Lum'na

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The cold, and dazzling sights that I have seen....
I am Lum'na, I have no last name, and find myself not needing one. My story is brief, but do enjoy as I tell you the tales that I know to be true.

NAME: Lum'na
FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A

SPECIES: Miraluka
AGE: 17
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5'8
WEIGHT: 125
EYES: N/A
HAIR: Soft Brown/Warm Brown
SKIN: Off-set Tan, Normal Coloring.

CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Being of Miraluka decedent, she lacks the normal feature of eyes.
DOMINATE HAND: Ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: [6/10] Lum'na is a averagely strong woman, and very rarely needs to show any force of brute strength. Giving her no means to actually need to train it, making her if anything. Average in physical muscle, and physical ability.
DEXTERITY: [8/10] Lum'na is a highly agile person, and is more then able to perform near dangerous acrobatic acts if forced into the situation. Preferring not to do so, as it is nothing more then a waste of energy.
CONSTITUTION: [5/10] Lum'na is average in all aspects of health.
INTELLIGENCE: [10/10] Intelligence is the foundation of her life, anything can be thoughtfully planned out, and brought out with the right motion.
WISDOM: [4/10] Lum'na however intelligent she may be, lacks true knowledge of the world around her, and even fewer about the universe in general.
CHARISMA: [5/10] Lum'na is rather blunt, and overly analytical about people, and generally overlooks the sincere things about someone. Though, her entire focus when first meeting someone is the glow of their force, and general emotion. She will openly listen, and even befriend people that seek it.
FORCE POWERS:
[Racial]Miraluka Force Sight : The Miraluka relied on this power constantly to compensate for their physical blindness. They could not perceive colors but could distinguish organics (even dead) and their alignment from the surrounding environment by their characteristic aura. Most objects, including doors and walls, appeared translucent, allowing to see through them. The Miraluka were the most skilled experts of the technique. Thanks to it, their reflexes were strengthened enormously.

[1/5]Alchaka : Alchaka was an extremely personal Force technique, used during meditation by the Jedi Knights of the Old Republic. It was a rigorous exercise, that was very hard to perfect. Alchaka meditation involved the repetition of certain positions and the movements required between them, often to the point of exhaustion, in order to help clear the mind and attune the body to the strength of the Force.

SKILLS/STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES:

Lum'na is very adept at the use of her genetic ability, also known as "Force Sight", and very rarely even needs to "awaken" from sleep to be in tune with it. Despite this factor, she is very easily taken into a unnerving state, and can become at a strong unease when surrounded by certain force related people. This is mainly due to the corrupted, or highly purifier nature of certain types of Jedi, or even Sith practitioners. However, usually kept under control unless pushed into a different state or when surrounded by several or, multiple types at once. Making her a very solicitude person.

Lum'na is also considered a neutral force when looked at, within respected bounds. Being of neither side, nor following any certain path. She is allied with no side of the force, also known as being a Grey Force Sensitive. Even with this factor, she doesn't dis-concern the use of either side, and believes that everyone has their own path in life.

Mentioning the above notion, she has no quarrels with either Jedi or Sith, but openly engages in conversation against the ideals of both sides. Finding both to be overly controlling in a single factor of life, and seeing the Jedi as different due to the lack of "true" emotion, and the Sith for being overly emotional.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
[2/5]Form VII: Juyo

GEAR:
WEAPONS:
Extended Hilt;None Coloration Saber : A very basic design in origin, the hilt of the weapon is slightly extended to allow more vivid striking patterns, and to increase the overall range of the attacks. It also allows for greater two handed combat, though not preferred by the wielder. The only downside to this design, is it decreases the amount of real movement possible by the user. The crystal in use, is nothing more the a basic color, being of a clear coloration. Many believe it to be silver, or white, but it is hard to tell unless seen up close.

Slugthrower;Pistol : A very basic design, as it is nothing off from its original make.

CLOTHING:
Basic Clothing;Robes : Lum'na wears a very personalized base of clothing, being nothing more then a undergarment of common cloth. It completely encases her legs, and her arms all the way to her ankles, and wrists. It being a solid black in color, with varying shades of purple around the knees. Being a full body suit, it offers a overall protective piece of clothing. Above that, is a pair of basic cloth pants, usually seen as a tarnish brown, and a large cloth jacket. Her shoes are a sturdy, and tough leather like substance, and above all over her clothing. Is a large, and weather-resistant robe. Solid white in color, it is used to cover her face with the hood of it, and to cover the blindfold that is tied around the location of her "eyes".

SHIP:
N/A

PETS:
N/A
HISTORY:
Lum'na was raised on a none-registered, or simply concealed vessel deep into the vast difference of space. Never knowing, even from her birth up to a young woman what she truly was. Like most of her race, she was forced into a unique genetic make-up, and lacked the ability to see the physical plane, and was simply forced to make up for it in a genetically gained ability. A ability known as Force Sight, or the ability to see using the method of force control. During her younger years, she spent most of her time being attended to by her parents as most children are. Being cared for, and raised into a civil young woman was the idea for her.

During her middle, and self-claimed rigorous years. She spent most of her time on the move, carrying various objects throughout the ship, and acting much like a delivery girl. Using every moment of spare time, to train, and increase her projected ability. This being a key point of her survival later on in her life, thus she ended up spending a large amount of her "hobby" time in the self created training room. To increase her own skills further, obtaining some influence from several of the ships leading members. She was trained, and blessed by tutors in several Jedi, and Sith Practical Arts. Finding that each of the two had a flaw, and aiming to create a balanced force. Using both sides, she began to focus in the emotional control of the Jedi, and the emotional strength of the Sith. Attempting to compile the two into a single force. Despite failure in this, she openly engaged in the use of both as a practical force. Deciding that neither was a side for her, and becoming a Grey Sensitive.

