Savgent Ordo

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NAME: Savgent Ordo
FACTION: Mandalorians
RANK: Verde
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 28
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 153
EYES: Hazel
HAIR: Black
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Black Tattoo of a eye on the back of his neck.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

STRENGTH: 7/10 Savgent has trained hard to be able to use his families vibrosword effectively with one hand.
DEXTERITY: 5-6/10 Sav has good reflexes but still there are others much faster then him. When using hi families vibrosword it slows him down and reduces his movability.
CONSTITUTION: 6/10 He has a strong will power matched with average endurance and health.
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10 He knows his Mandalorian history and battle tactics well but not much else in the world he only cares for his people anyways.
WISDOM: 7/10 Sav knows how to put what he knows to good use on the battlefield making him a good tactician.
CHARISMA: 8/10 Sav prefers the role of a commander as he is a great leader and will do what it takes for the mission to get done.

Skills: Tactician- Sav is a natural tactician as he is able to make quick decisions in the toughest of situations and is well versed in battle tactics.
Fast Reaction- Sav is good at making quick reactions in pressured situations.
Loyal- Sav's loyalty to his people is unquestionable he is ready to lay down his life in order to make sure the Galaxy knows that the Mandalorians are not to be trifled with.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Advanced Vibrosword training


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths​
Vibrosword training, Study of battle tactics, Strong willed, and unyielding to his enemies.

Weaknesses​
Is a here and now type of person, Does whatever it take to complete his mission no matter how many people die, cares only for the Mandalorian people and couldn't careless about the others of the galaxy.


GEAR: Standard Mandalorian armor with jetpack attachment, Vibrosword with Ordo edge into the sheath which he keeps strapped to his back, and a Traycn'buurenaar "Firestorm" Repeater.

Vibrosword-It has been modified over the many years it has been passed down through his families currently it has moderate resistance to electromagnetic and ion weapon interference and as a extra precaution it's power cells automatically disconnects to prevent it from overloading and damaging Sav.

SHIP: He owns a standard Kar'tracyn-class Light Interceptor.


DROIDS: None


PETS: None


PERSONALITY: On the battlefield Sav is serious focused and determined with nothing pulling him away from his task. He obeys commands without a second thought and expects soldiers under his lead to do the same for him. To challenge a order to him is seen as one of the worst insults someone can do. He has respect for warriors that prove to be challenging or refuse to give up but despises those willing to give up and surrender instead of going down fighting. His mentality becomes get the job done but is adaptive but will never quit his objective even if he is the last man left standing he will keep pushing onward. Though off the battlefield he prefers to keep to himself and kind of isolates himself.


BIOGRAPHY:
IN A RP FAR FAR AWAY...

Character 2,Chapter 1-The Mandalorian
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It has been two years since after the Mandalorian people had to evacuate there homes due to the sith warning them to eave or be destroyed. Angry at the Mandalore for deciding to run rather then fight they have replaced the cowered but there new leader was no better leading to the second Mandalorian civil war. Our story takes place with Savgent a trainee Mandalorian born a mandalorian and raised since child hood as one he joined the separatist faction and is currently on a mission to avenge his father...

"Hey Sav what are you doing!" a Mandalorian yelled out to him as he surveyed the land deciding on a good point to ambush the targets. "What do you think I'm doing my job." he said a touch of anger in his voice as he hated being called Sav "Oh come on we have plenty of time to get ready before they arrive here." "No we don't for all you know they could arrive early and then you'd be the one caught off guard." Sav and a few other Mandalorians and trainees had been given a mission to set up a ambush for a loyalist group coming through this area Sav jumped at the chance because he had also received word that his target might be in the troop this was his chance to avenge his father and make a name for himself but if he hadn't jumped so quickly at the mission he would of known they where carrying important intel to the loyalist war efforts. They where suppose to come through under the cover of night but it was early in the morning and everyone else grouped up to prepare for the task unfortunately for Sav he seemed to have gotten stuck with a slacker just his luck. "Oh come on we have all the time in the world to prepare." he had been whining like this since they arrived at there position "Just shut up and do your job before you end up dead." Sav could feel himself loosing his nerves why him why did he have to get stuck with someone like this! "Hey watch your tone I'm a verde remember and your still a lonely ge'verde so show some respect!" he had obviously taken offense to that but Sav was in no mood to put up with his stupidity "I might still be a ge'verde but that doesn't mean you deserve my respect." Sav turned around to face him with a look on face that would of shown how little he cared for the man if it wasn't for his helmet being on. "Alright if your so tuff then take me on in a duel right here and now." the Mandalorian took fighting stance as if he was trying to intimidate Sav but to no effect "Fine hand to hand combat me and you."Sav took fighting stance as well "Maybe after I beat you you'll do your job you di'kutla hut'uun." But the two where quickly reminded they weren't alone as there sniper had warned them over the comm that if they tried to do anything stupid it'd be the last thing they'd do. "We will settle this back home." the other mandalorian's frustration showing in his voice before the two got back to work.
Character 2,Chapter 2-Surprise
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Night has fallen the separatist squad has taken up there positions as there quarry moves forward setting off a well placed mine taking out 2 of the men. The enemy while still close to each other had spread out in anticipation of something like this allowing the rest to quickly take cover after the explosion went off. There was 10 loyalist still standing as they scattered but where met with attacks on both sides on the left two heavy weapon mandos took on 5 shock troops as they tried to take cover while on the right 2 separatist shock troops and a heavy engaged the remaining with a sniper supported both fronts. The enemy was quickly wiped out but two loyalist managed to escape into the nearby fields during the fight followed in close pursuit by the separatist. The two loyalist split up as they entered a small patch of forest the first loyalist but the second one had disappeared unable to be found by the separatist except for one...

