Menkio Nonomyth's Bogan Training(Dark Cloud my master)

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He slowly looked at him answering his question and asking his."Master No I do not have any questions about the form.. But can you Or let me Keep this red Lightsaber or do I get to create one" He said slowly.

(OOC: Sorry for small post.)
 

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"For now you will have to keep the training saber with you, but you will have to give it back to me later on. As of this moment, you will use your training saber in a sparring match against me. Use the form Juyo and show me what you've got! Of course you can rest if you are too tired at the moment. Remember that a little rest is important, your energy isn't endless and Juyo takes a lot of energy. Are you ready for a sparring match, or do you want to rest first?"​
 

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He looked at him without fear he slowly said a short sentence and waiting for the same reply. or another."Will I be able to Get my own Saber Giving to me with my own color? And no I do not need rest.. Also, may I use The force power thought to me?"He said slowly.
 

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"When the time comes I will tell you about your new lightsaber and yes, you may use the Force Powers you have learned in this sparring match. Now, defend yourself!!"

Choray activated his training saber. He would not be using his own lightsaber for he didn't want to harm his apprentice... yet. He Force Speeded towards Menkio and immediately unleashed a fast and, if these were real sabers, lethal flurry. Menkio had to act quick to block and defend himself.​
 

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As his master spoke he activated his saber. And as he finished his last word he charged at him with force speed, Jumping very high over him he held one hand out and opened his finger tips still spinning in mid air he pointed at his master head and Sent his blackish Lighting towards his. Like right at his head near neck section. Trying to hit him to aim for the major part of his body.
 

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((OOC: Like how? Choray uses Force Speed to get near you within a few seconds and immediately unleashes a flurry. You will have to defend instead of charging like that :)))
 

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(OOC: I might when you were speaking I used the lightsaber. And when you finshed talking I used force speed leaped over you and did force lighting? Or do you want me retype it I do it?If you want.)
 

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OOC: I struck you first. You have to defend yourself, so yes. Please change it.
 

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He activated his saber fast last taking a fast step back with his left foot. And Brining his right hand blocking the Lightsaber with his training lightsaber.. While he blocked his tried to do A fast Force push. Towards his master to send him back.

(OOC: was in a rush sorry. if it's small.)
 
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Choray could absorb the Force Push and immediately struck again, unleashing yet another flurry.

"Come on!" He shouted while attacking. "Show me what you got!"​
 

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He looked at his master wide eyed at his master. As he aborted the force he slowly wondered how did his master do such a thing. But then he was struck with more attacks.. using his training blade he begun to block them while stepping back. Moving so he won't get injured. While blocking his master's fury of attacks seemed quite shocking. As he withdrew his hand slowly. Closing his eyes and using the force speed to...Move backwards. Fast He slowly opened his eyes looking at his master changing and hitting the air.. he slowly. Rise his left hand and slowly unleash a fury of rage towards his hand and releasing it after towards his masters neck trying to choke him to death..He didn't Try hurt he He wanted to see his poor Master begging at his feet even if that happened he would press on his masters neck till he dropped dead lifeless to support his body. That's if all it was to come into suspect and if he pulled the move off correctly.
 

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Then suddenly Menkio began to Force Choke the zabrak. Choray's red eyes reflected amazement and a little surprise and for a moment he felt the power of his apprentice. Then he decided to put an end to this torture and he used the Force to sent a blow of Force Push towards his apprentice. If this Force Push would hit his apprentice, and that would happen most likely unless Menkio was faster, Choray would be released from the Choke. And even if Menkio could block the Push, he had to release the Force Choke so as a matter of fact: Choray was freed.
 

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He didn't block the force push but he was sent fly.. In mid air.. Releasing the force Choke.. he slowly then broke one hand on the ground used a one handed spread of the ground and landed on the ground looking at his master jsut standing there.
 

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Choray landed on his feet and raised his lightsaber. He smirked as he looked at Menkio. "If this was a real fight, you would have been killed by now. You should have blocked my Force Push and prepared to defend. Right now I could have just used Force Speed to get near you in a second and slash you in half. No matter though. You did well. There is only one last task left."

Choray deactivated the training saber and walked back to the chest. He put the saber in the chest with the other training sabers and turned back to Menkio. "Out there in the mountains is an icecave. Your assignment is to make it to the cave alone. Without the aid of an individual or any physical weapons. You may take food, but no weapons or armor. Use the Tool to survive and bring back a crystal from that cave. You will pass the test once you bring back a crystal. You will fail if you return without a crystal or if you die. Go now, young acolyte, and retrieve a crystal!"​
 

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Looking at his master slowly he laughed with him As he slowly. Bent down. Grabbing a bag and Another bag with food supplies. Putting both of them on. He smiled at his master as her would slowly then wave towards his master.. And begin to set off.

