, Orrin was forced to witness the execution of his wife and son in front of him. D' Orrin became unhinged, fueled by anger he struck. Jathe managed to counter, but just barely. Orrin was struck by a blaster bolt, and then by Jathe. His brother brought his blade down with a vicious slash over D' Orrin's right eye. Then Jathe cast his brother over a small cliff.

Orrin survived, but just barely. His body was badly broken, even with him attempting to heal himself. Luck was on his side though. A member of the village that managed to escape the assault helped as much as they could. Eventually leading Orrin to a scientist that could help.

Even though it went against some of the principles that he was taught, Orrin underwent reconstructive surgery on his muscles. Forcing his body into optimum performance conditions. But there was an oversight with the procedure. The tension and stress created by the new muscles caused fractures in his skeletal structure. To remedy this, an end skeletal frame was added to ensure his body wouldn't implode, in a manner, due to its new make up.

The frame was designed to not hinder the natural functions of the skeletal system, but to simply protect it and allow freedom of movement. After all was finished, Orrin went back to seek his revenge. In time he had it, but this indebted him to the scientist. He was fine with that, all up until the point where it seemed that the scientist wanted to turn Orrin into a mindless soldier. That's when Orrin slew him and began his work as a mercenary and bounty hunter. Though his true goal is to someday rebuild the institution of his order. As he performs missions, he's hoping to catch the attention of any Force Sensitive individuals and display what he can do through his training in hopes that they may want to embark on the path of learning through his tradition.
 
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You need a biography and personality section, each containing at least (more is always better, though) 50 words, according to the site rules. In the future, I recommend using a word processing software to save your WIP before it's complete, that way you can post a complete profile next time. Google Drive is free to use, or if you have Microsoft Word, Apple Pages, Open Office, etc, that works as well (there's also a blog feature here). Good luck!
 

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I wasn't done with it, but thanks. I was doing it bit by bit when I had the time.
 

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I wasn't done with it, but thanks. I was doing it bit by bit when I had the time.

The rules do require you to finish it before posting, just FYI, as WIPs aren't allowed.
 

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I'm aware of that. Don't assume everyone has the time to finish it all in one go. I've read the rules. Thanks anyway. Just lemme finish my profile.
 

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Are we going to get a picture of this fine manly character?
 

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The best I can offer you is my avatar. I do everything from my phone, so I don't have the option of cutting and pasting on the forum.
 

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The best I can offer you is my avatar. I do everything from my phone, so I don't have the option of cutting and pasting on the forum.

Nice! If I might suggest, photobucket is phone-accessible as far as I'm aware. Copy the image code and paste it right there. Click, clack, post. Just my personal suggestion though.
 

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I used to have an image I used for pretty much all of my characters. I had one on the other forum like this, but I don't think it exists anymore.
 

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You may want to elaborate more on this profile. Some examples include, he has slugs listed, but I don't see the point of him carrying them if he has a blaster. Then also his armor sounds redundant; he has a light variant underneath a heavy variant, unless there is more to describe here.

So overall, the profile needs some work in gear descriptions and as well as his ship (dimensions don't really cut it).

Please see to it. Thanks!
 

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Slugs are there for use with ballistikinetics. As are the flechette rounds that were just added via the update.I didn't feel the need to spoon feed info to people. I would have figured the fact that my having it in the utility belt would obviously indicate that I have a use for them. As far as the armor went, it was a sheet of carbon titanium reinforcing the kevlar. Kevlar is light, titanium, when used in excess, is heavy. Hence the point of reinforcing the kevlar with a sheet of carbon titanium. Doesn't change the weight much.

So really the only thing I need to work on is the ship. And I'll get to that soon.
 

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So far, so good. Interesting character; I'm sure the bio will be great. You will need a tech submission for the armor though.
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This armor is not approved, and there's nothing like it on Wookiee as you had described to me, the armor is void until you have a proper write up submitted and approved by the Tech Admins.
 
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