Jared Dane - Training by Master Sithis

[BlueberryPai]

[OOC]
Jared Dane is basically in a dojo, pacing back and forth - Introduce yourself as you wish, so we can get this show started.
Thanks for taking me as your apprentice by the way, I appreciate it.
[OOC]

The wind shifted through the Temple of Bogan, flowing smoothly between the sanctuary’s raging columns, whipping up ancient dust and scattering it in different directions, allowing the scent of the fresh air to waft through the ventilation-system.

Further on, past hallways, doors and mazes of corridors was a door of marble; covered with an intricate pattern which signified that the next room was a dojo – Meant for exercising your body and mind.

Raging handsomely as he stood, the young acolyte paced back and forth in an elegant manner as he awaited his newly assigned Master to turn up, now and then bursting out in delirious laughter filled with mirth, a huge grin plastered across his face.

He'd read Sithis' file, and he couldn't say anything other than that this was looking quite promising; the man was also somewhat known by his comrades, willing to share apt information the moment they knew Jared was to be the man's fourth apprentice.

Jared Dane was shrill with excitement – He’d been looking forward for this day for years, when he would take upon the mantle of apprenticeship and have his abilities honed to their fullest by an experienced and wizened Master.

Ruffling his pitch black hair in giddy glee as his nerves ran wild, Jared’s feet only continued to throttle forward in an impulsively brash manner as he waited on his master.

 

[Zen]

Sithis got up again early in the morning he placed on his usually stuff and begun to slowly open his door then close it the snowy windy chill from the outside of the temple gave him a chill, moving slowly he had picked another student the more the better moving quickly and rapidly now looking and examining the Mable, the curved writing on the walls, and the top of the walls surface all looked dark and chilly to him. He sensed many force users here none that he cared about moving his left foot out he moved into the dojo. And sat down looking around he had seen one acyclic who has been moving back and forth eagerly he then slowly looked up and spoke."Morning I am Sithis Monomyth your master judging by your face you must be my student or I might be wrong."He said slowly.

(OOC: Your welcome.)

 

[BlueberryPai]

Jared's face blossomed up into a brilliant smile the moment he heard his master's voice leap across the dojo:

"Morning, I am Sithis Monomyth. Your master judging by your face you must be my student or I might be wrong."

The young acolyte's muscular body came to an instant halt, a small sigh of relief escaping his plump lips as he turned toward Sithis, knelt onto the ground in a singular and smooth motion, to then speak up in reverence - His voice carrying tones of gratification and joy, with a subtle touch of interest.

"It is nothing but a pleasure to meet with you, Master Monomyth - I do hope I will prosper under you guidance."

Jared Dane swallowed once before continuing, his voice exceedingly emotional and filled with mirth as he allowed his tongue to form a variety of words which flew across the room, toward Sithis:

"I am Jared Dane, a mere Acolyte, and will hereby be under you care - I promise you, Master, I will not be a dissapointment."

As Jared quitened himself, he lifted his gaze and had it focus in on Sithis, digging his eyesight into the Dark Master whilst he shared a wry smile with him - No doubt this would be a fine and eloquent relationship between the two of them.

 

[Zen]

Eying the student for the first time he looked urge like he was when He was a Padawan."I see. Well just relax. why are you so I What I mean is so talkative out of all my students you talk the most."He said with a smile."Well, Anyways Take a sit, will will begin with Induction. Tell me all about yourself."He asked calmly.

 

[BlueberryPai]

Jared's tongue waggled forth from his mouth as he licked his dry lips, wettening them and readying the pair to form the words which he meant to speak.

Truthfully, he was joyous - Already given a fine compliment by his master, yet, at this point in time, Jared was but threading the waters, feeling his way forward in an attempt to get a general persona of his master. To appease that delightful man was important, hence, he needed to know what he appreciated.

