Jasper Correll

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Jasper Correll​

NAME: Jasper Correll
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Umbaran
AGE: 21
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11
WEIGHT: 150 lbs
EYES: Amber
HAIR: His hair is black, and falls around his shoulders
SKIN: A ghostly white
CREDITS: 778
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: a small scar through his left eyebrow from an assassination attempt.
DOMINATE HAND: Left
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Jasper is a frail Umbaran, using his wit more than his strength in combat. 5/10
DEXTERITY: While his aim is exceptional, he himself is not the most dexterous person in the world. 6/10
CONSTITUTION: Jasper is very frail, and one good kick to the chest could incapacitate him. 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: Jasper is incredibly intelligent, taking all of his free time reading and using Jedi Holocrons. 8/10
WISDOM: He is incredibly wise for his age, but he hopes to become wiser as he grows older. 8/10
CHARISMA: Jasper is as charismatic as the most charismatic human, but his slight empathy and natural umbaran abilities of persuasion make him a dangerous man. 13/10
FORCE POWERS:

SKILLS: Lightsaber combat
He can sense lies, and has a natural persuasion, with the ability to force his will upon the weak minded.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Makashi

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Jaspers biggest strength flows from his Charisma, and his ability to solve most situations without resorting to violence. While an excellent diplomat, his biggest strength is directly preportioned to his weakness. Jaspers physical strength is very lacking, and when the diplomacy fails, Jasper used to resort to hiding. He is also incredibly arrogant and full of himself, hoping the ways of the Jedi will fix his character flaws. Pysically, his largest weaknesses are his frailty and vulnerability to bright lights.

GEAR: Like most JedI Padawans, Jasper has few possesion. He has Black Regal robes of the Rootai Order, convereted into Jedi robes. He also has a journal he carries around in which he writes down all he does.

SHIP: Jaspe had an expensive ship from umbara, but he gave it away when he entered the Jedi Order. In for a penny in for a pound.

PETS: None

PERSONALITY: Jasper is an intellectual soul who grew weary of Umbaran politics. He seeks knowledge wherever he can get it, and wishes to learn to solve all problems with a steady mind. His intelligence however directly leads to his character flaws. He is cold, calculating, and similar to a computer in his thought process. He will say what needs to be said, even when no one wants to hear it. Jasper is sure of his intelligence, and very prideful about his standing on Umbara. Because of his umbaran upbringing and usual manipulation of others, there is almost no one he trusts, save his younger brother.


HISTORY: Jasper is a young Umbaran with an interesting past. Raised from a young age by a council family of the Rootai caste, Jasper had a life in which the most vast sources of knowledge on Umbara were open to him .He sought knowledge wherever he could find it, and wanted to make his father proud. As the second eldest son in the family, he knew that it was a high possibility that he would one day represent his entire family on the planet. At age sixteen, his vast knowledge was finally seen to be such a strength, that his father ordered Jaspers older brother, to be killed. This left Jasper as the second in command in the family. Days later Jaspers father, Valter Correll, was killed by an assasination plot. This placed Jasper on the council, making him the youngest Umbaran ever to achieve the highest possible status within the caste.

For weeks Jasper settled disputes peacefully, seemingly bending people to his will. The murder rate on umbara dropped by 89 percent in his district. His unprecedented control over other people caused him to rise higher in the council, causing panic among the other members. His father had been incredibly influential as well, but not to the seemingly unstoppable power that Jasper seemed to possess. Soon the bribes began, as the council members attempted to use his influence over the people to raise them higher in rank, or obtain them money. However it was quickly shown that Jasper did not care in the least about them, and that the only thing that mattered to Jasper was himself, and the life of his brother.

It was late one night when Jasper was doing paperwork in his office that he had what could only be described as a premonition. He saw himself, only older, wielding a sword of light and fighting a strange creature. He saw himself, at a funeral, crying over the remains of someone… his twin brother. Reality snapped back, and something suddenly made sense to him. He had read about the Jedi before, and there odd power to influence others and the world around them, he must be a Jedi. He had seen his brother moves objects before with his mind, but Jasper always passed it off as some sort of complaint. Everything made sense to him now, the council would try to influence his brother, hoping that he would develop the same powers as Jasper himself. He had no clue when the premonition referred to, but deep in his gut he knew he could change things. He gathered his things, his robes, and his money. He set of to take his brother, and leave the cruel politics of umbara behind for ever.

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Eiji

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Minor Update. I'll probbably revamp the whole thing and make it an interesting literary profile if I ever get accepted to the Jedi Order.
 

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That's not a very minor update.
 
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