Menkio Nonomyth's Bogan Training(Dark Cloud my master)

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"Absorbtion?" Choray asked and his voice sounded like he did not understand it. But then his eyes showed signs of recognition and he said: "Ah yes, I know what you mean. The Tool can be used to absorb your opponents Force Attacks. Yes, I will teach you this."

The demonic Zabrak examined the lightsaber his student had just created and nodded. "It is a fine weapon, acolyte. Well done. As for the absorbtion, you must feel your opponent's Force Power. Sense his Push or Pull, and focus on it. Then catch it and command your own tool to absorb it. We can practice this. I will cast Force Pushes towards you and you must absorb them. Do you think you can do this, Acolyte Menkio?"​
 

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(So, Cloudy.. After this.. I am Getting promoted? From my starter rank? Or are we gonna do more. Posts. Plus a former Master/ Former Student mission?)

He slowly nodded placing the saber on his belt he would feel.. more stronger through the force.. it was a bit awaken at the minute. Such a kid.. Passion that much Tannest, At his age. He would get in a stance and face.. his master. Ready.. To try and absorb his master's force pull's and push's.
 

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(After this I planned to do a mission and after that mission you will become a Crusader. I will explain the mission stuff via PM later on, let's first focus on this last bit of the training. ^^ )

Choray Sefja's eyes glistened as the light from the torches on the walls fell upon them, the red devil eyes. His face was blank, totally emotionless, and he reached out his right hand sending a Force Push towards Sithis. It was not a too powerful Push, but it wasn't weak either. Choray figured he would start casting moderate Pushes and make it harder as they progressed through this lesson. As he casted the Push he watched Sithis carefully to see if he was able to absorb this Push. If not it was no big deal and they would simply try again.​
 

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(OOC: alright)

He slowly then took out his right hand after awhile.. Feeling the force move through the air. he pushed his hand out trying to absorb the push. He would keep on absorbing till. His master was done with his Moves. Yes, Indeed this took a bit more then he thought as of energy. but he couldn't just give up and quit. He slowly begun to say."Pull, Master?"He finished.
 

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"Good, acolyte." Choray said. "You managed to absorb my Push. Prepare for my Pull!"

Choray immediately reached out his hand and used Force Pull on his student. If Menkio was not able to absorb this one he would be send flying across the room and probably crash against the wall behind Choray. But, since he was able to absorb the Push, the Pull would not be too hard.​
 

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He slowly reached out his his hand and tried to absorb it. which he did. But was took back few steps back. As a side a effect of absorbing the pull."Master is it time for my Promotion?"He asked slowly.
 

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"The impatient never get far," Choray said. "I was just like you when I was of your age. I was impatient and wanted everything right away. Let me teach you another lesson, Menkio, it doesn't work like that! Be patient, and the rewards will come to you."

Choray crossed his arms and glanced at his student. They had spent a lot of time training and it was obvious that Menkio had learned a lot.

"Before you receive your promotion, which means, the rank of Crusader, you and I will go on a mission. See this mission as your final exam. After the mission we will return here and we'll see if you're worthy of the rank of Crusader by then. I need time to prepare the mission, so for now I suggest you return to your quarters and meditate on everything you have learned until now. Give me a few days and we will embark on a journey to test your knowledge and skills. No more questions, acolyte, go now and wait in patience!"​

((OOC: I will PM you about this mission.))
 

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He slowly looked at his Master and said slowly after his master had finished talking"Understood Master.."He said before taking his stuff as he would then slowly begin to put the bag and the rifle on him his new light saber on his belt. as he waved farewell well and begin to stroll off towards his quarters for rest and meditation.

(OOC: Alright.)
 

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((OOC: This is after the covert mission which can be found here: The Mission ))

It was two days after the mission to Tatooine. Choray, though somewhat surprised his apprentice had survived, thought Menkio did quite well. The boy had proven he was able to fight off an entire group of mercs and finally defeat a full-fledged Force User.