In her some-what later years, she was gifted, and trained in the practical use of a combat-oriented weapon. A passed down Light-saber, created by her forefathers hundreds of years ago. Spending the next several years, in the physical, and mental training, and use of the weapon. She quickly grew with practice, and was eventually ready to lead her own path in the world.

During one stop for needed supplies, she walked away from her protective life, and began anew. It was time to become what she wanted, and the only way to do it. Was to make her own way.

PERSONALITY:
Lum'na is a caring, and very kind person. Despite being of a neutral standing in emotion, she finds that all life deserves help when requested, and that all life ends when it is time. She is often called self-centered or focused, but she very openly speaks out towards injustice, and believes that true law provides the answer, and that all humanity, should follow a true path set only by themselves. Being more of a loner, she usually avoids speaking with others but is not above it. She finds that the smallest things in life, are generally the most pleasant, and finds drinking, and eating to be enjoyable.

Lum'na may seem like another flower in the garden, but through her eyes. She is able everything for what it truly is, and believes that everything through her eyes is absolute. This leading to her being stubborn, or overly justified in nature. This generally causing problems with generally aligned people, and finds disgust in being around several Jedi, or Sith at a single time because of the overshoot of a distillery force. Though generally against her nature, she often finds friendship in one or several of the colliding forces, and might even temporarily align with them if the time comes for a good cause.

KILLS:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A


 
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The "Robotic in nature" doesn't help give her a neutral feel. It kind of makes her come off as a bit unrealistic.

It's a good first profile though, and it definitely has potential.
 

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Changed Robotic to Honorific. Hope it works, kinda new to this profile business.
 

The Gloaming

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Not sure why, but I've always liked Miralukas. Definitely a good first profile.
 

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Good profile. :) Finally, a Miraluka who isn't a Sith/Jedi or an Imperial/Alliance officer or the like.
 

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Edit:
Although, here I just did it for you. I've organized mine a little differently. If you look at Antos' CS (link in thread) you will see how it differs when you age/rank up. Additionally, I believe you'd follow the Ranger/Warden path which means I would more or less recruit you.
Distribution Points: 15
Max Physical: 6
Max Mental: 4

Squire Rank: 2

Very Weak/Novice :: 1-2
Weak/Amateur :: 3-4
Average/Adept :: 5-6
Strong/Expert :: 7-8
Very Strong/Master :: 9-10

Attributes:
Strength: 3
Dexterity: 6
Constitution: 2
Intelligence: 4
Wisdom: 2
Charisma: 2


Force Powers:
Control: Novice
Sense: Novice
Alter: Novice
Novice Level Ability
Alchaka
Amateur Level Ability
Force Sight
Adept Level Ability



Skills:
Awareness [Wisdom]
Computer Use [Intelligence]
Demolition [Intelligence]
Persuade [Charisma]
Repair [Intelligence]
Security [Intelligence]
Stealth [Dexterity]
Treat Injury [Wisdom]


Novice Level Ability
Persuade*
Amateur Level Ability
Awareness
Adept Level Ability
Stealth*


Lightsaber Forms:
Form I: Shii-Cho [Constitution]
Form II: Makashi [Dexterity]
Form III: Soresu [Constitution]
Form IV: Ataru [Dexterity]
Form V: Shien/Djem So [Strength]
Form VI: Niman [Constitution]
Form VII: Juyo/Vapaad [Strength]

Novice Level Ability
Niman*
Amateur Level Ability
Juyo
Adept Level Ability
 
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Would you like to join the Brotherhood of Equilibrium? I definitely see you as a powerful Sister among the Brotherhood. If you'd like, I can start a thread for your introduction into the Faction. However, before we take that step, some numbers may have to change according to your statistics. I will help you through the process, though. What do you say?


Although, here I just did it for you. I've organized mine a little differently. If you look at Antos' CS (link in thread) you will see how it differs when you age/rank up. Additionally, I believe you'd follow the Ranger/Warden path which means I would more or less recruit you.
Distribution Points: 15
Max Physical: 6
Max Mental: 4

Squire Rank: 2

Very Weak/Novice :: 1-2
Weak/Amateur :: 3-4
Average/Adept :: 5-6
Strong/Expert :: 7-8
Very Strong/Master :: 9-10

Attributes:
Strength: 3
Dexterity: 6
Constitution: 2
Intelligence: 4
Wisdom: 2
Charisma: 2


Force Powers:
Control: Amateur
Sense: Amateur
Alter: Amateur
Novice Level Ability
Alchaka
Amateur Level Ability
Adept Level Ability
Force Sight


Skills:
Awareness [Wisdom]
Computer Use [Intelligence]
Demolition [Intelligence]
Persuade [Charisma]
Repair [Intelligence]
Security [Intelligence]
Stealth [Dexterity]
Treat Injury [Wisdom]


Novice Level Ability
Persuade*
Amateur Level Ability
Stealth*
Adept Level Ability
Awareness


Lightsaber Forms:
Form I: Shii-Cho [Constitution]
Form II: Makashi [Dexterity]
Form III: Soresu [Constitution]
Form IV: Ataru [Dexterity]
Form V: Shien/Djem So [Strength]
Form VI: Niman [Constitution]
Form VII: Juyo/Vapaad [Strength]

Novice Level Ability
Niman*
Amateur Level Ability
Juyo
Adept Level Ability

She's already in a thread with me... "To See the Truth" or something like that in the Story forum...
 

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Excellent character, very easy to read, interesting choice of Font. I love blind characters, just a personal thing, so ya gets a thumbs up from me!
 
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