Nara Cross 'Sith Slayer'

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Nara Cross "Sith Slayer"
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Name: Nara Cross / Race: Chiss / Gender: Female / Age: 27 / Level: One


Physical Appearance



Height: 5'6 ft / Weight: 143 lbs / Eyes: Thermal Red / Hair: Dark Blue

While looking fairly normal at a glance, a closer inspection of Nara would reveal a few small scars. One such scar can be seen across her right eye, but she also has slash-based scars all over her body (Note: however most are usually hidden by clothing/armor). Her skin, for the most part, is a lighter blue, but is darker in areas where her scars are shown. Despite the deformities, she still remains physically attractive with her athletic build, and alluring face. Though she doesn't apply much, she does use the basics of cosmetics such as lipstick and eyeliner.

Build: Athletic / Hair Style: Short and Wild / Markings: Scared Eye and Body




Personality


Nara is a quiet and reserved individual, always slow to anger and very rational in all her decisions. No one would ever suspect her of being a Sith hunting vigilante 'Sith Slayer'. Dawning her costumed armor, she seemingly becomes a different person. As the 'Sith Slayer' she is vengeful, merciless, even a tad blood thirsty. Knowing she was so violent when fighting the forces of the Sith, she created a set of rules she abides by to prevent her from hurting herself and her friends.

Sith Slayer's Code: I will not harm civilians, I will not harm the Jedi, I will fight the Sith at any given opportunity, I will fight smart not hard, I will sacrifice anyone if it means killing more Sith


History


Early Life (Birth-12):
Nara Cross was born on the Chiss home world Csilla to a pair of wealth nobles. She was expected to grow up in a comfortable environment, free from the wars and terrors of the galaxy. Like many others, this expectation was never met. When Nara was six years old, her family managed to anger the wrong people. They were rival family of nobles, who had been at odds with her family for years. Nara's father had been in protest of the opposing family's recent jump in power, claiming they had falsified information reguarding their family tree. Though they were only claims, the rival family knew they were true, and couldn't afford for this information to get out. The head of the rival family secretly hired a band of weequay slavers to capture Nara's family, effectivly stopping the rumors from spreading. In the middle of the night, the slavers came, strapping collars on the neck of each family member...

Ten days after their capture, the slavers had brought them to the planet Nar Shaddaa. There, the slavers sold them to members of the Hutt cartel one by one. Both Nara's parents were sold to a hutt named Giradda, but she wasn't so fortunate. She was sold to a hutt fond of gladiator combat, Esteleh.

Esteleh met Nara in person making her a promise "If you do as I command, and fight for me. I will set you free. For you will be my greatest warrior, a testament to the technology of this day and age." Nara wasn't excited about her imprisonment or the separation from her parents, but she didn't exactly have any other options. She accepted the hutt's terms. This began Nara's training in gladiator combat. She would be trained in boxing by a Gamorrean named zharr, and experimented on by scientists under Esteleh's payroll. Nara would be injected with various spices and stims which would exponentially increase her strength and speed.

Years in the ring (13-17):
The day Nara became thirteen years old, she entered the ring under Esteleh's banner for the first time. She was fighting another girl around her age, but something was different. This other girl was human, yet had red eyes. She was young, yet had a presence of pure evil. This other young girl, was a captured sith acolyte. Unaware, Nara entered the ring with a pair of brass knuckles, as the sith did with a vibro-blade. a Rodian announcer would start the fight: "In this corner, a girl from the unknown, a blue menace, champion of Esteleh the hutt: Nara Cross! And in this corner, the girl with death in her heart and flames in her eyes, former member of the jedi academy, Champion of Bakura the hutt: Raylah yeleshz! Fighter's, are you ready?" Nara's jaw dropped a bit, she remembered stories her father told her about the jedi, they were an unstoppable force. Nara didn't have any other option however, and nodded her head. The young Ex-jedi across from her grit her teeth and spat "Come and fall before me like all the others!" the announcer fired a blaster, signifying the duel starting.

Nara would rush headstrong at the ex-jedi, recklessly throwing punches with power similar to that of grown man (thanks to Esteleh's scientists). The girl appeared as if she had expected this attack, ducking and slipping every punch thrown. Ratlah, lifted her blade, and with a quick stroke made a gash across Nara's eye. Nara shouted in pain clutching her eye with both hands, she fell to her knees. As she did this, the former Jedi walked over to her and began monologuing "Filth like you has no right fighting beings with power such as mine!" she rose her blade to finish the job, but as she did Nara leapt to her feet, delivering an upper cut to Raylah's lower jaw. Taken off guard by the maneuver, the sith was stunned allowing Nara to continuously throw left and right hooks to her face. By the end of it all the ex-jedi was hardly recognizable, and the announcer lifted Nara's arm in the air. "Everyone! we have a new dueling champion, Nara Cross, fighter of Esteleh the hutt!" the crowd would roar, and so would Esteleh.

