Saen Xeelas

Saen Xeelas

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NAME: Saen Xeelas
FACTION: Sith
RANK: Wandering One (in search of a tutor)
SPECIES: Kaleesh
AGE: 23
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'9
WEIGHT: 250
EYES: Orange
HAIR: None
SKIN: Orangish Brown Scaly Skin
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Saens entire right arm from shoulder down is Cybernetic resembling General Grievous he keeps it wrapped in bandages. His left eye has that of a scar but it wasnt damaged enough to cause blinding. He wears a mask of his own design to hide his face
FORCE SENSITIVE: Very Force Sensitive can lift objects twice his weight, but has yet to master it so when he focuses on objects it takes all his strength and will to do it, thats why he prefers to fight with his hands and lightsaber

STRENGTH: 9/10 his immense strength allows him to easily fight hand to hand
DEXTERITY: 7/10 training and hunting on his planet aided his agility
CONSTITUTION: 5/10 average at best
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10 little above average
WISDOM: 5/10 average at best
CHARISMA: 0/10 his hate to other species makes others avoid him, and his mask he wears doesnt help

FORCE POWERS:
Add in the Force powers your character knows as he/she learns them. Remember that your character can only know the powers associated with his/her rank.

SKILLS: he masters in stealth and hunting down his prey. He is very veratile with fighting with his saber and also his hands and feet, so he excells in CQC combat


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None thats why he is in search of a master

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: His immense size strength and skill in CQC combat
Weakness: Attitude to others and his short temper can make him reckless

GEAR:
A tattered black hooded cloak that he wears to cover his body.
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Lightsaber is above picture

SHIP:
None

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Saen is a very short tempered kaleesh whos only true goal is kill and gain power. He prefers to work alone but is still searching out power and a master to tutor him in the ways of the sith. He is still preety young and very rash at using his powers. He has a very destructive nature, he prefers to fight now and talk later.

BIOGRAPHY:
Saens life was very complicated first loosing his father in a war when he tried to fight off rogue jedi and his mother died shortly from an illness leaving him to fend for himself at the age of 10. He lived in seclusion in the forests of Kaleel hunting down his prey and killing without mercy. During his years in seclusion hin anger grew more and more towards the Jedi who slaughtered his father in the war even though they were rogue he hated them and all there kind. During his seclusion he trained in the ways of the force which he knew the only way to beat them is to have there power also. Over the next 10 years he mastered the ways of the force in his eyes and began to search out Jedi to slaughter.
After a year of searching he found what he thought to be a jedi and challenged him, this so called jedi was actually a sith but Saen had no knowledge of the sith and killed this sith with his immense strength and force powers but at the cost of his right arm which was sliced off from the shoulder down. As the siths dead body laid there saen took his lightsaber as his own and found someone who could build him a mechanized arm. After that day saen began wearing a mask to cover his features and a hooded cloak. He began to wander from planet to planet in search of more jedi to slaughter and look for a sith lord to teach him there ways so he could gain more power.

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Pele

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Pretty good, nice overall character, it's good to see someone do a different species that is rarely role played.

Couple of things though.

I'd recommend cleaning it up a bit. For example, on Credits:, you have nothing listed. Also, moving weaknesses down a line or so would be pleasing to the eyes of readers. Under Force powers you have the stuff from the template. And so on.

Another thing would be force powers. I'm not 100% on the rules, but I believe you gotta be trained before you can use them proficiently.

And a few spelling mistakes here and there.

But aside from that it's not to bad.
 
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