Choray's ship landed in the hangar of the Dark Jedi Temple and the mighty Zabrak walked down the boarding ramp. He led his apprentice all the way back to the training room.

"Sit," Choray said and he gestured to a chair, "and tell me how you think you did during the training as well as the mission."
 

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He followed his master into the training area. And begun to speak as he sat down."Amaze"That's all he could say.
 

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"You think you did amazing?" Choray spoke. A dark twinkling was in his red eyes.

"Kneel, acolyte." He took the lightsaber from his belt and ignited its blade. The mighty purple beam ignited and faintly lit the room. Its hum echoed throughout the room and the violet blade was one of the most beautiful blades Choray had ever seen. Even after all these years, he was still proud of his prized weapon.

"Recite to me, the code of the Dark Jedi of the Bogan."​
 

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He keeled before him before speaking..

"No peace, only suffering.
No knowledge, only instinct.
No serenity, only passion.
No harmony, only chaos.
No life, only death."

He said calmly.

(Do you want me to tell you what it means in my own words or just this. Tell me If I should edit it.)
 

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((OOC: You don't need to edit your post. Choray will ask you to do that in this post ))

The Zabrak listened very carefully to Menkio's words and finally he nodded. He kept his lightsaber in place and he said: "Now, Menkio, you have learned a lot about the Dark Side and the Order of the Bogan. You have proven yourself as a worthy warrior. Therefore you should know what the words of this code mean. Tell me, acolyte, what you think it means."

Choray didn't move an inch. He stood there and with a stern look on his face he gazed down upon his young apprentice.​
 

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"Very well, No peace outlying suffering is true, We never in this world or any other will ever get any peace, we always suffer from birth"He said slowly moving on.

"No knowledge only instinct, We don't need knowledge to relay on things we depend on our instinct that stomach feeling.

No serenity, only passion not sure about this one.

No harmony, only chaos that is true in some what but if we cause chaos within the temple then we will all die, from our own selves."He said slowly next he said.

"No life, only death. not quite sure about this one either."He said slowly.
 

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Choray tilted his head slightly and his eyes were half-shut.

"Not sure about those?" he asked. "Think, Menkio! I know you posses the knowledge! You have studied the code, so tell me the meaning!"

He already raised his saber, ready to deactivate it if Menkio really couldn't tell him the meaning of the code. This was very important, because the rank of Crusader couldn't be given to anyone who didn't know the meaning of the code. Menkio had to answer this.
 

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All he had to do was answer two more things that he hadn't known, and he might pass He thought thinking.

""The dogmatic Jedi would have you believe you can become content, serene, but we know this is a lie. We creatures are not above the need for emotion, for passion. Instead of repression, we only ask that you use your emotions to fuel your power, to guide you.""

He spoke taking the knowledge he had read from the book now all was left was the last one darn he thought then it hit him."No life only Death, Death happens every time time weather that person is dead or alive, there's really no life we are all dead in one way from the inside, or Killing of a lowly dead soul to the afterlife of the Bogan's Sands."He said slowly.When he had sand Bogan's sands he might the Body's of all the Souls Killed by the great Bogan.
 

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"Menkio Nonomyth," Choray said and he held his violet saber above Menkio's left shoulder. "Hereby I grant you," and he moved his saber over to Menkio's right shoulder, "the title of," and he held his saber right above Menkio's head, "Crusader of the Bogan. You may be young, but you have proven yourself and after thinking about the Code you were able to tell me its meaning. You are no longer an acolyte, but a Crusader like myself. This doesn't mean we're suddenly equals, though, because you have to prove yourself still."

He switched his lightsaber off and clipped it back to his belt. Then he went on: "Take on missions, kill Jedi and other enemies, bring honor to Bogan Kelrada. Do this all and you will show you are truly worthy of being a Crusader.

"Welcome to the Dark Side. Embrace it."​

((OOC: Alright, that's it. I'll see to it you're granted the rank of Crusader.))
 

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(SO, Menkio is a Cruiser now?)
 
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