Naxel Razee

Naxel

Jedi Padawan
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NAME:
Naxel Razee
FACTION:
Jedi
RANK:
Initiate
SPECIES:
Togruta
AGE:
14
GENDER:
Male
FORCE SENSITIVE:
Yes, Not yet trained.

APPEARANCE:
Being from the world of Shili, Naxel is a 5'8 orange skinned male that weighs around 155 lbs. On his head are hollow horn like projections known as monstrals. His monstrals are short compared to his elders due to him being a young age. Attached to them are tails known as Lekku. He has three of them: Two of them are on his front side, hanging over the shoulders slightly, and one thicker one hanging down behind his head. On each side of his monstrals are three blue markings in the shapes of arrows that point upwards. Below the arrows the markings start forming into rings that take shape around each of the lekku.

Not only having markings on his lekku and monstrals, but also having white markings on his face. His markings start from the top of his forehead, and makes a straight line down between his eyes. It continues over his nose, and then stops at the top of his mouth. From the top of his mouth it goes around his mouth, and then meets at the bottom where it then makes another straight line over his chin. Lastly, he has markings that start slightly above between his eyes, then going around the top of his eyes where his eye brows should be, and finally ending at the bottom corners of his eyes right above his cheeks.

When it comes to his body he is has quite a muscular build. Since he worked on the farm with his family, and liked to play a lot, he had built up strong body. When he worked with his dad he was made to pick up heavy objects, and move them to different spots. Due to that he had formed a chiseled chest, and abs on his torso and stomach. His arms and legs were no different, and had muscle where you could see it.

PERSONALITY:

Since being at a young age Naxel is shy whenever he is around new people that he doesn't know. But whenever he opens up to someone he is a keen and friendly person. He also is a very inteligent person. Whenever someone brings up a educated conversation he will always be in the conversation. Even though he doesn't like to make himself look goofy he is quite a joking person. He has a dry sense of humor, and likes to joke about serious matters. Due to his intelectual personality whenever someone makes a stupid remark he isn't able to help himself and makes smart butt comment towards that person. Thanks to his parents he was taught to always help those in need.

ATTRIBUTES:
Not yet trained in the arts of a Jedi he only had very few. His most noticeable attributes were that he had high endurance, stamina, and was quite strong. He could pick up objects that were two times his weight, and also could run full speed for up to a mile. There was not much he couldn't do physically.

SKILLS:

Skills have yet to be learned

BIOGRAPHY:
EARLY LIFE
As a young boy, Naxel was an only child to two loving parents on the planet of Shili. His father was a farmer, and his mother worked as a farm hand for his father. They lived in a small house out on a hilly pasture with small fields surrounding them at the bottom. His family farmed the fields at the bottom of the hill, and grew food for them to eat off of. On most days Naxel would usually roll down the hill from where his house sits, or go play on the other side of his fathers fields where a small forest resides. His favorite place to play was out in the forest, because he could always imagine a kingdom out there for him to use as a form of entertainment. Whenever he wasn't playing or rolling down the hill he would help his mother and father with the farm. Naxel loved his parents more than anything. But one day everything changed while he was helping out his father move tools back to the house.

After a long day of working in the fields it was time for them to head back to the house. On the way back Naxel and his father were carrying the tools, so his mother wouldn't have to do anything more than she had to. As they reached about mid-way of the hill a tool had slipped from Naxel's hand. He quickly noticed that the tool had escaped his grip and tried to reach out for it, but as he looked down it was floating in mid air. Quite confused on what was happening. His parents had turned around and noticed the phenomenon that was happening. Looking quite frightened at the sight of their young child can use the force. They quickly grabbed him by his arm and ran towards the house. Once reaching the house, they opened the door, went inside, and locked it behind them. Naxel's father pressed his face against the door, and looked around to make sure no one had seen what happened. After checking outside, he turned around and looked at Naxel with a worrisome look. Naxel was now more confused about what was going on. He looked at his father and said "What is wrong Father?" His father looked at him and broke out into a smile, "It is nothing son. You just gave us a scare is all." But as he said what he did Naxel noticed he was lying. Not another word was said about it.

A month or so had passed, and not another word was spoken about Naxel's mysterious ability. But what Naxel's parents didn't know was that whenever he went into the forest and played he would use his mysterious powers. While a month has passed, and Naxel had been using his ability. A day had come whenever Naxel was leaving the forest from his play time, and was heading home. Once reaching the base of the hill he looked up and notice a ship was hovering above the house. Not quite sure what was going on, but he walked up the mountain to see what was happening. As he reach the top of the hill, and caught glimpse of his house, a mysterious person in a hooded cloak was standing in front of his parents talking to them. Naxel walked slowly towards them, and noticed that his mother spotted him. She gave Naxel a worrisome smile, and waved for him to approach them. Walking up to them he stood next to this mother and stared at the mysterious man. The man looked down upon him and spoke. "Hello there young one. I am a Jedi. We have felt a presence in the force coming from you. I know you do not know what is going on, but I will explain everything later once we reach the jedi temple." As the jedi finished speaking Naxel didn't know what to say. He looked at the his parents with tears falling from his eyes. His mother crouched down grabbed his arms. "Everything is alright Naxel. You are going to go with this man, and become a powerful Jedi. Your father and I do not want you to go, and I know you don't either. But I know that if you go with him you will have a bright future. He also has promised that you can return here to see us. So I am not worried about you not coming back." She said as she then hugged her son. "Go, and make us the happiest parents in the universe!", she said as she let go of her baby boy. Naxel then gathered his things, and said his goodbyes. He approach and stood next to the jedi. Seeing that Naxel was ready to go he looked up at his ship, and it began to descend down towards them. Once it got right to them they climbed up the ramp, and took their seats on the ship. Not really sure what was going on, or really what was happening. His goal was to do as his mother said and make them proud. That was his life goal from here on out.

Looking out of the window all he could see was stars. They had not been on the ship for long, but he was already growing homesick. The jedi had notice that the young Naxel was not really liking this so far. So the jedi turned around him his pilots chair, and walked over to Naxel. "I know you are scared and frightened, but I want you to relax. This adventure that you are about to start is going to be a wonderful journey. There will be tough challenging time, but overall it is going to be wonderful." Before Naxel could say a word. The droid that was piloting the ship had called for him to return to his seat as they was approaching the home world of the Jedi. The Jedi looked at Naxel with a smile, and then made his way back to his seat. As they made their way into the planet Naxel looked out the window and saw an amazing view. Once seeing everything out the window he had become more relaxed and excited. The Jedi noticed his mood changed, and started to smile. Once they landed, and the ramp opened. Naxel made his way down, and the Jedi was walking behind him. When they took a step onto the ground Naxel looked up at the temple, and was ready to start his journey.

JEDI ADVENTURE BEGINS
To Be Contiuned
GEAR:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
Coming Soon!

RELATIONSHIPS:
N/A

COMBAT:
N/A


P.S: The lack of Info will be do to the fact that I am wanting to build this character from the ground up. From a starting out jedi padawan to hopefully Jedi Master.​
 
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Pulsar

Etaak Desijilic Pungru
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Hi Naxel, your character looks really good, but I guess you've still not finished personality and biography yet. Great character:)
 

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PERSONALITY:
In one to two paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your character's personality. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues. This section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

BIOGRAPHY:
In two to three paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your characters backstory up to the point you started RPing him/her. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues. This section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

The minimum required words for the biography are 50 even if it is a W.I.P I would move this to the workshop. But anyway a good start to the appearance.
 

Pulsar

Etaak Desijilic Pungru
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BUT now the bio's finished and its really good so that's great!:)
 
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