Exacalibur Custom

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Manufacturer: Pondervan Interplanetary Enterprises
Production Line: Personal Weapon
Model: Excalibur
Technical Weapon Designation: A quick firing side arm.
Affiliation: Retrade
Availability: Prototype
Modularity: Yes
Composition: Carbon, typically has a durasteel trigger, instead it is fitted with a synth leather trigger which is pressure sensitive.
Ownership: Donovan Kincaid
Description: the clip size is twelve rounds, the gun is equipped with two barrels, its fire rate is too shots per trigger pulled, after six pulls it is time to reload. It has a sleek design, selling to enthusiasts and those who want a nice side arm was in mind. It is compact and simple, despite its sleek design there is nothing unecessary about the gun.



Classification: Blaster Pistol
Size: Small
Length: 30cm
Weight: 1.0 KG
Ammunition Capacity: 12
Range: 150 Yards
 
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You need to get it to forum standard template, and right now there's really nothing to distinguish it from a standard blaster pistol beyond name and appearance - which means it doesn't need approval.
 

Nirvana

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I am going to say this before Xeno (Demigure) see this, use the template that have bee created for these things.

EDIT: Sneaky solaris beat me to it.
 

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This is what you need to fill out.

Manufacturer: (working example; the Imperial Star Destroyers of the classical Star Wars trilogy were produced by Kuat Drive Yards)
Production Line: (working example; the Executor was of the Star Dreadnought production line)
Model: (working example; the Eclipse was a Super Star Destroyer model)
Technical Weapon Designation: (working example; the Death Star's technical designation was the DS-1 Orbital Battle Station)
Affiliation: (working example; the E-11 Blaster Rifle was produced for the Galactic Empire and used almost exclusively by Imperial Stormtroopers)
Availability: (Mass Produced/Stock or Custom/Personal)
Modularity: (does the item have the capacity to be augmented, modified, customized or adapted from its original form)
Composition: (what materials is it made of)
Ownership: (toward what character is this tech specifically designated for)
Description: (simple description of the item)

Classification: (Blaster, Heavy Blaster, Disruptor, Slugthrower, Mass-Driver, Gauss)
Size: (Small for blaster pistols, Medium for carbines, Large for rifles)
Length: (metric system)
Weight: (per above)
Ammunition Capacity: (self explanatory)
Range: (per above)
 

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Usually, you're supposed to fill in all of these things before you put up the form itself, regardless of it being a WIP or not.
 

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Usually, you're supposed to fill in all of these things before you put up the form itself, regardless of it being a WIP or not.
Be nice, Kiro.
It's his first run on the forums with our whacky Tech-Approval system.

She is, right, however, RR. You are supposed to post the 'completed' work.
Just keep it in mind for the next bit of tech you whack up. ;)

Other than that, good work.
While not nessecary, I'm a fan of writing the description like you'd find in a magazine or something.
Just a thought for your next bit.

:)
 
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