Seating himself into a comfortable position, lounging onto the dojo's floor with a relaxed expression and an everlasting, hidden smile - Dane opened his mouth and began to speak;

"Revered Master, there is not much to tell - I do not doubt you've read my profile, and hence know what a dandy man I am. Born on this very planet, accepted into the cult; raised, fed, given an education and more - I owe everything to Bogan."

Bobbed his head sideways as he said this, his eyes narrowing some as he rolled his tongue inside of his mouth, thinking, pondering and wondering how he should continue.

"As for my skillset - I own a variety of equipments with an aple amount of exercise within them; be it the basic training in the saber, or advanced pratice when it comes to wielding a slugthrower, blaster or a sonic weapon. Although the latter is quite expensive, and I was lucky to be handed one."

Continued on with his little speech, those round eyeballs of his flinching back and forth as he spoke with obvious tones of bravado and pleased laughter; so happy, yet, in his voice there was something lacking - Although the glee was true, the empathic tones formed in his voicebox wasn't to be found; a common trait found in emotionless sociopaths.

"My whole life, I have been formed into a soldier - One to serve, and have therefore not been able to focus as much on my abilities within the usage of the Force itself, which I am hoping that you'll amend, Master Sithis..."

At this point in time, Jared jumped onto his feet in a fluid and effortless motion, waltzing up to Sithis, grinning as a fool whilst keeping his eyes downcast; as a sign of respect - Motion for him to continue on inside.

"Quite the introduction, don't you think? I for one have always found great pleasure in the mere arts of rhetorics - Conversation is one of the finest forms of culture, Master. Do not doubt, for in your eyes, I will be the exact opposite of your other, savage students; I will be a refined prodigy."

A laughter burst out in his stomach, lifting itself upwards and escaping through his throath and mouth, seeing the light of day as Jared continued to gesture for Sithis respectively, motioning for him to come further inside, to join his apprentice in the Dojo.

[OOC]
I don't mean to be rude, but... I find your texts somewhat hard to read >_<
I'd really love it if you just spent a 'lil more time structuring them :'P
Btw, I'm looking forward to this - It'll be fun getting my arse beaten xD
[OOC]

 

[Zen]

(OOC: I LOVE YOUR RP.. it's pwnage. And sorry for my failure of a grammatical mistakes.)

He looked at his student. This one out of all he had was the most best and most well eduction both in speechify and precession.
he continued and examined his Student words first substance was of this. He took his words into his mind and mispositioned it.

""Revered Master, there is not much to tell - I do not doubt you've read my profile, and hence know what a dandy man I am. Born on this very planet, accepted into the cult; raised, fed, given an education and more - I owe everything to Bogan.""

His student showed great care of his words promoting one the rest he did not care for to remember he stood up and leaned on the wall.

"I will now tell you of myself."

He said simply and begun to wonder of his history about the words he wanted to speak of then they came to his thought, moving his right hand over his chin and his left arm over his right elbow he begun to speak.

"It all happened when I was little, but let's move to the good side now shall we I might have to skip a few spots, I was trained By a Jedi Knight When i was in the Jedi order. The Jedi order seemed of a knowledgeable group yet they still are yet I was foolish of realizing that. After that I was trained by a Shade Knight, After I joined the Shade Order. The Knight Later became a Shade Master and I became the Shade Knight after a long sixteen years I have become a Shade Master and my former master had become among the Council of the Shade Order. And then I became All evil and killed of nearly 2/4 of the talloines civilian Populations, And finally Joined here and Taken Fourth students out off all I had you are my best."

He finished slowly and slowly walked towards his student and sat next to him."Anything else before we move on?"He asked slowly and carefully.

 

[BlueberryPai]

Jared's eyes narrowed somewhat sceptically as his Master spoke of himself - After all, he'd read his file and knew of his past; but he guessed they'd bond better in this way - Reading about someone's life on a console was quite... Impersonal. What more, he his Master's life story, and drowsy speech somewhat revealing, although rushed. Very rushed.

"Anything else before we move on?

