Knights of Anki (Awaiting Approval)

[Overseer]

Knights of Anki
Leader: Mirak Licnev

History: The Knights of Anki are an upstart group, who take pride in the protection of those unable to protect themselves. Started by Mirak Licnev, shortly before he departed from Alpheridies. As a former soldier, Mirak took pride in protecting others, but as all who bother to look find out, the military he served with such loyalty, was not as noble as it appeared. The Knights of Anki, are protectors, influenced by none and helping any who come to them.

Funding: The Council of Alpheridies is main source of income for the Knights of Anki.

Location: Currently, aboard a Delaya-class Courier, until a more suitable location is found.

Forces: Their force consist of The Deliverer (flagship) and the True Blade, Mirak's personal starfighter.

Motives: To protect the unprotected with no ulterior motive.

Affiliations: Alpheridies

Members:
Templar: Lord Mirak
Shield: T3-M6

 

[D.C.]

I think that, before this is going to be approved, by GR1M you need to expand on ... pretty much everything. Take a look at other independant factions to get a good example.

 

[Lavi]

Not meaning to be mean, but this sounds like the Jedi Order under a different name in its early beginnings. Expansion on pretty much everything would be required.

 

[Storm]

<Headdesk>

My advice to you:

1. Build up a good post count; establish yourself as a user properly, for some time, before even considering making an independent faction.
2. Work on an original idea; this, as Lavi pointed out, sounds rather like the early Jedi Order.
3. Join Main Factions before doing anything with independent ones.

This needs a lot of work. Expand everything, and work on the ideas for it; history and all. Need help, please do ask. =)