Red

Red

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NAME: Red

FACTION: The Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Hooman (Human)
AGE: 15
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5.5
WEIGHT: 128 lbs
EYES: Light blue
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Peach
CREDITS: Mighty fine 1000 credits!
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: On her chest, she has a Scar falling downwards to her belly button.
FORCE SENSITIVE: You bet I am!

STRENGTH: She is strong, stronger then most really at her age.6/10
DEXTERITY: Her reactions may fall abit late at most times. Although she can pull of Dex related types of combat and movement. Its just her reaction time 7/10
CONSTITUTION: If you push her down, she will come back up everytime, very durable and healthy.8/10
INTELLIGENCE: Not the brightest, but only by a little bit, she has very very little education and even that has dwindled over time, she hopes to improve 4/10
WISDOM: Id say just about average.5/10
CHARISMA: Maybe a little above normal, Red is known for emotion over logic, and having a trusting feeling, a little above average mayhap.6/10

PERSONALITY:

Red is an emotional wreck, she is impatient, sometimes ungrateful, rude and snotty to those she doesn't know, she doesn't trust anyone, anyone that she hasn't known for quite some time, but at other times she can be caring, sorry and quite jolly. It really depends on the situation and she really shifts alot, although the distrust stays with all situations. She isn't lazy, she is quite a go doer. She is determined, but not stubbornly prideful. She can get tasks done that others would rather not do, but she is willing to adapt to situations, not making her a stubborn brute. She is very prone to being charmed. Having a major softspot for anything furry that she can pet and wont bite her.

She is quite impatient, she will not wait around doing nothing, she must always be occupied or she might get carried away. That said when occupied she is quite involved and determined to do or learn whatever she can about the activity. There is no problem getting her involved aslong as it fits in her interests and morals. She really doesn't trust anyone, very careful about everything, paranoid about everyone she meets. But if you can get past the barrier. Your in for one great pal, companion , and friend.

BIOGRAPHY:

Red grew up on Tatooine, on a small remote villiage not to far from Mos Esly. She was daughter to a former Jedi of the order. Who had deserted to live a peaceful life and get married. The name of her father Was Orlandu, Orlandu had fell in love with another human while sent on a mission on Tatooine. It was a solo mission and of very small importance, mainly just patrol, and save anyone you can. During this he fell in love with a woman named Arden. Arden and Orlandu quicky decided that they could fake Orlandu's death in a fake explosion, using the body of a stripped stormtrooper, and leaving his lightsaber on the burnt body, being the body burnt and mutilated in the explosion, no one would know who it really was, but since it had the Lightsaber they assumed it was the Jedi, and quickly told the order.

Red had a brother named Cael. Cael was born first about 7 years ahead of Red. Cael was funny, clever and quick witted. He liked to play around on a speeder that his father Orlandu had managed to buy with some funds leftover from his Jedi mission. Orlandu now, was living in the wilderness, He still had a Vibroblade and the way of the force to protect him and his family. Cael loved spending time with Red after she was born, they had an unbreakable bond of friendship and trust. It was a great time for all of them. They lived happy and peaceful away from the troubles off the world. And the Sandpeople were paid a free monthly, and they would avoid raiding Red's family.

It's now Reds 13'th birthday, the biggest turning point in her life. Orlandu now lacks the money to pay the feet , and he knows this ahead of time, he decided to tell Red and Cael to join the jedi order, and he shall contact them right away. He did so sending a message to a former Jedi friend of his, Leroy. Leroy got the message but it was too late. The sand raiders raided the small hamlet. Overwhelming and killing Orlandu. Cael ,Arden, And Red were sold into slavery and kept in the sand raider refuge . Leroy went to visit his friend but saw burning ruins, for a week Leroy searched and asked about him. Before finding his family for sale at Mos Esly in a secret slave market. He quickly bought them out. Cael and Red were sent into the Order as Padawans, And Arden decided to let them live their lives, letting her grief Orlandu. Red has also gained a scar down her chest when trying to flee. She was caught and they slowly cut a long deep cut down her chest, and then healed it to keep her alive to sell.