Truthfully, there wasn't much else - He only wanted to impress his master by actually showing him that he had more than mere brawn to him; and now that the introductions were over with, Jared wanted nothing more than to begin their practices - He was steeming with anticipation.

"Dark Master, I will look forward to your tutorship, and hope for nothing more than vigilance, patience and trials from you - I want to evolve as swiftly as possible; and hopefully surpass those whom are my peers. Hence, I see no need in delaying the invetiable."

Jared's stomach was coiled into a ball of emotions; which were twisting and churning inside, oozing of both excitement, glee and dread - How he was looking forward to it, and coveted his chance to begin this specialized training; under a real Master.

"A wise man once said that if man were to dwell on the past and future, one would forget the present - Therefore, let us lock these stories in a chest, and shut it tight, Master; for it is time to begin the molding, of making me into a man worthy of this Order!"

The apprentice's eyes were filled with vigor as he said this, brimming with pride and shrill thoughts of what were to come - How he wished to begin this trainings of his, to wield a sword, develop his techniques and bend the Force to his will! The mere thought brought him to new heights of glee!

"You stated I were your finest student, but as of now, you've yet to put me on trial; Master - Allow me to prove my own worth, and not let simple rhetorics cloud your judgement; I am the finest of my kin, and I'll prove it to you!

 

[Zen]

He looked at his student he stood up, slowly grabbing three swords and tossing the boy one if he caught it or not it did not matter if he caught the blade it would be in his hands if he didn't it would be on the floor if he tried something else then he did so, Sithis had two blades held on in each hand. He walked towards the stage and took his place at the area where it must stand to dual in a fight..

"Stories, can't be closed if you try to hide them it might bite you on the back it might not they remain with you for all your years of life till death, even if the person dies his knowledge and wisdom is passed down to, His son, student, mother and so forth to there son, mother, children, and student the circle goes on forever like a training wheel." He gave a gentle small laugh.

He waited and waited before speaking again."We will dual and among this dueling stage while we fight you will and may not have mistakes after I decide it's over I will stop the match, Maybe I will explain the mistake or maybe you had no. Will be told later in our third dueling match. After you had learn everything from me."He said slowly.

"When you are ready come up here and make your move or do as you wish, on another note force moves are allowed but don't destroy this place use whatever knowledge you know of the force and use it Aguistin me."He said calmly.

 

[BlueberryPai]

Jared eyed Sithis as he spoke and grabbed three swords, elegant and fine, to so throw one over to his apprentice, whom caught it in a cunningly quick and deft hand.

The weight of the blade was moderate and quite suited for Jared's needs, as his bulging muscles and leatherly sinews knew how to handle it - He had been given a moderate amount of practice when it came to melee weapons; but it had never been a strong point.

"I asked for your guidance, great Master - So that I could be taught to manipulate the Force itself, and bend it to my will... I'm far from potent enough to actually make use of it whilst combating - Hence, I will face you with nothing but my might, and my body. Prepare yourself."

Those words escaped his lips as he spun the blade into the air, testing its length, weight, balance and overall finesse - It was important to know your blade; and by now, he had a fine grasp of it.

Jared lifted his gaze and stared at Sithis, like a hunter readying itself to gut its prey - He was truly going to attempt it, to shred the man's body to mere pieces, and make it so that Sithis was nothing more than food for the worms cravling underneath the Temple. He doubted he'd manage it, and the thought brought some odd, twisted smile on his lips - He wanted to hurt his master, to show him what he was capable of.

Believing himself ready, Jared's arms tensed and lifted themself upwards with the sword in front of him, his fingers wrapped around the hilt securely; keeping a protective stance which would guard his upper- and lower-body. As the Apprentice moved forward, his body became smooth as fluid, his large bulk of muscle relaxing as his joints moved as if they were encased in nothing but oil - He was like a powerful snake, sliding forward and preparing itself to strike his victim.

