Jacob (bounty hunter character)

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name:Jacob kasra
faction: Independent (the black sun. )
rank: yet to be known
species:human
age: 25
gender:male
weight:195, ibs
height:6,ft,3
eyes:blue
hair:short black, cropped, untidy
skin:white, Caucasian, pale
marks/scars: a grotesque scar on his right eye, and a small scar across his nose.


credits:1000


gear: his armor is a Corellian Power suit witch is painted black and at the arm and leg areas is painted red. a black helmet, jet pack (i assume there is one if not let me know)

inside of armor: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=787&d=1305280680,

outside of armor: http://images.wikia.com/narutofanon/images/6/69/Anime_guy.jpg

wrist mounted grenade launcher (smaler than it looks) with 10 frag grenades and 5 ion grenades
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=793&stc=1&d=1306208546,

wrist mounted flame thrower (image below was edited by me)
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=791&stc=1&d=1306208200,

4 Deployable plasma mines
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=792&stc=1&d=1306208413,

personally made assault blaster rifle
http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl...ndsp=23&ved=1t:429,r:10,s:44&biw=1280&bih=807,

customized Mandalorian Heavy Blaster pistol
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=794&stc=1&d=1306209555.

strength:8/10 very good strength when compared to other humans

dexterity:7/10 he could quick draw his blaster pistol and shoot 4 bottles in 2 seconds

constitution:8/10 he has very good endurance and can endure mental and physical torture

charisma:6/10 he is a very likeable guy. but can be a bit difficult

wisdom:5/10 he has a moderate wisdom. but nothing impressing

intelligence:5/10 he has a moderate intelligence. but nothing impressing

skills:he is a expert shot with a single heavy blaster. and very resourceful knowledge of gadgetry. he is skilled in repairing armor and weapons. and he has a full knowledge of demolitions. he is also very skilled in intimidation and fear tactics.

strengths and weaknesses:a very resourceful and strong fighter. perhaps his best strength is the fact that his reputation horrifies peapol. he is a man who allways gets the job done and will die trying.there is and never will be a job that he did not see through to the end. but his weaknes in life is his dificulty to trust or rely on others. a problem that may one day be his downfall.
(seriously who other then a jedi would go back into hell to save a fallen comrade that doesn't trust you lol)

ship: Goba-class Star fighter
4x - Laser cannons
4x - Light torpedo launchers
Shielding: Equipped

personality: he is a man that enjoys adventure and having a grait time.
(witch for him is literally exploding the head off a zelkath and seeing how far the blood splatter goes :p ) he is a very violent person and personally loves combat. not just for honor but for the thrill of the kill. in fact the only honor he really has is a strict personal code of four laws.
1: never betray, deceive, or double-cross a employer
2:all ways do exactly as he is told. but will have fun and have his own fun if not explicitly ordered not to do so
3:never harms innocent lives unless proven to be a enemy in any way.
4:never truly trust anyone. you never know there true motives. there is a exception in some cases as long as the individual gives him a good reason for his trust.

