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Jeggao Balgoh (Complete)

NAME: Jeggao Balgoh (last name pronounced ball-go)
FACTION: The Jedi Order
RANK: hopeful
SPECIES: Jeggao is a human.
AGE: 15 years old
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’ 1”
WEIGHT: 85 lbs.
EYES: Light Brown
HAIR: Dark Brown
SKIN: Mild tan
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
DOMINATE HAND: Jeggao is left-handed, but prefers to grip his weapon with two hands. The left hand lower on the hilt, and the right hand above it.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

STRENGTH: 4/10- average
DEXTERITY(superior): Extremely agile and nimble. Rather fast runner.
CONSTITUTION(average): In good health.
INTELLIGENCE (superior): Very smart, learns very quickly. When Jeggao has free time, he likes to spend it in the many archives and libraries of the jedi order, often spending hours researching and studying all topics from a to z, particularly the history of the order.
WISDOM(below average): Still has much to learn.
CHARISMA(average): 4/10

FORCE POWERS: basic precognition, light telekenesis

SKILLS:
-Excellent battle Strategist
-Time studying blueprints and designs of most common galatic computer and security systems allows Jeggao to get his way around them.
-Knowledge and extremely intense study of the history, crafting, and important of the lightsaber has given Jeggao a skillset that allows him to construct lightsabers with extreme speed, quality, and precision.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Form 0

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths-
• Strong in the force
• Highly intelligent, quick learner
• Extreme loyalty
• Excellent agility and movement
• Great skills with a lightsaber

Weaknesses-
• Extreme loyalty
• Physically weak
• Very Impatient
• Often exhibits risky behavior, rarely uses caution

GEAR: Jeggao wears a pair of modern eyeglasses made of surgical plastic with rectangular frames.

PETS: No.

PERSONALITY:
Jeggao is best described as an intelligent, ambitious young jedi, who is fiercely loyal to all things that he cares for. He is socially akward, quite brilliant, and always determined to better himself. He is dedicated to the jedi order, and is very respectful of his elders and superiors, strongly believing in their superior wisdom and knowledge of the force. He is often shy when meeting new people, however once he warms up, he can be very caring. All in all, he is a young jedi with a bright future ahead of him.

HISTORY:
Jeggao was born fifteen years before the current time of the rp. His father is unknown, but his mother was the famous jedi master, Jo-Jo Balgoh, a respected jedi consular and master. He was born in the jedi enclave that Jo-Jo called home, and from birth, was immediately recognized as a potential jedi. As the years passed, Jeggaos connection with the force increased. For nearly five and a half years Jeggao closely observed his mother, learning as much as he could about the force without undergoing training. Life was good.

What happened next in Jeggao’s life was tragic. Shortly after his fourteenth and a half birthday, his mother was sent on a classified assignment by the jedi council at the enclave. At first, everything seemed routine, but after a period of more than a week, Jeggao became concerned as to the whereabouts of his mother. He pleaded with the council for information, but nothing was told to him. Eventually Jeggao had his worst fears confirmed when he was called before the council, and informed that his mother had been killed. To this day, the details of her assignment and of her death remain a mystery to Jeggao.

After the death of his mother, Jeggao vowed to follow in his mother’s footsteps and become a jedi. Since that time, about six months have passed, and Jeggao is currently seeking acceptance into the order.


KILLS: N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES: N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: N/A

ROLE-PLAYS: N/A
 
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NAME: Jeggao Balgoh (last name pronounced ball-go)
FACTION: The Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan Learner
You have to start as a hopeful.

SPECIES: Jeggao is a human.
AGE: 15 years old
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’ 1”
WEIGHT: 85 lbs.
EYES: Light Brown
HAIR: Dark Brown
SKIN: Mild tan

Anorexic?

CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
DOMINATE HAND: Jeggao is left-handed, but prefers to grip his weapon with two hands. The left hand lower on the hilt, and the right hand above it.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

Nothin' wrong here.

STRENGTH(partially superior, partially below average): Excellent lightsaber combatant, very proficient and strong with the force, however physically weak.

All they're looking for here is your physical power. Everything else goes in the "Strengths and Weaknesses" section.

DEXTERITY(superior): Extremely agile and nimble. Light weight, and short stature allow for greatly increased dodging and ducking and provide greatly increased speed.

Speed = long legs and/or strong muscles = taller and heavier.

CONSTITUTION(average): In good health.
INTELLIGENCE (superior): Very smart, learns very quickly. When Jeggao has free time, he likes to spend it in the many archives and libraries of the jedi order, often spending hours researching and studying all topics from a to z, particularly the history of the order.
WISDOM(below average): While wise beyond his years, he still has much to learn.

Fine, I suppose. I think if someone were wise beyond their years, they'd have an above-average wisdom, though.

CHARISMA(average): Has a hard time getting attached to people, causes, and things, but once he does, he is fiercely loyal. Examples include his loyalty to the jedi order, and his extreme attachment to his lightsaber.

Charisma represents what others think of you, not vice versa.

FORCE POWERS: N/A

Starter Force-Sensitives get basic precognition, light telekenesis (I-can-move-a-rock-with-my-brain-yay!) and maybe one more basic thing.

SKILLS:
-Excellent battle Strategist
-Time studying blueprints and designs of most common galatic computer and security systems allows Jeggao to get his way around them.
-Knowledge and extremely intense study of the history, crafting, and important of the lightsaber has given Jeggao a skillset that allows him to construct lightsabers with extreme speed, quality, and precision.

Fine.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Because of his short stature, and great speed and agility, Jeggao choose to learn the ataru form of lightsaber combat.

You start out with only Form 0.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths-
• Strong in the force
• Highly intelligent, quick learner
• Extreme loyalty
• Excellent agility and movement
• Great skills with a lightsaber

Weaknesses-
• Extreme loyalty
• Physically weak

Your Strength/Weakness ratio is very skewed.

GEAR: Jeggao is not easily attached to anything, with one exception. Other than his own, one of Jeggao’s hobbies is collecting the lightsabers used by famous jedi combatants. It is these sabers, along with Jeggao’s own, that he considers to be his prized possessions. Most of them he keeps locked up securely in his room at the jedi enclave, however he carries his with him at all times. He adores his lightsaber so much, that he even gave it a name, Jeggao Junior. It is heavily modified to fit his grip, and has a deep blue blade, traditionally associated with jedi guardians. He also wears a pair of eyeglasses with rectangular lenses, that are made of surgical plastic. He sports the standard shinigami robes.

You can't start out with even a single lightsaber. Your first should come near the end of your training.
 

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Sorry for all of the mistakes. This wasn't made clear in the template, or any of the guides. It was rather confusing to be quite honest. I will fix it all immediately.

-History is added.
-Strength is fixed.
-Rank is fixed.
-Wisdom is fixed.
-Force powers are added.
-Lightsaber form fixed.
-Strengths and weaknesses balanced.
-Gear is fixed.
-Charisma is fixed.
-Dexterity Modified.

That should be all....
sorry for the mistakes.

And physical information is staying the same. I am 5'1" and I weigh 85 lbs. and I am by no means anorexic.
 
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