Ma-Del

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Ma-Del

FACTION: Jedi Knights
RANK: Knight
SPECIES: Miraluka
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Trained force sensitive.





Appearance :
In this corner standing in at a staggering 1.6 meters or 5ft 4 inch tall and weighing in at a whopping 57 kg or 128 lbs with shoulder length brown hair that is often kept in a bun. A limber ectomorphic individual with a evenly tanned epidermis that covers the entirety of his body. Ma-Del has a small thin scar under his right eye that peeks out under the blindfolds he wears to hide the fact he has no eyes. Straight faced and often not one for idle conversation Ma-Del is often noted as having a rather calm disposition most of the time.




PERSONALITY:

“Do I plan for everything because i'm Cautious..or am I cautious because i plan for everything?”


Quick, Imaginative and Strategic, Ma-Del will take any situation with a fresh and unbiased mind. Priding himself on taking every chance to improve his knowledge or his interests, this can be seen in the strength and flexibility of his tactical mind, using much of his imaginative prowess to plan for contingencies and procedures for as many possible scenarios as he can. This makes for a self confident young man who is independent and decisive, allowing his to stand on his own and take responsibility for his actions, even in the face of any opposition with well defended logical points to counter. Even if the opposition is a figure in authority or a tradition if it does not stand to logic or has a blatant flaw Ma-Del will openly address this. This reliance on the logical approach of things allows him to remain detached in all but the most emotionally charged events, making for a honest and direct approach in communication and action that isn't held back by traditions or social expectations. This honesty and direct approach makes for a fairly well received tactician and diplomat.

Astonishingly dedicated to his work, Ma-Del is noted for his intense effort to see his goals or his objectives completed whether it be independently or consolidating other Jedi who are better skilled in certain areas. Even at times seeking information from outside both the Jedi and the Jedi code. However this willingness to learn and see all sides of any problem has garnered some concern amongst his fellow Jedi. Who feel his receptive intellect which is based in rationalism is a good thing and leaves him open to many suggestions making it easy to work with Ma-Del. However, this open mindedness is at times thought of as being susceptible to corruption or the dark side, or at least this is often the concern.


BIOGRAPHY:

Born on Alphaidies to a Miraluka Jedi Master and a Luka-Sene Master, Ma-Dellious or Ma-Del was recognized shortly after his birth as having a strong connection with the force. Chosen to learn from the Luka Sene by his father, who wished his son to have an idea of his people's culture as well as their religious ideals, despite the protests of his Jedi mother, who felt it was her duty to inform the Jedi of the boys birth.

Ma-Del was accepted by the Luka Sene. Showing to be a quick learner Ma-Del quickly advanced through his training with the Luka sene, From who Ma-Del learned to use the force to amplify his scenes and reflexes. While learning of the Miraluka religious ideology on the Force, which like some was duelistic, and taught its followers to live in balance between the two gods, not believing in good or evil and instilling an acceptance of everything life and death had to offer with both respect and caution. It was during this time that Ma-Del discovered his thirst for knowledge, particularly of the force. Ma-Del’s quest for everything he could learn encouraged his mother to decide to begin teaching him the Jedi code and the Martial arts to further his self discipline and center of being. While heavily relating the Miraluka idea of balance. This training with the Luka Sene and his mother would later contribute to the development of Ma-Del’s seemingly continuous state of calm.

At the age of eight his mother began teaching him about lightsabers and combat with them. Training Ma-Del in Forms IV and V and Jar'Kai which where her primary disciplines, During this time she began to
expand his knowledge of the force through a series of meditative exercises such as empty meditations to clear his mind of emotions a lesson that Ma-Del exceeded in, due to the growing development of his state of emotional balance and his emotionally detached personality. During these two years Ma-Del continued to receive training from the Luka Sene furthering the development of Ma-Del's scenes with the aid of the force until it became second nature.

Departure to the Jedi
Accepted into the Jedi Order, Ma-Del was given to a Master under whom he constructs his orange saberstaff, and begins learning Forms II, III, and VI to
Training under Master, furthers his tactical knowledge and diplomatic skills.
At age fourteen, decides he wants to be either a Jedi Archeologist or a Jedi Battlemaster, hoping that either road would allow him to instruct later down the road.
age twenty two, Ma-Del takes the trials to become a knight and upon passing he has set out to further his knowledge of the force and combat.




ATTRIBUTES:
intellect, 7/10 strength, 5/10
constitution/health,6/10 dexterity, 8/10
Stamina 6/10 Charisma 7/10


It is no surprise that Ma-Del has had to find a few different ways to supplement his lack of physical strength and diminutive stature. Ma-Del him more than aware that when combating enemies they may overpower him. Whether it is through his quick mind and agility which he uses to avoid having to block enemies, rather preferring to move around and keep his guessing to his reliance on his ability to dodge and counter, however this has been ineffective against some of his past opponents. When he finds himself in a situation where his speed and agility may not be enough Ma-Del has shown that all though he is a skilled warrior it is the depth of his knowledge of the force that has kept him alive for so long.