biography: jacobs dad verik was a hired gun for a unknown criminal organization. he was a man of grait strength and potential. but he threw away everything he ever knew for Jacob's mother elayna.
she was a beautiful women from coruscant. verik met her during a political mission (details classified) regardless of details verik was severely wounded and left for dead by his comrades. he was wounded and delirious. the last thing he remembers before passing out was the faint image of a women finding him. when he awoke it was 3 days later. it turned out that the person who found him was a beautiful doctor who freely heals and helps the slums. he fell in love with the selfless women and soon told her the truth of who he was and how he got there. she closed down her med center and bought them tickets to the nearest system in order to escape his past. they soon had there son Jacob. verik was easily proud of his son. and as soon as Jacob could walk he was plunged into the way of war. tho verik was a grunt he knew enough to teach his son to be strong. elayna allowed verik to teach Jacob regardless of her pacifistic beliefs because being strong was important to her husband. when Jacob was 15 his father just about taught him everything he knew.jacob was a very powerful warrior. and excellent with a pistol. verik was proud of jacobs accomplishment's. but his pride was short lived. a old buddy of verik's found him and his family by accident. his name was brejik and he was a cruel and evil mandalorian. he thot that verik was weak for the way he lived out his years and challenged him to a fight to the death. verik lost and was slain. and then brejik claimed his victory by killing veriks wife elayna with him. jacob tried to stop him but was powerless. brejik then left Jacob sad, tired, and beaten. his last words being "if you want vengeance. then one day you may prove your strength" he then left. jacob was fueled with anger and hatred. so much so that the only thing that kept him going was the lust for vengeance. he became a bounty hunter. first doing small jobs. but then working his way up. bought a ship. and did jobs across the galaxy. soon making a name for himself. even getting the nick name
the dark crusader. all tho the truth behind his title is graitely masked in legend and a mystery even to his most well informed employers. peapol say he challenged and fought a dark jedi crusader in melee combat and won. but the truth is a fluke. he accidentally ran into one during a mission. Jacob sneaked into the hangar bay of a ship witch had vital information for a employer. the crusader caught him sneaking in and he attacked Jacob.this crusader was another hired man who was hired to protect the holocron containing the info. Jacob shot at him but this was futile because the jedi deflected his blaster bolts. but one of the bolts deflected into the main controls to the hangar bay and the door opened. the crusader was sucked into space and jacob narrowly managed to close the doors before he was sucked out to the dark abyss of space along with him.

(he was able to breath due to his helmet)

well he became famous enough that brejik sought him out. brejik challenged Jacob and lost. brejik begged Jacob to kill him but Jacobs reaction was "no. a weakling like you deserves to live with the shame of defeat"
the last Jacob heard of brejik was that he killed himself by flying his ship into a local star. well good rid-ins. and now Jacob Kasra has ascended straight through fame. not only as having one of the quickest and most interesting rise to glory but allso the quick guns and wits required to hold such a title.

nowadays Jacob kasra the dark crusader is a hired gun for
the crime syndicate known only as the black sun. he works as a assassin, enforcer, bodyguard, bounty hunter, and various other odd jobs for the criminal organization the black sun. he has the sense of honor, complete loyalty, and the willingness to do everything he is told. because a true soldier does what they are ordered.
 
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Okay, there's just a few kinks with this and then you're good to go. Firstly, the Mandalorians at this time period, are mostly Taung [see SW wiki for more on that], which are highly xenophobic people; meaning, they wouldn't mate with a human to have a half-breed child. The second thing you need to do is run this through a spell checker. I know its a small thing, and I'd hate to come off as condescending, but spelling makes a HUGE difference when someone is reading over this.

Other than that, nothing else looks wrong with it.
 

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Okay, there's just a few kinks with this and then you're good to go. Firstly, the Mandalorians at this time period, are mostly Taung [see SW wiki for more on that], which are highly xenophobic people; meaning, they wouldn't mate with a human to have a 1. half-breed child. The second thing you need to do is run this through a spell checker. I know its a small thing, and I'd hate to come off as condescending, but 2. spelling makes a HUGE difference when someone is reading over this.

Other than that, nothing else looks wrong with it.

1. Gross.

2. Yes.
 

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I thought humans and tuangs were like sworn enemies or something.
 

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Okay, there's just a few kinks with this and then you're good to go. Firstly, the Mandalorians at this time period, are mostly Taung [see SW wiki for more on that], which are highly xenophobic people; meaning, they wouldn't mate with a human to have a half-breed child. The second thing you need to do is run this through a spell checker. I know its a small thing, and I'd hate to come off as condescending, but spelling makes a HUGE difference when someone is reading over this.

Other than that, nothing else looks wrong with it.

ya i know. i was tired and rushed myself a bit and most of the story was a epiphany. so ok gona have to change quite a bit.
 

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We have The Black Sun in this time-line?
 

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EDIT: Misread your post. Yes we have the black sun in this time line :D I'm its leader

Holy crap! I'll totally have a character up by this weekend!
 
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