Kos Rath

[Soverin]

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[Undine]

Someone should be along shortly to tell you that there are no padawans and that you'll need to change any mention of the term to that of "initiate" not that I've ever considered the difference to be all that important. That being said, awesome character, I'd definitely be down to RP with you sometime if you'd like. His past as a Sith would definitely earn him a position as a kindred spirit as far as my Jedi Knight is concerned, as she has much trouble quelling her more bestial instincts at times. The profile itself is pretty slick and I look forward to seeing where you take him as a character.​

 

[Soverin]

Someone should be along shortly to tell you that there are no padawans and that you'll need to change any mention of the term to that of "initiate" not that I've ever considered the difference to be all that important. That being said, awesome character, I'd definitely be down to RP with you sometime if you'd like. His past as a Sith would definitely earn him a position as a kindred spirit as far as my Jedi Knight is concerned, as she has much trouble quelling her more bestial instincts at times. The profile itself is pretty slick and I look forward to seeing where you take him as a character.​

Ah! You're too kind. I realized all too late that the timeline canon title was initiate and not padawan haha. I'll end up changing it someday when I'm not lazy. I would love to set up and RP some time, as I'm coming to the faction pretty much without knowing a soul -- Kos gonna need some buddies.

 

[Valen Pelora]

Hey @Soverin!

The formatting is beautiful and I love the concept. However, I do have some concerns. When you posed the question about a Jedi Red Sith, members correctly identified that Red Sith are naturally predisposed to the Dark Side. This would make it very difficult for a Red Sith to adhere to the 'Jedi' life. We are significantly more relaxed about certain actions than what people think when they think Jedi because of the nature of the war. It's not impossible to have a character that is a Red Sith and a Jedi. However, that character would be very unique.

This is my incredibly long winded way of saying this, I need more than what you have here. The history doesn't give me much on how he was accepted into the Order, how he manages to fight off the Darkside urges, how his FS went undiscovered for so long, or even how long he has been a Jedi. This is all critically important information for a character like this.

 

[Undine]

You could always have his mother/father have been rejected from the tribe for being weak or something but they managed to survive elsewhere in the galaxy. Eventually a Jedi stumbled upon your family and offered they a way to give you, their son, a better life among the Jedi. He would have been old enough to retain much about his culture but young enough to be properly trained as a Jedi. Maybe they were meiloorun fruit farmers or something.​

 

[210yeti]

Dat code tho

 

[Soverin]

Hey @Soverin!

The formatting is beautiful and I love the concept. However, I do have some concerns. When you posed the question about a Jedi Red Sith, members correctly identified that Red Sith are naturally predisposed to the Dark Side. This would make it very difficult for a Red Sith to adhere to the 'Jedi' life. We are significantly more relaxed about certain actions than what people think when they think Jedi because of the nature of the war. It's not impossible to have a character that is a Red Sith and a Jedi. However, that character would be very unique.

This is my incredibly long winded way of saying this, I need more than what you have here. The history doesn't give me much on how he was accepted into the Order, how he manages to fight off the Darkside urges, how his FS went undiscovered for so long, or even how long he has been a Jedi. This is all critically important information for a character like this.

Gonna work on this today so I can get this profile finished up ASAP. This is a good schematic for what I need to repair though, let me see what I can do to make things more broad!

 

[Soverin]

@Valen Pelora some alterations have been made, hope to have cleared things up a bit in terms of backstory / history. Let me know if anything still looks strangely!

 

[Valen Pelora]

I'm tagging @Malon, @Intratec, and @Vinny to look over the Sith backstory portions. Nothing looks out of the ordinary to me in that regard. You have addressed all my other concerns.

APPROVED!!!

 

[Aberforth]

Do you think you could upload an higher resolution version of this? It looks really nice, but it is a pain to read.

 

[Soverin]

Do you think you could upload an higher resolution version of this? It looks really nice, but it is a pain to read.

Altered with appropriate spoiler for better reading.

 

[Logan]

I still can't get over how awesome the shop job on the FC is.

 

[Soverin]

I still can't get over how awesome the shop job on the FC is.

Only took me like ten seconds, eleven tops.

 

[Vinny]

Looks good. Took a minute to read it with the lower res but I got through. Thumbs Up!

 

[Deviant]

Like always, great formatting is great. Excited to see what you have in store for him, @Soverin.