Dorox Tahal

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Dorox Tahal
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AGE
► 156​
SPECIES
► Draethos​
HEIGHT
► 6'0​
WEIGHT
► 254​
EYE COLOR
► Black​
HAIR COLOR
► N/A​
HOMEWORLD
►Draethos​
GENDER
► Male​
FACTION
► Jedi Exiles​
RANK
► Exile Apprentice​
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Force Sensitive​
SECT
► Exile Inqusitor​



BIOGRAPHY

Dorox was born to poor farmers on the planet of Draethos. Dorox however would have a different fate then endlessly farming til his death on some backwater outer rim planet. A band of Jedi knights wo

Dorox would then train for a years. Eventually becoming a padawn learner, where he'd be placed with Jedi Knight Cerv Uagde. A Jedi Knight, he and Dorox would become great friends, as they went on many missions together. However on a mission to Keldooine, Cerv would be shot and killed by a mercenary group they went sent to stop. Dorox would then go into a grieving period, and at Cerv's funeral Dorox would promise to never let the events that happen on Keldooine happen again.

Dorox in order to gain the strength needed to stop similar events to Cerv's death, Dorox would begin experiment with the dark side of the force gaining immense power as he did so. Eventually however the Jedi Council decided to exile those who were using the dark side of the force. Dorox attempted to hide his tests with the dark side. Eventually a Jedi Knight named Laetoal Kuff, who attempted to apprehend him and give him up to the council. Dorox and Laetoal would engage in a fierce duel, where Dorox would lose his arm to the knight however he managed to escape off of the planet.

Dorox would then join up with the main body of exiles fighting the Jedi. Joining the recruiting branch, finding weak-willed force to turn into warriors for the exiles. He'd eventually join the 'Bloody Run Camping." participating in the climatic battle of Tython. He'd manage to slay Laetoal at the battle gaining his revenge on the Jedi. Dorox would be injured in the battle and would be recovering when the tragedy of Illum occurred. Afterwords, Dorox would become part of the inquisitors. Continuing to hunt down weak willed Jedi and children to add to the exile army.



PERSONALITY

Dorox is a sadist enjoying the suffering of others immensely. He is also a person who desires control of all people around him. If someone threatens his control he considers it a personal attack on him. He tends to mock people to distract them from focusing on his own weaknesses and flaws. He also is very insecure about his strength and powers as such he generally becomes very defensive if anyone mentions it. Dorox despite being unsure of his strength can be quite a silver-tounged talker to convience people of his things usally, that is he indeed powerful.



ATTRIBUTES​


Personal States
Perception- Above Average
Strength- Average
Dexterity- Below Average
Intelligence- Average
Speech Craft- Above Average

Skills- [Unskilled, Novice, Apprentice, Adept, Expert, Master]
Melee Weapons [Form VI]- Adept
Unarmed Combat- Unskilled
Blasters- Unskilled
Ship Piloting- Adept
Slicing- Novice
Medical- Novice

Force Talents
Physical Body- Novice
Healing- Unskilled
Sense- Adept
Mental Manipulation- Expert
Energy Manipulation- Apprentice​



Equipment
1x Crimson Lightsaber
1x Bulwark Armor [Functionless]
1x 4C Blaster Pistol
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Vosrik

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Hey there, a few things I've noticed you'll need to change.
  • Firstly, I think something either messed up your coding or you forgot to finish a paragraph. The end of the first paragraph is missing — a band of Jedi Knights...something. Just a heads up!
  • Don't forget that there was actually a space of 33 years between the battle on Tython and the Tragedy of Ilum. I don't think Dorox would need to be recovering for quite that long.
  • You'll need to add the links to the tech profiles in your equipment.
 

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This character is being archived due to requested changes never being made for approval.
 
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