As Jared approached Sithis, he struck with a simple and predictable manouver, which allowed the apprentice to pack as much power as possible in his swing - Basically, his arms were lifted above his head as he brought the sword down, towards Sithis' chest. What more, he was certain to keep his distance before attacking, so Sithis' wouldn't be able to impale him with a quick stab - With Jared's prowess in mere strength of the body, he doubted the Master would be capable of deflecting his blow with nothing but one arm.

His victory was ensured, surely.

"Gyaaargh!"

 

[Zen]

Looking swiftly at his student he looked wonderful.. His eyes was shown hatred, or he believed he back away for a few seconds trying to gasp a power sniper of both his blades as he throw then up quickly into the air and then caught both of them in his hand, one of each.

"Perfect"He said watching his Student move towards him Sithis studied his movement's and waited Patience till he had made his move. Watching him as the student raised his sword up, and it came down quickly he moved towards the side quickly dodging the damn thing before it could have come of harm, and leaped back to gain distance his aiming to kill.. He sighed suddenly, ramming his hand out quickly impaling a huge force push at him. If hit he would be sent flying, If it were to hit he would tell his student."That's enough, we are going to be moving on. Decreeing the code of the Bogan it's meaning and then on your own words if you do not know it then go look it up.In the Achieve." He said quickly.

If the force did not hit the Boy he would await and block any movement that his student gave to him, whilst that he thought about how unceasing he was about doing such form, and a bit ticked of Sithis was but he did not show it he held it in his head with calm and control.

 

[BlueberryPai]

[OOC]Long speech coming up :'P Hope I didn't miss anything >_< !!
Ah, and, yes... There's loads of mistakes there you can nitpick on - But It's kind of late, so you won't find me go editing it xD[OOC]

"Gyaaargh!"

Jared's blade slashed downwards in a ferocious strike, cutting nothing but air where bone, sinews and flesh should have been; bringing a looped smile upon the Apprentice's lips, when he realized his devious master had graciously evaded his attack.

Wonderful, what gorgeous display of swift reflexes and fine motorics - Even with that, Jared would not give in, and as his sword struck the ground from his previous strike, he let out a large grunt as he spun around in a barbaric manner, aiming to chop his master's head off by using the built-up momentum he gained from his spin.

"Ghrrrk-!"

'Thud'

It never came to pass, as Sithis' expertise in the force caught ahold of Jared; sending him tummeling backwards and down onto ground - It was as if he'd been struck with a hammer; not that the velocity of the Force-Push had been damaging, but the length he'd been throttled had come as a shock to the young apprentice.

"That's enough, we are are moving on. The next step is decreeing the Code of Bogan and its meaning. This you shall tell me in your own words, and if you do not know them - Do find them in the archive."

Flustered and somewhat embarassed; yet ecstatic to find his Master to be more than a worthy match of him, Jared lifted himself up from the ground with a small groan - He'd been given a small bruise when impacting onto the floor; his left shoulder was aching

But he refused to show his weakness to Sithis, hence, he stood up straight and allowed his voicebox to reverbate through the halls; filled with pride and strength - His blade kept in his hand in a firm manner. He hadn't let go of it, even after he'd been thrown like a rag-doll and sent flying by Sithis' display of Force-Prowess.

"As written by the first Bogan; this code has been seared into my mind from time immemorial; it was the story I was told when going to sleep as a child - What I was taught at the age of mere five, and what I thought of when needing strength:

No peace, only suffering.
No knowledge, only instinct.
No serenity, only passion.
No harmony, only chaos.
No life, only death."

This code, Master - It means everything for me, for it is, after all, the embodiment of us, the Dark Jedi.

Jared took a deep breath as he recited the very code the Dark Jedi, their essence; and as his gaze was focused on his Master, his voice dripping of joy, with subtle undertones of reverence and respect - Jerad was more than happy to tell this man of what he knew.

"The first line is the very truth of the world, Master. There is no peace, there is only suffering. From the moment we are born, we struggle for survival in this harsh world - But let me not test your patience, Master. In its essence, the first parapgraph of this code tells us that all life is suffering. We must learn to accept this fact, for, if we don't - We cannot accumulate the hate, anger and other forms of strong emotions which motivates us, drives us towards our goal."

