Rein Misaar

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This Profile is Just going to Be Used for Practicing until the New Time-Line comes out As Long as thats Aloud. I Wont Get involved in any Actual Rp that is Relevant to the Fourth Timeline.

its my First Star wars Profile So i Got Kinda Lost in the Bio, Im Not sure wither i like it or not. if its not long enough tell me and il try an Spice it up Somehow.

If theres anything wrong with it Tell me Please, Dont be afraid to be Blunt. [:


NAME: Rein Misaar
FACTION:
RANK:
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 17 Years
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'7"
WEIGHT: 146 pounds
EYES: Dark brown with a Hint of Green around the Pupal.
HAIR: Shoulder Length Straight Brown Hair
SKIN: Caucasian, Tan.
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: One Small Scar that Cuts through his Right Eye Brow, Two Small Scars Below his Rib Cage on his Left Side and One Large Scar Diagonally across his Back Stretching from his Left Shoulder to his Right Lower Back
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 5/10 About Average for someone his Age and Size.
DEXTERITY: 8/10 Rein is Very Quick and his Reaction Time is Increadable.
CONSTITUTION: 6/10 Very Healthy (Not Quite sure what to List here.)
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10 Rein is Very Smart But not at All Book Smart. He Catches on to things Quickly and is a Hard Person to Fool.
WISDOM: 5/10 He is Young with Much to Learn, He is Smart and his Brain is Like a Sponge But he has Not been Exposed to Much so his View on the Universe is Small.
CHARISMA: 4/10 He is Not a People Person, He doesn't try to Convince anyone to do Anything but when he Does he Usually Succeeds. He Does his Own Thing and leaves People Alone.

FORCE POWERS: Simple Force Push and Pull.

SKILLS:
Moderately Skilled with a Vibroblade, No Actual Training, He is Self Taught. He is a Scrapper so he is an Excellent Fighter when it comes to Fists.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
I Suppose his Strength, If he Has one, Is Close Range Combat. Crossing Blades with An Opponent or just Duking it out the Old Fashion way, Thats how he likes to Fight. That being Said it Makes his Weakness Obvious, Long Range Combat Trumps Him. He Has no Experience whatsoever Wielding Blaster Pistols or Rifles.

GEAR: He Owns One Vibroblade, Smithed using the Cortosis-weave. He Wears a Basic, Tanish-White, Long sleeve Shirt and Pants. Tan Sandals.


SHIP:


PETS:


PERSONALITY: Rein is Afraid to make Connections with anyone and at the Same time he Doesn't really know how.It would Mean the World to him if he actually "Meant" Something to Someone. He Thinks of Himself as a Loner and is Willing to do Anything to Survive even if it Means another Persons Life. Rein is Really Self Conscious about Himself Thus Explaining his Self Need to Constantly Better Himself. No Matter his Situation he Will want to Become Smarter, More Powerful And More Well-Known Throughout the Universe. Rein is Trigger Happy, Not Necessarily with a Gun but Temper-Wise. Its Extremely easy to make him Angry and when you do he "See's Red".


BIOGRAPHY:
Rein Misaar was Born in Mos Eisley on Tatooine into Slavery, His Mother and Father Were Owned By a Trader. They Were Both Large Strong Slaves and Rein was Supposed to be a Crossbred Masterpiece, That was not the Case. Rein was born Early and a Runt, He was Tiny. As he Aged he was Seen as Useless, A Good for Nothing Waste of Time. He was Constantly Abused and Beaten for he Served his Master personally as a "Butler" Type Slave Once he Turned Three years Old. His Parents had to Stand by and Watch this for Five Years Before they were sold to a Slaver in Bestine. At this point Rein could Take a Beating like Champ, Able to Dull out Pain Having Been beat Near Death on Multiple Occasions. A Year Later his Parents Escaped Slavery and Returned to Mos Eisley, They Tracked down Rein and Freed him After Killing his Owner. They Gave him Some Credits and his Masters Own Vibroblade. His Parent Were soon Apprehended and Killed on the Spot. Rein having watched the Entire Public Execution, Escaped into Mos Eisleys Busy Atmosphere. From then on he Vowed to Constantly Seek Power, To Never be 'Weak and Useless' Again, He wanted to "Be" Somebody. He Lived on the Streets, at first living off of the Credits but then Resorted to Stealing and Robbing. He Did whatever it was he Needed to do to Survive. He did this for Six Years before being hired at a Cantina as a Busboy. In His Free Time he Trained with his Vibroblade, His Sword Skills Weren't Great but they were enough to Fend off the Average Mugger. Along with this he Trained himself Physically, Focusing on his Agility to Compensate for his lack of Strength. Despite this he Was Attacked by a Gang when he was 15, he Was Stabbed twice and Slashed in the Back then Left to Die. Rein managed to Hold on to his Vibroblade but lost all His Credits. Two Years Later at Seventeen Rein had Developed a Simple force Push and Pull the Power in Which could Knock a Full Grown man off his Feet. Having Felt the "Force" within him his Whole Life, Not Knowing Exactly what the it was he took as a Sign that he HAD to become "Someone" In the Universe. He still worked at the Cantina His Sword Skills a Bit better, He Managed to Save up 1000 Credits. Having been weak and Useless his Whole Life, He Wanted to Set off into the Universe to "Seek Power" As he Vowed when he was Younger.


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DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

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Sorry.., i have always been a fan of random capitalization. Its how i type, i do it without thinking about it. Im actually typing slower because im specifically trying not to do it. Il try to break the habit.
 

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That's a neat "self-made" type of man you've created there. The history felt a little rushed, but then again, the character is in its early stages, and I'm hardly one to talk in regards to a good character history.

A little bit of friendly advice: I'm not sure if others would agree with me on this, but I think your character is a little to skillful attribute-wise. Highly flawed characters tend to possess your character's higher statistics with threes and fours thrown into the mixture. Your character, however, only has one skill below six, and that's his wisdom at 5/10. Based upon that, I'd say he's overpowered. If you want him to be a good all-arounder, then I'd recommend you give him three fives and three sixes. Then you can throw those on whichever skills you so desire.

Just a thought. Good luck with the RP!
 
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Update: Lowered all the Attributes besides Dexterity and Wisdom.
 
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