Maulard Urus

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Maulard Urus
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NAME: Maulard Urus, referred to by some as Mau.
FACTION: The Republic.
RANK: Senator, representing Bestine.
SPECIES: Human.
AGE: 30 years of age.
GENDER: Male.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.

APPEARANCE:
Maulard is a young man of 30 years, he is 190 cm tall and weighs 85 kilos. His eyes are light brown, and bears the same color as his hair. (see picture above) He has quite a light complexion, borderline pale. He's very easily distinguished by his low age, and by his hair being combed in the middle.

ATTRIBUTES:
Maulard is intelligent and wise, he likes to read and keep calm, but sometimes he lets his emotions take the better of him, mostly in heated debates in the chamber. He is quite strong, and sporty, well, there are many out there who'd outrank him on that area, but he isn't the worst. He's patient, and he endures even the most boring debates. Maulard is also fair, and hates if lies are spread about him.

PERSONALITY:
Maulard is smart and ambitious; something he must be, seeing as he serves as a Senator. He continues to be ambitious, and achieves small victories every day. Speeches are delivered in a timely manner, and he always rise to speak his word on legislation up for debate in the Senate Chamber. If he sees that a piece of legislation is unjust, or would not at all help his planet or the Galaxy, he'll slam it no matter what. He takes his time listening to his people, and he gladly talk with them in his office in the Senate Building.

BIOGRAPHY:
Maulard was born on Bestine. He grew up with his father and mom, who had always cared about influence and politics, something that lead to him being interested in that as well. Maulaurd went on to serve as an aide for one of the Representatives of Bestine at the age of 20. When he turned 25 years he was appointed to be serve on Bestine's delegation to the Galactic Senate, serving as a Representative. He spoke out on important matters, and in the vacancies of the old and sick Senator, stepped in for him and gave important speeches and voted on important legislation which would benefit the Galaxy, and Bestine. Upon the death of the Senator, Maulard stepped in for good, and is now the current Senator of Bestine.

SKILLS:
Maulard is a very good politician, and is easily trusted. He is diplomatic, which is very helpful as a senator, and understands quite a few languages, those being; Basic, Gran, Dug, Hutt and a few others. He enjoys piloting, and has developed skills for such, and he's mosly piloting his own ship when going on errands for the senate.

GEAR:
Maulard is a Senator and doesn't need to carry weapons. He simply carries around a holocommunicator, and a datapad, which is connected to the Senate's Archive.

ROLE-PLAYS:
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SHIP:

Maulard has his own personal ship, rather a Shuttle. He uses the ship to travel around on Bestine and to other planets on official Senate business. As it is a shuttle doesn't have as good maneuverability as starfighters, and other battleships. It carries two lazer shooters for protection, and have seating for 6 people, other than the two pilots.
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DROIDS:
Maulard is in posession of his very own protocol droid, such as many other Senators are.
The droid is named 4K-3PO, and is a 3PO Unit, it has silver finish, and is fluent in over 6 milion languages.
 
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Oreus

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Maybe my memory is bad but why is a human senator of a Dug world? Not that it wouldn't be allowed but your history doesn't explain that and from memory that planet is southern below Republic space as well anyways. I'm on mobile and too lazy to look but just my initial thought seeing this.
 

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Just a second issue is his age might want to raise it by a lot just some advice as I don't think a 16 year old can reasonably be counted as a senator
 

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I'd have to agree with the above posts; aside from the unlikeliness that any planet would apoint a 16 year old teenager to represent their entire planet on the Senate, I also find it highly unlikely that a human would represent Malastare, as opposed to a Dug or a Gran, whom the majority of the population was composed of.

So yeah, basically change the planet or come up with a very good reason for which the Dugs and Gran would accept a human as their Senator, bumb up his age to at least some 21 years or, again, come up with a very good reason for why a pubescent teen would represent an entire planet. Otherwise, it looks good, even if it's a little sparse. Couldn't hurt to expand on his personality and biography, but mainly the two points already discussed need fixing.

EDIT: Also, just checked and Malstare is out of Republic territory anyway, so it might be better for you to pick a new planet altogether.
 
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I changed the planet and the age of the character! :)

Thanks for all the input!
 

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16 is a bit young, but didn't Padme become Senator of Naboo at around 18-ish?
 

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16 is a bit young, but didn't Padme become Senator of Naboo at around 18-ish?

Well, yeah, but she had already proved herself by actually leading an entire planet (as opposed to just representing it) at a much younger age (beacme queen at age 14-15, iirc) .
 

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Well, yeah, but she had already proved herself by actually leading an entire planet (as opposed to just representing it) at a much younger age (beacme queen at age 14-15, iirc) .
Good point XD
 
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