Leon Taluka

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NAME: Leon Taluka
FACTION: Bogan
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 16 (looks maybe 17-18)
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’9”
WEIGHT: 147lbs
EYES: Green
HAIR: Golden brown to dirty blond
SKIN: Caucasian aka “White” Slightly tanned.
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Is slightly stronger then most athletic males of his age since he is actually more physically mature.
DEXTERITY: Average agility and slightly above average speed.
CONSTITUTION: Average constitution, though extremely resistant to pain and doesn’t get sick too easily.
INTELLIGENCE: A genius, extremely intelligent and is able to comprehend most things within seconds. Has photographic memory.
WISDOM: High, he is able to assess situations and do what is needed. Good at giving advice… of course, you don’t know if he’s giving you the correct advice or not.
CHARISMA: Extremely so. He is very manipulative and a great actor as well, able to sway many to his side both emotionally and intellectually.

FORCE POWERS: Force power manifested through a natural ability to manipulate and charm both people and animals, something aided by his sociopathy.
N/A

SKILLS:
Is a great tactician and leader, very manipulative and is not afraid to do what needs to be done at all. Force sensitive.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None yet.

STRENGTHS:
Skilled at manipulating people. Can blend in with just about any crowd after a period of careful observation.

WEAKNESSES:
Can be a bit arrogant and narcissist at times. Doesn't have too much of an imagination.

GEAR:
clothes on his back... shirt and pants.

SHIP:
N/A

PETS:
N/A

PERSONALITY:
To put it simply, he is a sociopath. He is manipulative, sadistic, has no empathy, learned impulse control, etc. He is perfectly aware of this and he likes it just fine. He can “care” or at least feel fondness for others though that happens extremely rarely. If he doesn’t like you, he will happily destroy you psychologically without one bit of remorse. And like most sociopaths, he gets bored easily and is a thrill seeker so he has ambitions to leave the planet.

BIOGRAPHY:
Leon was born in the same village as Cecilia. His parents were the ideal couple, good looking, kind, brave, etc… but once their child’s sociopathic tendencies became noticeable, their true selves shined through, shallow and selfish. As law dictates, they continued to take care of him though other than that, he was shunned by both his parents and later on, the entire village. He was alone for most of his younger childhood, taking refuge in the woods where two very important things happened, he discovered a gift with charming animals, something he used to his advantage, and his first and only "friend". At first, he had put up with Cecilia to practice the art of manipulation, then, it was to fit in better... no one liked a loner though maybe somewhere in his head, he does feel a certain fondness for the girl.

As he grew older, he realized that fitting in was probably the best thing he could do to prolong his chances of survival so he began to work on emotions and “sympathizing with people”. As the villagers began to grow less wary of him, he would quietly take revenge on those he simply did not like, psychologically beating them down without them even knowing it just for the pure thrill of it. He was the only one that believed Cecilia’s dream and he tried to prepare but in the end, he decided to go with the Bogan… he has nothing to gain from such a small village, his ambitions are greater than that.

KILLS:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Very good for a first profile. Might wanna bold your text a little bit or add some color to grab peoples' attention.
 

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Very good for a first profile. Might wanna bold your text a little bit or add some color to grab peoples' attention.

Lol thanks. ^^ But it's actually my second. And I am currently working on that but I wanted to get the basics down first.
 

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...Think of the worst day, where you don't care about ANYONE at all, or any of their opinions. You feel no loyalty to them, only yourself; but you will do what you need to do for self preservation so you will mimic emotions you don't really have. That is a sociopath.

They don't care for anyone but themselves and finding a way to create a thrill - a thrill seeker.

Your character might lack empathy and be manipulative but he doesn't sound like a sociopath to me.
 

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...Think of the worst day, where you don't care about ANYONE at all, or any of their opinions. You feel no loyalty to them, only yourself; but you will do what you need to do for self preservation so you will mimic emotions you don't really have. That is a sociopath.

They don't care for anyone but themselves and finding a way to create a thrill - a thrill seeker.

Your character might lack empathy and be manipulative but he doesn't sound like a sociopath to me.
Yeah, he's still a bit of a work in progress since I don't know too much about them yet. So I'm just researching, researching, and researching. I actually found a blog called Sociopath world that's written by a sociopath and according to it, they can feel a certain fondness for people. Anyhow, what should I fix?
 

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People deal with things differently. Theres different variances in a mental conditions, but they don't stray too far.

I'd just tone down parts about where he cares about peoples opinions on him. Such as the reference to revenge on his "tormentors". He's probably do it for the amusement factor, not really because they don't like him or trust him.
 

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It's alright. Knock out the "this probably made his sociopathy a lot stronger." though...people are born that way. Others may not see the signs at a early age, and they might not understand themselves well their younger, but they still have it. They could become more aware of it later on in life but it never gets "stronger".
 

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Done, thank you so much for your help! *grovels in gratitude* ^^
 

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Other things to keep in mind:

They do make friends, and they will learn from other people(a mentor) but it will be for selfish reasons not out of some sense of loyalty or need. It's more like a friendship based off what they could give him for his time.
 

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I'm gonna have to edit that tomorrow, (iPods and finding the right line, not fun) but once again, thank you so much for your insight.
 

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Argh, I'll have to do that tomorrow too, red font isn't showing too well, *headnonexistantdesk* Sorry. T-T
 
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