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Name: Salen Kren
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/salen-kren.69645/
Brief Description: A 60-something gunslinger turned ranch-hand who wants to make a difference.

Pending a response to the notes @Proleptic made about your gear, consider yourself APPROVED! I'd also take a look at the first line of your personality- Christianity doesn't exist in Star Wars, but you could always change it to some sort of non-descript belief in the Force or the Manda, or one of the Mandalorian god like Kad Ha'rangir.


@Prudence will add you to the Missions PM, and our Skype chat if you have it.
 

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Actually Cancel That Soz peeps.
 
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Ay bois
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Brief Desc : Tsasomin Inas is a Jawa from Tatooine, former scrap merchant turned contract killer. He is an expert sniper and brilliant climber, most skilled in ranged combat.
 

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Name : Tsasomin Inas
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Brief Desc : Tsasomin Inas is a Jawa from Tatooine, former scrap merchant turned contract killer. He is an expert sniper and brilliant climber, most skilled in ranged combat.

Fuck yes.

APPROOOOOOVED.

The only thing you should probably change is the references to him learning "English"- it's "basic" in Star Wars. I also don't think you can put a silencer on a blaster. Other than that, looks good!

@Prudence we got a Jawa! Add him to the PM!
 

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**** yes.

APPROOOOOOVED.

The only thing you should probably change is the references to him learning "English"- it's "basic" in Star Wars. I also don't think you can put a silencer on a blaster. Other than that, looks good!

@Prudence we got a Jawa! Add him to the PM!
Ah sure thing, I was thinking twice about the silencer.
 

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Prudence

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I'll let Loco make any necessary critiques on the profile because that's just his job :P but approved
 

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Name/Link: Aiden Fett

Description: A FS Mando looking to help Mandalorians become a force to be reckoned with across the galaxy.

EDIT: I've adjusted his biography and added to his personality to account for the awesome Mandalore and Concord Dawn write-ups I just realized were a thing. @Prudence @Loco
 
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@Braden Drake Hey there mate! So I just checked out your profile, and I am happy to say you are approved! However, you do need to make one or two modifications to your CS, simply for your own benefit. You can't just say that he has basic armor, you actually have to describe it. That means either picking an armor set, or describing your own. You could even write your own generic tech armor, which wouldn't require any approval, and would get it customized to you. I would highly suggest choosing from one of the sets we have in the faction, but it is up to you. Some options we have are the Dragon Armor, the Mandalorian CCT Armor (Basically a standard set), the Mandalorian Armour MK. II, and several other choices! If you like, you could also use a non-mando armor, such as the well-loved UAI-19 Combat Armor.

Remember that with all of these, there is some customization you will need to add, specifically the lightsaber resistant plates, of which you can have two (2). You have to specify that for yourself. That should be all! Welcome to the faction! I'll add you to the PM and you'll be able to join our next mission pack! We are actually just tying up one or two small things before moving to our next pack, so we don't have much going on right now, but that will soon change!
 

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@Braden Drake Hey there mate! So I just checked out your profile, and I am happy to say you are approved! However, you do need to make one or two modifications to your CS, simply for your own benefit. You can't just say that he has basic armor, you actually have to describe it. That means either picking an armor set, or describing your own. You could even write your own generic tech armor, which wouldn't require any approval, and would get it customized to you. I would highly suggest choosing from one of the sets we have in the faction, but it is up to you. Some options we have are the Dragon Armor, the Mandalorian CCT Armor (Basically a standard set), the Mandalorian Armour MK. II, and several other choices! If you like, you could also use a non-mando armor, such as the well-loved UAI-19 Combat Armor.

Remember that with all of these, there is some customization you will need to add, specifically the lightsaber resistant plates, of which you can have two (2). You have to specify that for yourself. That should be all! Welcome to the faction! I'll add you to the PM and you'll be able to join our next mission pack! We are actually just tying up one or two small things before moving to our next pack, so we don't have much going on right now, but that will soon change!

No problem one of the reasons I didnt specify is that i didn't want to pick Mando armor until I officially got in. Plus i couldnt find any I liked so just going to make a nice little generic armor.
 

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Little History: Grandson to last leader of house Priest (to be added in story), Force Sensitive son of rogue/fallen Jedi. Former operative and Overseer for Czerka Corp thus nickname "Devil of Mos Espa"
 

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Name: Jett Nova (soon to of Clan Priest)
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Little History: Grandson to last leader of house Priest (to be added in story), Force Sensitive son of rogue/fallen Jedi. Former operative and Overseer for Czerka Corp thus nickname "Devil of Mos Espa"
I'll get to reading this over in the next day or two :)
 
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Name: Jett Nova (soon to of Clan Priest)
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Little History: Grandson to last leader of house Priest (to be added in story), Force Sensitive son of rogue/fallen Jedi. Former operative and Overseer for Czerka Corp thus nickname "Devil of Mos Espa"


10/10 APPROVED
 
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