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Kreet

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NAME: Kreet.
FACTION: The Galactic Senate.
RANK: Senator.
SPECIES: Feeorin.
AGE: Two hundred and thirty three human years.
GENDER: Male.
HEIGHT: Seven foot and four inches, slightly taller than an average Feeorin.
WEIGHT: Two hundred and seventy pounds.
EYES: Yellow.
HAIR: Feeorin have tentacles, but Kreet does wear gold bands on his.
SKIN: Mottled blue.
CREDITS: 1,000 Credits.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Kreet has no nose, or no nasal cavity. He can smell, however. Kreet also has a tattoo of his home world on his left breast, a reminder of where he came from and what he fights for.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Kreet has no strength in the Force.

STRENGTH: Feeorin are volatile by nature, and Kreet is incredibly strong, many times stronger than a human.
DEXTERITY: Kreet does not rely on his ability to dodge to win a fight. Being seven feet tall does not leave you very quick. However, Kreet can run very quickly if victory is out of the question.
CONSTITUTION: Feeorin can live to be four hundred years old, and grow more powerful as they age. At over two hundred, Kreet is very healthy both physically and mentally.
INTELLIGENCE: Feeorin are not geniuses, but Kreet has studied a very long time to be strong in the Senate, and has learned much along the way. He might not win every chess game, but he isn't bantha fodder.
WISDOM: Kreet has lived for hundreds of years, and has seen much. Using his many life experiences, he likes to try and guide political decisions.
CHARISMA: Kreet has the appeal of a doorknob. He is not handsome, he is blunt, and he is massive.

PERSONALITY:
The Feeorin race is not a pleasant race. They are highly impersonal and very easy to anger. Most species view the Feeorin as savage and unruly, but Kreet tries hard to change the disdain towards his race. Kreet does has a violent temperment, but he does what he can to stay his rage in the face of diversity. The Senate is a group of species dedicated to angering each other, and Kreet tries not to be in the center of the conflict.

Kreet takes pride in his physical form. He is big and he is strong, and Kreet does what he can to stay that way. His style reflects his personality, be stronger and you will succeed. He bears a longing for his adopted home world, Odryn, at all times. However, he knows he cannot go back as the in-fighting between Feeorin is constant, and that pains him greatly. He knows his place is in the Senate, and if he can help his people, it is by not being on Odryn.

BIOGRAPHY:
Kreet's story starts and ends with being one of the only Feeorin Senators in history. The Feeorin race did not much care for politics, for politics did not include smashing and crushing. The Feeorins were looked at as savages, and this was easy to understand. However, Kreet knew not why, until he was old enough to understand that long ago the existence of his home planet had been threatened by the Feeorins themselves. They had threathened The Sanctum, a place on his home-world where the Exalted, the leader of the Feeorin, could enter. It was immensely respected by Kreet's people, and he began to understand why others would fear Feeorin. If they would threaten the most sacred place of their people, what else might they do? Kreet eventually left his planet, Odryn, in search of a way to help change the galaxy's perspective of the Feeorin. He would show the galaxy that he was different, that he could assist others, and that the Feeorin people were not defined by the acts of a few.

Eventually he found a place in his studies, where he learned enough to work as an ambassador, and finally becoming a Senator. Politics are not Kreet's favorite thing, but he knows how important they are to helping conserve his planet, and from keeping the other races from simply wiping his out due to fear. The stigma against Kreet is immense, as many Senators do not look upon the Feeorin favorably. Many of Kreet's ideas for the Senate have been shot down in the past, but he is adamant that the Senate is where he belongs. Kreet houses a slight disdain for the Jedi, bearing witness to several "righteous acts" during his years of traveling and studying. He believes all Jedi think other species are a means to an end, as long as they accomplish their goal, they do not care what they destroy in the process.
FORCE POWERS:
Kreet has no understanding of the Force.​

SKILLS:
Kreet is immensely powerful, due to his size and Feeorin bloodline. Due to his height, he can reach much further than most, making him dangerous in close-quarters combat. Kreet is also decent with a blaster, though by no means is he a marksman. Kreet has a decent understanding of medical equipment, and can perform battlefield first aid if necessary. Similar to Nautolans, Feeorin can use their tentacles as a sensory aide, helping him fight in the dark.​

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Kreet can use many close-quarter weapons, but he has no studies in lightsaber combat.


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Kreet has many strengths. He is seven feet tall, has a very long reach, and can use his massive size to his advantage. Kreet can also use his size to his advantage in the courts, being physically intimidating to smaller races. Kreet has lived for hundreds of years, allowing him to witness many events in history. Kreet is not easily surprised, and has limited facial features, so it is hard to tell what Kreet is thinking.

However, Kreet has many weaknesses. He is sometimes ashamed of his race, and he knows other Senators think less of him due to being Feeorin. He is prone to fits of anger, and is very easy to rile up. He always makes attempts to keep his head level, but every rose has thorns. Kreet is not the most nimble being in the galaxy, and he cannot jump very high despite being very tall.

GEAR:
Kreet avoids wearing Senate robes as often as he can, preferring a leather top with no sleeves to grant him full range of motion, coupled with slightly loose fitting pants. However, his Senate robes are silver, with green trimming. Kreet also wears gold rings around his head tentacles, a symbol of importance among the Feeorin.​
 
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Darby Shelton

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OH NO NOW I HAVE TO CHANGE MY BACKSTORY.

LIKE, THREE WORDS IN IT.

#FeeorinPride
 

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my god

three whole words?

Blasphemy!
 

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I know, it was a whole lot. I barely managed it without serious physical injury.

I just wasn't sure if anyone else was playing a Feeorin, since it's not a common race.

So I just had to confirm in my backstory that there were, indeed, other Feeorin Jedi.
 

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Well, cherish the knowledge that you are now one of two Feeorins here.
 

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And Kreet has been edited to now be a Senator. What a turn of events.
 

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Whaat ? But i loved him as a Jedi :(
 

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HE WAS A STRONG AND BRAVE JEDI, but I don't want to spend the whole timeline going "swish-swish bang-bang". I have two other characters I can use to fight around the galaxy. I want one of them to be on the debate team, and Kreet drew the short straw.
 

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Too bad, he was a pretty interesting jedi character. In my mind he was sort of a Plo Koon/Eeth Koth mixture but with a twist.
What are your other characters, i can't seem to remember stumbling upon them
 

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Haven Garrett and Troo Noba. Haven is pre-DOTR, but I'm just throwing him back in time. He didn't need too much editing. Troo is a Gungan, his showcase is around somewhere.
 

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I too had an idea of creating a Gungan that would be a Sith (kinda darker and similar to that one gungan bounty hunter boss in force unleashe) but i scraped it for my current Sith character.
Oh can you pm me the links of those sheets when you find the time
 
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