Years would pass for Nara as she fought hundreds of various opponents from across the galaxy. This would soon end, as Esteleh reveled her true purpose for Nara. "Ah, little Nara, where has the time gone... It is time I explain why I have been training you... You see, the galaxy is a dangerous place full of people even I would not quarrel with. You are my champion, my bodyguard in a way. I have trained you to defeat those who wield lightsabers and the force as their ally. Sith Slayer indeed! I would like to make you an offer, be employed under me and set free or we sell you to the Sith where you will be tortured for treason like your parents!" Nara would gasp, technically speaking, she had killed a sith in the ring, and did commit treason. Her parents however, how did they? Nara would say "I'll stay with you on one condition... Allow me to find my parents, and slay the Sith that tortured them..." the hutt would agree to these terms, and allow Nara to act as her bodyguard...

The Sith Slayer (18-Present):
Nara would spend her days doing ordinary tasks for the hutt, making security sweeps of the palace, making sure people paid their debts, and most importantly acted as a bodyguard of her employer. When not on duty, Nara would search for clues as to where the sith kept their prisoners, and where her parents might be. when she became twenty, Esteleh made Nara Captain of security for her palace.

Not long after this, Esteleh the hutt would receive a threatening message from a sith: "Esteleh the Hutt I presume... My name is Thoron Yeleshz, I'm contacting you because after all these years, I know your the one who killed my daughter..." Esteleh would raise her arms up saying "I have no clue what your talking about, I am but a hutt, how am I to murder a mighty sith?" Thoron smirked "Perhaps it was someone under your employment then... Nevertheless, I suggest you check you security cameras..."

The security footage would reveal a large gang of bounty hunters outside the palace doors, two dead guards lie in front of them. Nara would sound the alarm, but no guards would come. The hallways were littered with the bodies of Esteleh's men. Knowing there was nothing she could do to defend the hutt or the palace, Nara ran to the armory grabbing as much as she could carry. She then left the palace, allowing the Sith's hunters to take over and kill her former master.

Using what credits she had and the equipment she stole from the armory, Nara bought a large warehouse on Nar Shaddaa's lowest level. She converted the warehouse into a base of operations, where she would begin fighting Crime and the forces of the Sith across the outer rim. When Nara would dawn her modified, costumed armor, she would be known as the 'Sith Slayer' enemy to all who harm the innocent...


Abilities and Equipment




Attributes:

Strength: X X X X X X X X X X
(Nara's natural strength has been enhanced by her rigorous boxing training and illegal sims taken over the years. This makes her above average in strength)

Dexterity: X X X X X X X X X X
(While she has very good strength, Nara's dexterity is far superior. The primary type of stims used on her were agility and reflex based, as well as her boxing cardio. This makes her one of the most dexterous in the galaxy)

Stamina: X X X X X X X X X X
(Nara may posses great strength and speed, but her stamina is lower than average. This is due to the long-term effects of the many combat stims she had previously taken. This causes her to have slightly less stamina than average.)

Intelligence: X X X X X X X X X X

(Nara has not gone through any traditional schooling, but does have some specialized knowledge related to her "line of work". This makes her less Intelligent than average.)

Wisdom: X X X X X X X X X X
(Nara is excellent at making logical decisions when the situation requires it, but she can occasionally throw caution to the wind while dawning the 'Sith Slayer' matel . This makes her more wise than most.)

Charisma: X X X X X X X X X X

(Nara is generally considered attractive due to her physical body being in very good shape, but she has had little contact with people outside of her work, and is semi-disfigured from her many scars. This makes her slightly less charismatic than most.)
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Skills:

Piloting: X X X X X / Unarmed: X X X X X / Throwing: X X X X X /

Melee: X X X X X / Blasters: X X X X X / Computers: X X X X X /
Stealth: X X X X X / Mechanics: X X X X X / Slicing: X X X X X /
Acrobatics: X X X X X / Athletics: X X X X X /
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Equipment:
Civilian Loadout:
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Street Clothes
- Hand-held Comlink

Vigilante Loadout:
-Slayer Mk.1
- Shock Boxing gloves

 
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Raydo

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Hey there,

So everything looks pretty good, just some minor things need tweaking in the bio to make this work. The Chiss are pretty staunch isolationist and its not a common journey to make, especially as a vacation. I might suggest that her family was exiled from Csila and was captured while trying to navigate Wild Space. Second is the Sith Order were only JUST founded. Before that, they were a loosely organized group of Jedi Exiles. There wasn't anything as formal as an Academy either as the Exiles were all but destroyed just before the TL started.

Ten years prior to the current date the Exiles would have been engaged in the last days of their war with the Republic and Jedi. I think you could get away by making the girl she fights a captured Exiled Apprentice.

You will need to remove the armor until its approved and then can add it back, until then feel free to use an approved set of armor (Note that FS characters cannot use anything with working Armor Functions on them so even if your armor was approved as is, it would not be usable by your character.)

Tag me once those changes are made and ill come back and take a look.
 

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Okay, I changed the back story saying: A rival family hired the slavers to take her family, and made it to where the girl was an ex-jedi apprentice. (Note: I allowed the girl's father to remain Sith, as to say they were both jedi at one point.)

Further more, I changed the armor until my personal one can be approved. Also I added a grappling hook to the inviontory to compensate for the lack of armor functions (Hope thats ok?)

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You missed this part of Raydo's review:

I think you could get away by making the girl she fights a captured Exiled Apprentice.

You still have the girl written as a captured Sith. Tag me once you've made the correction.
 
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