Exiting the temple it begun to suddenly get cold not to cold.. But cold. He slowly put on his hood and begun to walk towards the pathway leading towards the ice cave. Looking towards the pathway as he slowly got closer..He saw the cave's door. Although he begun to get colder.. He slowly would close his eyes.. And begin to.. Allow the tool to warm him up. Walking slowly towards the door of the cave he would slowly open it.. And walk inside.

Inside the cave it seemed dark.. But yet he has seen A light.. Somewhere deep inside the cave cravens he would.. Slowly.. Begin to walk down his way... Trying to sense for anyone that had a living presents inside the area just in case someone was watching or was about to attack him. No one yet was even Close near his range he decided to walk deeper inside the cave..

Upon going deep inside the cave he would slowly see.. A light limed he would use his force speed.. Toward the Area where he was to get over towards the light was. After that was then he would slowly see crystals of different types so he decided to take two of the red. He closed his eyes. As he raise both of his hands as he begun to crush.. The edges that held the crystals together. As to let them drop towards the Ground.. It took a lot of stress and focus to do so.. But he done it anyway.. Picking up both of the red crystals. He placed them towards the bag and begun to head out.

Getting outside the cave it begun to become colder.. He begun to use Tapas But he was to.. Stressed out and almost out of stamina to do so.. he had only little time to do the move But did it just to warm him up for at least 15 minutes. Moving back towards the temple was a hard job.. Snow begun to slowly rise it speeds. he was half way near the Temple. As he slowly Fell. He would slowly then get up and begin to think.. Why was this so.. hard but he must bring both of this things back. Towards. His master..

Slowly arriving at the temple he fell Towards his knees Tumbling in a cold hearten way as he tried to make his way towards The training area. As He did this he fell at his master feet. Slowly Giving him. The bag with the crystals..As He picked him self up to both of his.. Knees And then sat on them.. If His master were to open the bag 2 red crystals would have shown.
 

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Choray grabbed the bag from the floor and opened it. Menkio had brought back two red crystals, not just one. The Zabrak Dark Jedi smiled and said: "Rest, acolyte. You may eat to regain strength, I have prepared a meal for you." He gestured towards a table on which was a plate and some food as well as a can of water and an empty glass. "Tell me when you are ready, but first you must eat and rest."

Choray walked over to another table on which lay some strange metal parts and he carefully placed the bag on that table. Then he turned back towards his apprentice and patiently waited until this one was ready.​
 

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He got up from the floor. As he slowly Walked towards the table.. he would unzip his other bag to get his own pair of food.. Something In His mind Told him That If he ate something That his Master has given Would.. Have poisoned his body temporary.. he would begin to eat his own food.. And then after he was Finisher he would begin to slowly.. Drink his own Water.. From the bottle that he had In his bag..He smiled after he finished eating..."I am done Master.. What's next?"He said slowly.
 

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"Place one of your crystals on this table. I did not gather enough parts for two lightsabers, but you don't need a second saber anyway since you can't use two sabers at the same time yet. However, you can keep the second crystal and create your second saber on your own and then practice with two sabers. For now, I want you to create only ONE saber.

Place the crystal in the center of the table and then sit down in front of the table. Close your eyes and picture the lightsaber in your mind and focus on it. Let the Force flow through you and let the correct parts float in the air, since some of these parts are fake parts. Then when the lightsaber is finished you can grab it. It should be constructed through the Force so it is important you don't touch anything with your hands.

You will pass this test if you were able to use the correct parts to build the lightsaber and when the lightsaber actually works. You will have failed if you used the fake parts; which will melt when you active the weapon.

Good luck."​
 

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He sighed slowly.. As he slowly used the force to place the red crystal. In the middle looking through the parts. he would slowly close his eyes. And sit hands legs crossed.Slowly.. trying picture the state of mind that was given to him by the thing he wanted to form it to. Moving his hands to pick the Real parts. Up he would slowly motion his hands and figures as if he was actually touching the Parts but wasn't. Parting the real parts together through his Force..He would close the whole part to together as The crystal. Stood inside the parts.. The buttons would begin to slowly come out as he used the force to seal them.. Finally He would bring both of his hands and place it near the air.Where the saber was.. Sealing it.. SO it can be used as his weapon. He got up slowly picking the Lightsaber and flicking the button a red light zoomed.. As The he saw the beautiful and powerful. He flicked it again as it retracted. He slowly Then.. Looked at his master and spoke.

"Master I am Done is there anything else you would like to teach me? maybe that abortion move?"He smiled slowly."Or maybe not?"He finished.
 
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