The apprentice nodded thoughtful as he said this, obviously reciting from memory, whilst intertwining his very own thoughts into the solution. With a curt nod, he continued on with the second line - Speaking up; wishing his best to make his master see his true potential.

"The next paragraph is essential - For it drives us to act, to take action and do what is right. We do gather knowledge, we know our ways and increase our abilities; but that's not true knowledge, if you do not put it to use. Hence, there is no knowledge - Only instict, for when you act; you take action, you take the initiative for change, and walk the path of adaption and strength - The road of evolution."

Whilst speaking, his voice reverbating through the room, Jared had crossed his arms above his chest, his chin raised as his eyes was closed - Thinking deeply and seeming to meditate, his answers coming from somewhere deep within himself.

"I believe the next paragraph to be the simplest. Passion, emotions, love, hate; it is what gives us our power; drives us, the Dark Jedi, and all the other billions of intelligent beings in this universe to simply... Act. Emotions are not to be repressed, but to be enjoyed and felt to the fullest - For it gives us unparalleled power."

The young man continued on with his little speech, finding it quite pleasant to display his fine thoughts on this matter - Sharing, allowing his Master to get a full insight into his very, most personal thoughts. Although he barely knew the man, he knew this was necessary - A form of bonding, and strengthening their tie.

"The next paragraph speaks of chaos - There is no grand plan in this world; no finely woven string of fate, bound to each, individual. The Force itself is chaotic, it is up to us to grab ahold of it and cow it to our will; we shall use this chaos to our advantage - Strive on it and grow - For chaos is a means for an end; we shall use it to further out aims, for such is the world."

Knowing his little speech was at an end, he opened up his eyes and allowed them to focus on Sithis in a steady manner, allowing the man to understand that the next part would be quick - For they both knew the meaning of it, as they'd been pondering on it for many-a-years in their fleeting life.

"As for death, it is everywhere, endless and neverending - One shall not deny this fact. We are all meaningless, unimportant in this wast universe; we shall not fool ourself in thinking otherwise: Whatever we do or are, plan or think - We must imbue it and be it to the fullest - For this is life, fleeting. Unimportant. It is our task to make it matter, and live it to the fullest. One shall not ponder on what is to be after death; for all that matters is this life, and what you can achieve in it - How you can evolve."

With that, Jared silenced himself, his throath somewhat parched from the speech, expectant and hopeful for a positive reaction from Sithis.

 

[Zen]

Looking at him as he had heard speak and finish the sentence he then slowly spoke."Very well follow me."He said with a bit of an annoying mumble. He wants to be the best? Or is the best let's see if he can past my simple challenge and then I'll see if his the best of this generation. He thought to myself if the student followed him, they would move to some form of training area.

He flicked the doors open. And the room went dark he then slowly flicked the lights the room formed into a advance training area. he held a whole branch of obstacles.

He spoke quietly and moved his hand towards the moving pillars."I want you to use force push and pull, once you get on the lower pillar I want you to embrace the force within you and pull the pillar up and then stop it. After that I want you to pull the pillar down so you can get on the next one. And again pull it once you get to a certain point you have to push yourself towards the next closer edge and then pull the next highest pillar down. The pillars are unstable or most of them are just don't drop down. Or you will die.."He chuckled slowly if he did drop down Sithis would save him. If he did this correctly and got to the highest Pillar and pushed his way to the landing his next challenge would await him."Begin..Or do you want me to explain how Force push and pull works? So you can gasp the information to perform it."He finished slowly."If not begin then"

 

[BlueberryPai]

[OOC]
Sorry, but I'm scratching this character - He didn't feel quite right for me.
[OOC]

Seeing his challenge, he leapt forward and tripped atop of the blade he was still holding, which accidentally pierced his skull. He was instantaneously killed in a swift and painless manner; leaving behind nothing but a pool of blood, and some quick memories for Sithis to carry.