SKILLS:

Physical

Hand to hand combat : Skilled
Weapons combat advanced
Acrobatics: Advanced

Mental


Military tactics : Advanced
Diplomacy: Advanced
Medical knowledge: Basics, Ma-Del knows and understands the basics of first aid, can clean and dress a wound.
Tech: Noob King… Like seriously do not let him touch anything...
Piloting: Capable, but hates doing it. Will refuse if able, if unable will remind people that he is blind and should not be operating a motor vehicle. This however is just an excuse.


Force knowledge:

‘’I just see the world differently..’’


Force sight - Advanced
The inherent skill used by the Miraluka to perceive the world around them .Incapable of preserving colour but. Through his training Ma-Del is capable of seeing the alignment of organics both, living and the dead. From plants to animals to even life forms. While walls and many non organic appear as translucent, allowing him to perceive objects and people through many if not most walls. This however in no means that he can see through all walls. This ability has heightened his reflexes considerably over the years,,


Field detection: intermediate
Capable of seeing energy fields, and their point of origin. electronics as well as their power source. Ma-Del uses this ability to differentiate between a wall and a Robot.

Far sight : initiate
Will his sight in the force is strong he has yet to fully understand this force ability all though he has had visions through the force, they have been few and far between for him to claim any real skill in this ability.



Force senses:
Growing upon his naturally heightened senses of hearing and smell. Ma-Del’s Luka Sene Training allows him to distinguish sound and smells that would normally be undetected by him or others. Has used this to avoid being sneeked up on, and avoid detection by others.

Telekinesis: proficient
As with all force users, Ma-Del is capable of performing telekinetic abilities. However he has been noted as preferring to use telekinesis up close rather than at a distance while in combat.


Force healing: Basic,
uses the force to supplement his lack of medical know how, Ma-Del is able to close minor wounds and abrasions.


Telepathy advanced
Uses telepathy to comprehend most vocal and none vocal communication whether it be just the basics and general meaning of their words or in full detail.



Jar'Kai : Advanced
FORM II Makashi, : Adept
Form III Soresu : Proficient,
Form IV Ataru: Advanced
Form V Shien Do : Advanced
Form VI Niman : Skilled




GEAR:


orange 32” long blade with a 8” handle with a 20” attachment.

two azure blue Lightsabers. 28” blade. 7 inch handle., inherited from Mother.

Wears crimson and tan robes fashioned after traditional Jedi robes.

Black and white ceremonial robes, will often reverse the robes in different occasions to white over black.
Standard issue utility belt, comlink with rations, water and first aid, grappling cord and a small breathing device for underwater.

ROLE-PLAYS:
Never saw it coming {Ongoing}
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/never-saw-it-coming.71965/#post-1336595
Leave no Jedi Behind

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/leave-no-jedi-behind.70209/

-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--

RELATIONSHIPS:

As normal with many Miraluka, he addresses other Miraluka, as either brother or sister.
Friends {1}
Lanna Singh : Friends


SHIP: None
DROIDS: none
PETS:None
KILLS:
COMBAT:

 
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Darasuum

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Just fyi WIP traditionally stay in player workshops until they are ready to be submited/posted in a finished state.
 

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Just fyi WIP traditionally stay in player workshops until they are ready to be submited/posted in a finished state.
While I don't disagree, what's posted does, if I remember correctly, fit the minimum requirements, despite being a WIP. Looks good so far, @TheMiraluka, can't wait to see the finished product!
 

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While I don't disagree, what's posted does, if I remember correctly, fit the minimum requirements, despite being a WIP. Looks good so far, @TheMiraluka, can't wait to see the finished product!
I mean i consider just about everything to be something that can be built upon, increased in detail, modified etc. but that wouldn't classify it as a wip. i think it's just a little misleading as in "unfinished product"

if it's good enough for submission and posting in the character profiles and you choose to do so that's fine. just don't call it a W.I.P.
 

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Yeah- I removed the WIP bit from the title because otherwise, this mug is going to the Player Workshop board. lol

Cheers~
 

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Yeah- I removed the WIP bit from the title because otherwise, this mug is going to the Player Workshop board. lol

Cheers~
Thank you for correction my error..

While I don't disagree, what's posted does, if I remember correctly, fit the minimum requirements, despite being a WIP. Looks good so far, @TheMiraluka, can't wait to see the finished product!
Thank you. Hopefully it's soon, and it doesn't disappoint.
 

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This guy is pretty awesome! I hope to be able to role play together with my character, Naxel Razee, on missions and such!
 

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Greetings!!

During my review I noticed a couple of things you may want to adjust, mostly some typos and things of that nature.

My main issue though are his skills. He is 22 and apparently freshly knighted, but he has high level mastery or working knowledge of *five* lightsaber forms on top of his mastery of jar'Kai. It's more than a little excessive and honestly unbelievable for the character. I'd like to see some edits in regards to what this junior Knight can do before I can approve the profile.
 
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