Red was split up from Cael. But they will always remember eachother, and they constantly send messages to eachother through the order. Although the Jedi are working against them most of the time due to Jedi Ideals. Red has now had atleast basic training in form 2 of lightsaber combat, and is just grasping the force. She chose to learn Makashi instead of form one as she more easily grasped its form and technique. Her master now Leroy. allowed this

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FORCE POWERS: Still grasping the Basics of the force as a young Padawan, you know basics like Force push and pull, 'all that.
Fore powers description goes here!​
Force push 3/10
Force pull 4/10
Force jump 2/10
(Not really good with force powers, help needed.)

SKILLS:
Red posses basic Makashi lightsaber combat skills, aswell as skill with a speeder and various other types of machines. Red has basic first aid skills and is good at mapping local areas.​

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Makashi, thats it.


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths.
Fit, from being in the lone sands she had to do field work, and lift heavy objects and move them across land. She became strong and fit doing this.
Durable like a tank. With her two years in slavery, it was a living hell for her. She endured torture and beatings but always got back up for the sake of survival. Never gave up hope and kept strong till the end..although beaten and bloody.
Adaptive. Red had to adapt to her new life as a Padawan. She learned that through adapting to the situation one comes best prepared. she is always open to new ideas and new ways to solve a problem.
Weaknesses
Emotional, She lets her emotions bind her. This may get in the way of Jedi training but she is still a young padawan, and has much much to learn.
Distrustful and rude. She can be distrustful and rude to those outside of the order and those she doesn't know or has a bad feeling about. But even then 97% of people she meets she will distrust and ..be a general smartass and rude child to. Often being obnoxious too. But once you get to meet her and get to know her things go upwards.
Bit slow. Her reactions arn't the quickiest and she is working on this through her training and other forms . She was built on strength and endurance. Not speed and agility.

GEAR:
Jedi Robes. Simple Padawan robes she wears.
A lightsaber. She has been given Orlandu's lightsaber, Although Jedi customs say she should make her own when time comes. Although she has been given permission to use her Fathers until that time comes.


<--OPTIONAL CONTENT-->


SHIP:
Nooone

DROIDS:
Nope

PETS:
I wish

KILLS:
None so far

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
Nope
DUELING RING MATCHES:
Nope

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
Nope
ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Rae Anne Jarrus

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I saw that your character has a scar going down from her chest to her belly button.. thats funny because I do too. For real. It came from my brother

And hey, I like this character alot. If you ever want to rp, let me know! ;) :)
 

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Just wanna preface this with saying I'm not sure if this profile belongs to a new user or an old user (not sure if it's a sub or not). Anyhow continuing on.

Jedi AFL here. Your profile looks nice and really well done! I would suggest going back over and doing a read because you missed a few things here and there.

Mostly just a couple of nitpicky things. Firstly, it's Mos Eisley, not Esly. Second, this timeline it's the New Jedi Order, love and attachment aren't frowned upon, and Jedi are allowed to get married and have kids. Now, you don't necessarily have to change anything, but keep that in mind. Thirdly, in case you missed it the timeline is currently 1000 ABY, and the last 10 years have not been kind to the Jedi. Most have been in hiding up until this last year as they are hunted by the Sith. It's only recently they started to strike back with the rebels against the Empire.

Also, as a side note, I love how unJedi her personality is. It will give her plenty of room to grow me thinks! Hope my tips give you some better insight into the timeline and for your RPing! :)
 
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Red

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Hey hey hey! Thank you all for the advice, anyone who wants to roleplay with me, just msg me. Ill make quick edits to the profile. Thanks for the feedback anyhow <3 (Also, new user)
 

Lexi-Oi

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Oh my goodness I love you character! Did you draw your profile picture?
 

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@Red

Such a cute character. Will you be using her in the new TL?
 

Red

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I will try, Im unsure about the timeline in general and all how that works, help and advice would be great.
 
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