Saren Volke

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Saren Volke
Faction: Dishoam Order
Rank: Dishoam Vanguard
Species: Human
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Height: 6'3
Weight: 230 lbs
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Blonde
Skin: A healthy Pale Wite
Distinguishing Marks: Scruffy chin?
Dominate Hand: Ambidexterous
Force Sensitive: Yes.
Strength: 7/10
Dexterity: 6/10
Constitution:10/10
Intelligence: 7/10
Wisdom: 9/10
Charisma: 10/10


Force Powers:
Force speed
Force Jump
Force Strength
Force Push/Pull
Force Heal



Skills: He has been trained to fight with a Blade, and has rather hardy aim with a blaster. His strength however, despite the fact that he is a wonderful fighter, is in his ability to sway the thoughts of others.

Personality: Saren is a very good natured man, wishing to spread the word of the Dishoam order to all whom will listen. He is the leading preist in the dishoam order, having founded it based on his otherworldy visions. He is currently running the assassins guild of the Dishoam Order, but is looking for a replacement seeing as he does not like blood on his hands.

Equipment: Saren Volke is dressed in standard black Jedi Robes, howeve he wears a long coat made of leather over his standard robes, and a modified chestplate beneath them. On his wrists he carries 4 throwing knives, two on each wrist. He carries a ceremonial blade on his hip, which has an obsidian black blade and is slightly resistant to lightsaber attacks. There are two slugthrowers within his coat, the most primative blaster on the market, and a chain whip with a reflective coating. Whenever he is preaching, there is a high possibility he will be wearing white Robes, and only have his ceremonial blade on him. During Arena fights, he also carries a cross hilt broadsword on his back, much like the one his brother uses in combat. On his waistline her carries with him now, a lightsaber, a souvenier from his first assassination, he replaced it's green crystal with an orange one for aesthetic purposes.

History: It was at age Seven that Saren realized he was different. He had always been a little more keen about his surroundings, been very aware. He was the fastest of his freinds in races, and always won the mock battles they had, but he was nothing but a nice child. Infact he was destined for mediocracy do to his abusive father.He had always hidden his potential so that he did not surpass his father at anything, not wanting to hurt his pride. HIs father was a very prideful man, and everyone knew the town drunk, Karel Disho Volke. All this changed in the split of a second. When Saren was 14 he was having his first intimate experiance with a woman, a woman named Lyn, who he had liked for years. His father walked in on them sharing a kiss and went into a blind rage, striking Saren in the face. It was when Saren became enraged that he seemed to move his fathers shaving razor with his mind, watching as it flew across the room and sliced his fathers throat open. Saren had realied that he was cursed with an evil power, and vowed to do all that he could to supress it.


Cut forward to Saren 17th birthday, Saren had spent the last three years wandering as a hermit, loosing more and more of his egotistical personality gained from his father. On his voyage he met a man by the nam of Karel-sin Jaffar, a man who claimed to be a Jedi Knight. He said that he sensed a great power in Saren and that he would make a good Jedi. Saren began to look at his powers as not a curse, but a gift from the divines. He would need to make up for his horrible actions of the past and seek out other people gifted such as he, and teach them how to live with their powers, and how to better themselves without succombinging to the dark temptations within. He would teach thim to live a peacefull life, and most of all, he would be the punisher for the divines. He had already sealed his fate when he killed his father, there was no attoning for that murder. Thusly, he would use his strength to lead others with simmilar paths, on a holy crusade to wipe out those who used their powers to harm or change the lives of others, those who played god. Taking his fathres namesake, he would start the Dishoam church to spread the truth, and silence the teachings of the heretics.

It was sometime later that he realized that the church members could not be a part of his holy crusade, that to truly preach the word of the divines he could not use the gift in front of them in any way, and could not preach murder. It was this that led him to the conclusion that a secret sect of the order must be completed, but who would join. It was fate that he ran into a young girl by the name of Rukia Yale, a slaver who had just been freed. He took this girl in as his student, and more importantly, his daughter. He taught her everything he knew about combat and the church, and made her the first Dishoam assassin. He is prouder of her than even his own church, and his only fear that he has made her to good at killing. He now has a demon to fear, for if he slips off the path for but a moments notice, he knows Rukia will cleanse the universe of his soul.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: Dimitrijeh Ordo vs Saren Volke
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Interesting piccy. Won't comment on the history, although see quote below.
 

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I know I'm a bit ashamed of it, but since the whole idea popped into my head around 4 30 in the morning, I'll let myself slide for now.
 

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Don't worry about it. Bit of work, and any profile can be raised to a decent standard; the actual content of this isn't so bad.
 

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Second Update
 

Eiji

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Thanks,, I'm trying. Im not really good at RP'ng yet, at least not by my freinds standards.
 

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People on a Php Chat RP site. They are a group of RP elitists who think anything less than 4 paragraphs is bad. I don't think I'm that bad. I mean I've got to be a better writer than your average 17 year old.
 

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People on a Php Chat RP site. They are a group of RP elitists who think anything less than 4 paragraphs is bad. I don't think I'm that bad. I mean I've got to be a better writer than your average 17 year old.

Lool...for me, three paragraphs is good enough, lol. Screw it, it's very cool dude, keep it up. ^^
 

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Sorry about the lag, my interent died and I've beenon Vaycay for the summer, but I'm back. ^^
 

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s'all cool, nice to meet you btw. I'm Remer and I'm the RP's friendly neighborhood azn. ^^
 

Eiji

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I'm wondering if this mainly noncombat unit is going to fare well in the Grand Tournament. Maybe I ought to have a sparring match first.

Any comments on the actual history, or ney?
 

Eiji

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Updated the grand tournament matches section. ^^

Since I want to feel special, I'm going to throw some Congrats at myself for winning.

Congrats Eiji, job well done.
 

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Updated the grand tournament matches section. ^^

Since I want to feel special, I'm going to throw some Congrats at myself for winning.

Congrats Eiji, job well done.

Nice.

I'm your next opponent, and the character looks pretty cool. I think this'll be an interesting match. I hope you make it a good one, K?

Good luck.:D
 
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