Kaza L. O'Bizzark

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Kaza L. O’Bizzark
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NAME: Kaza L. O’Bizzark
SPECIES: Trandoshan
AGE: 30 Standard years
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 7 Feet 2 Inches
WEIGHT: 206 Pounds
EYES: Bright Yellow
SKIN: Lime Green
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A warrior tattoo on his right bicep, depicting a rancor skull
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

FACTION: None
RANK: Indie

STRENGTH: Being a Trandoshan, Kaza is naturally physically powerful (9/10)
DEXTERITY: Kaza is fairly agile from his years as a hunter and can be very stealthy (7/10)
CONSTITUTION: Kaza is in exceptional health and is a fast healer (7/10)
INTELLIGENCE: Kaza is fairly intelligent, clever, but not a scholar (6/10)
WISDOM: Kaza is business smart but seems to lack an interest in learning politics (5/10)
CHARISMA: Kaza is an odd sort of Trandoshan. He’s very charismatic when he wants to be, however most of the time he scares people or intimidates them based on his appearance alone. His words however are very carefully chosen and he is said to have a silver tongue when it comes to getting what he wants. (3/10)


PERSONALITY: Cold blooded, a killer, and all around a slime ball, Kaza L. O’Bizzark is a businessman. He is very formal and particular about his details and is used to getting what he wants, one way or another. However, he has learned that intimidation won’t work in every occasion, so he has adopted a softer side, a more negotiable side. When he wants to be, he is very charismatic with others who are willing to interact with him. He can compromise and works well with others, as long as his goals aren’t at risk.

However as a businessman, Kaza is a force to be reckoned with. He is a powerful slaver boss back on his home planet. He is cold, calculated, and carries a sense of dread with him everywhere. Most people would get the impression of a hitman, and they’d be right more often than not. He’s a clever and cunning liar and a damned fine actor.

BIOGRAPHY: Kaza L. O’Bizzark was born a normal Trandoshan male. He had no defects, no illnesses, and no weakness. He was strong, even when he was young, and grew up in the normal tradition of Trandosha. When he became a young man, he went with the others males in his village to the planet of Kashyyyk to begin their initiation hunt; the rite of passage that all Trandoshans must go through. They were each to hunt one adult male Wookie and bring the pelt back to their shuttle, all before morning.

Kaza hunted alone, using what he learned to move quickly and effectively across the planet’s surface until he came across a Wookie settlement. He stalked through the camp until he found his target; a young male with thick brown fur. He had no distinguishing marks but that wasn’t important to Kaza; he just needed the kill. A swift flash of movement and a precise strike from his blade put the Wookie down without any alarms. He dragged the body to a secluded spot and began to skin his prize, taking his time to enjoy the moment. He was officially an adult.

He trudged back to the shuttle, his new coat slung across his shoulders, and made a startling discovery that he was the only initiate to return. Apparently the others had been captured or killed. Kaza took this as destiny crowning him the best of his generation and took his victory with more pride. He flew back with a smile that couldn’t be removed.

Years passed. Kaza joined a slaver cell known as The Bloody Skulls. He started as an initiate but he had worked his way to being second in command. He handled the accounts, supplies, income, and profit. He learned everything he could from the boss of The Bloody Skulls, an old lizard known as Salaath. Salaath took Kaza under his wing and taught him everything there was to know about the slaver business. Kaza also learned that because Mercenary work and Slaves were the main export of Tradosha, their work was very important. There were more slavers than mercenaries; a ratio of 7 to 1. Kaza took all the knowledge he had gained in the years and eventually decided the leave the Skulls and start his own slaver cell. He hired his own crew, bought his own fleet of ships, and created an empire of the trade. His cell, known as the Star Slavers, became a curse in the galaxy. More time passed, and by the age of 28 Kaza became one of the most famous and feared souls in the sector.

Suddenly, things took a turn for the worse. The galaxy slowly went into lock down. The Sith, an old threat that had been stopped nearly a hundred years ago, had resurfaced and began to threaten nearby Republic systems. This caused some planets and trade routes to shut down and deny outside traders out of fear.

Unfortunately, most of the Trandoshan slave trade clientele was among those planets. With his main source of clients gone, Kaza had to figure out a new plan. He needed to reestablish his trade routes however he could. If he didn't, his business and the business of Trandosha would be in jeopardy. He knew that there would always be people who wanted slaves, he just had to find them.

He set out into the galaxy with a plan in mind. And nothing was going to stop him from achieving his goal.

