Private Boh Raal

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Personnel File 223.606.797.749

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Boh Raal
DOB: 983 ABY
Place of Birth: CoroNet, Corellia
Age: 27
Species: Kel Dor
Rank: Private
Assignment: Advanced Recon, Counter terrorism
Status: Active

Personal
Boh was born in the inner city neighborhood of Corellia. A latchkey kid, Boh's parents both worked long hard hours, and thus Boh spent more time on the streets than the typical kid in his neighborhood. Boh came to know everyone on the streets of his neighborhood, both good and bad. While Boh never joined in any illegal or otherwise unwise activities, Boh was well aware of everything that took place around him. As he grew, the streets hardened him, learning to work the angles find leverage over others. School treated him well, but the lack of supervision meant he slid by with average grades. Too this point, Boh had made few friends or attachments, so without much direction Boh enlisted in the army.

Military
Boh started as a riflemen for the 112th infantry division, where he excelled in the military life. However, despite being well liked by his squad mates, Boh was still introverted and wary of becoming attached or too friendly with his squad mates. In 1007 ABY, Boh served duty as a peace keeper in the edges of the western reaches displayed great ability. While there, Boh's united provided support to special operations forces. Boh instantly became enamored by the special units, specifically how they operated both independently and as a team. Once Boh finished his tour, he immediately applied to join the special operations division, and was quickly accepted.

During his time with the special operations division, Boh earned a double major in history and intergalactic relations. Within the special operations, he was assigned forward recon duties as a spotter, and on rare occasions became the man taking the shot. His natural isolated tendencies means he prefers to work as independently as possible, explaining his natural affinity for small two man teams.

Physical Condition
Boh is listed at five ten, and 170 lbs. He has no hair, and has beige skin. Requires an anti-oxygen mask and goggles in order to breath and see virtually everywhere. It should be noted that while Boh has performed well in all training activities, he appears slightly more fragile than his special operations counterparts. Recommended for hostile atmospheric conditions due to species.​
 
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He's pretty basic, maybe a little generic, but I'd really appreciate as much C&C as possible. I hope to develop this character a lot, and plan to revamp this profile several times. If anyone has any suggestion on how to improve this as is, please let me know.

I'm a little disappointed with the profile, but really hope to improve it as much as possible.

Also, if anyone has any decent Kel Dor pictures you think would fit, please let me know. All the Kel Dor pictures I could find were all jedi or sith.
 

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Thanks for the pictures. I'm worried that the armor looks a little too mando. I'll wait and see what other people think of the picture, but I'll likely use it assuming no one points out anything that wouldn't fit.
 

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Well, Boh's issued standardized galactic alliance equipment, and thus would wear and use the equipment listed in the galactic alliance sub forum. To tis point, I think the most he'd have is a preferred weapon, while the armor selection seems a been lacking... not that there's anything wrong it it. Its not like US marines are out there picking which color they're ganna wear that day.

The only real selection I'd be giving him would be his off duty clothing, which would be fairly simple. I don't intend to have him in the army for long, and intend to transfer him over to intelligence work as soon as that becomes a possibility.
 

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I don't think the armor is a big deal, just mention it's a souvenir he picked up. Also, maybe have him join the military because he's seeking direction and a purpose.
 

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Well, Boh's issued standardized galactic alliance equipment, and thus would wear and use the equipment listed in the galactic alliance sub forum. To tis point, I think the most he'd have is a preferred weapon, while the armor selection seems a been lacking... not that there's anything wrong it it. Its not like US marines are out there picking which color they're ganna wear that day.

The only real selection I'd be giving him would be his off duty clothing, which would be fairly simple. I don't intend to have him in the army for long, and intend to transfer him over to intelligence work as soon as that becomes a possibility.
nice bro, that's a nice plan. maybe steven can partner up with him, he's a scout.
 

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Alright, that's a good idea. I'll go ahead and use it. Might even add some depth to my character.
 
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