SKILLS:
Kaza’s skill set is very specific. He is a fantastic hunter and all skills pertaining to hunting. He is not a survivalist, so he wouldn’t be able to survive for weeks without food or water or help. Kaza is also a businessman. He knows all about business and how deals work, making contracts, stock, how to maintain income, etc. He is a very gifted negotiator. He is very agile and sneaky, hiding his tracks well if need be.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Kaza’s Strengths lie in his combat skill and business skills. He is very strong and smart, making him a dangerous opponent in a fight. His business knowledge and silver tongue can make him convincing and he can seem very sincere at times. He is very patriotic in terms of his support for the Trandoshan people. He will often think about the importance of his mission when in times of doubt.

Kaza’s Weakness is in his attitude. He is stubborn and isn’t a peaceful person. Talking isn't how he usually wants to settle his problems. However, he will try the peaceful route if he is truly bored or curious. He can maneuver a conversation like a true haggler. He's sneaky and not entirely trustworthy.

GEAR:
Kaza has one main outfit, Businessman O'Bizzark
As Businessman O’Bizzark, he wears a classic slaver outfit. A red flight suit decorated along the shoulders and waist with Wookie fur. A rack of small bones tied in a ceremonial fashion decorate his chest.
He has no shoes or gloves or headgear.
His hunting gear is rarely seen, and if you do see it you’re probably dead. A classic Trandoshan Hunting rifle, serrated combat knife, and traps. These traps can vary depending on prey. He also has a comlink and a personal datapad.

ADDITIONAL CONTENT


SLAVES:

Pierce: A human male, 18 years old, black hair, brown eyes. He is fairly average all around but is stronger than average on account of the manual labor he’s used to doing, and he’s also fairly attractive to those who like humans.
He’s been raised in slavery and is extremely loyal to Kaza and his organization. Pierce sees Kaza as a father figure mostly and respects the hunter. Pierce travels with Kaza wherever he goes.
Pierce is dressed in a normal, used, white flight suit and boots. A collar sits permanently around his neck and there’s a small explosive device in the base of his skull. Should he try to escape or kill Kaza, the bomb will go off and kill Pierce.

Ship:
The Banshee - Aggressor-class attack craft
 
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Hey Caligula!

Great start to the profile, and I'm so excited you're joining the faction! My apologies I haven't responded to your PM - the beginning of the timeline has been a bit hectic.

To get you started, I'm going to make three suggestions. One and two, go ahead and check out both the general history for the timeline and the Republic history. There is some wonky language in there about the Sith coming from the Jedi and posing a threat. The Sith have been at the corner of the Republic for a century, since the Jedi and Republic beat them there, and have only recently begun to prod their vile hooves back into the galaxy. The part about Trandosha being relatively new is a cool dynamic, though, I like it!

Thirdly, just take a few minutes when you have them and read over your profile. Out loud if you can! That will help with fixing some flow and grammatical errors, but there is certainly nothing egregious.

For now, in the sign-ups, I'm going to put you as pending. I'll take my Assistant Faction Leader @Beta12, the Chancellor of the Senator, to help you clean up any confusion or questions you have so we can get you approved and roleplaying! Let me know if there's anything I can do.

Cheers,
TAC
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Yes, feel free to PM me once you have read TAC's profile and gone over the suggested corrections. If you have any questions surrounding the profile, such as grammar, feel free to PM me!
 

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Okay, thanks for your tips! I hope he's ready for the Senate now. If you find anymore problems, please be blunt and point out whatever doesn't work.
 

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@Beta12 can approve your profile, @Caligula, once he thinks it is up to speed. He can add you to the roster, approve you on the sign-ups, etc
 

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You have done a fine job with grammar corrections, even if there are still a few bumps here and there surrounding sentence structure.

I really did enjoy the read, and the concept you have put forth surrounding Trandosha's more recent entrance into the realm of Republic Politics is quite interesting indeed. If I were him, though, I would probably downplay the fact that his sash is made of a sentient beings skin/fur, because that might open a can of worms that would send the Sector Rangers into a tizzy.

It will be very interesting to see how a senator so concerned about their own planet deals in a realm where many planets are taken into consideration.

You are accepted into the Senate, and will be added to the roster shortly. Just remember, the whole slavery, wookie murder scandal might bubble up around him if he makes too many enemies within the Senate. Also, don't stand to close to any wookie representatives if one is ever made. @Caligula
 
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Hey, if you're ever looking for a hunting partner with loose morals, I'd be willing to pitch in.
 

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Hello! As new AFL for the Republic (in charge of the Senate) please let us know as soon as possible if you are still interested in playing a Senator. Thank you for your time.
 

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Greetings! Just an fyi, we have a Senate Hearing upcoming and you are invited to attend. Please let us know if you intend to participate, and/or if you are still interested in remaining within the Senate. Thank you for your time! :)
 
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