As the mando loyalist stopped in the forest he turned around to see another walking towards him in blue armor, Sav, who then called out to him "I've been searching for you the fact that I got to find you while on a mission made it all that better." he said throwing his gun down then he removed his helmet the loyalist remained silent. "It's time I avenged the man you killed, my father, and restore honor to his name." Sav pulled out his vibroblade readying for combat as the man took his helmet off and tossed it to the ground before pulling out a vibrosword from it's sheath preparing for the fight. Finally the loyalist broke his silence "I did not kill your father and if anyone disgraced his name its you."Sav infuriated charged forward at the man standing before him with black hair and blue eyes standing roughly at 6'2 and heavily built he would prove a true challenge for him. The battle between them lasted only for 6 minutes as the loyalist had been hit harder but unfortunately Sav had been hit harder his vibroblade laid on the ground across from him as the vibrosword of his opponent impaled into the tree above his head as the victory kneeled down in front of the barely conscious Sav. The man lifted his head so Saul made direct eye contact with him "You've gotten better but looks like your still not a match for your old man though huh?" "maybe one day you can regain your own honor son." Sav replied his voice fading "No the man I called father would have rather died then become what you are now..." his eyes closed energy drained and knocked out as his father stood up and removed the sheath from his back and laid it across his son lap "I'll leave you the family blade so you can regain your honor son and maybe one day make me proud of you." the man walked over and picked up his helmet putting it back over his head before running he still had his mission to think about. Sav's squad found him about 10 minutes later when save awoke he had returned in his eyes disgraced by his failure at the mission and his loss to his father. After his defeat he swore two things, one day he would avenge himself and end his father to restore his honor and the other that would make the mandalorians the most terrifying force known in the galaxy. Now he is married to his one true love the battlefield off of it he feels awkward, alone and isolates himself but on it he is a terrifying force bent on making sure that when someone says mandalorians a army shivers in fear.

( I realize the whole father thing is probably played out but I really wanted to do this so forgive me haha.)




KILLS: None


BOUNTIES COLLECTED: None


DUELING RING MATCHES: None


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: None


ROLE-PLAYS: None
 
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If two Mandalorians attempted to duel one another while waiting to ambush the enemy and any right-minded Mandalorian were present, he or she would shoot both of them, drag their bodies into cover, then carry on. Actually, I take that back... they would have shot the guy the moment he yelled out. I get what you're going for, but you should really consider reworking that part.

Also... yellow-gold is the color of vengeance, not black. Black is justice.
 

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Really I thought it was black my bad ill fix it all. Though about the two they where separate they had all grouped up to actively set up different things but still I doubt they'd go that far form each other.
 

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Good to see another Ordo, welcome to the family.
 

Saul

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Good lord that's a strain on the eyes.

Might I suggest this yellow instead? The color code is #FBEC5D
This is another option too. #FFFF83
 

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Copy/paste/change font and color/read
^^ in that order....Otherwise my eyes hurts like crazy.


Aside from Corden's points above, profile looks good. Nice to see more Mandos!
 

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Good lord that's a strain on the eyes.

Might I suggest this yellow instead? The color code is #FBEC5D
This is another option too. #FFFF83

A color that has a low saturation and bright tone is generally best for this board, as it has a dark background. You want a color that, like the ones Saul suggested, don't hugely clash with the normal text color and/or the background color.[/artsnob]
 

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Good to see another Ordo, welcome to the family.

I'm not a Ordo yet I haven't even been accepted as a mando yet haha.

Good lord that's a strain on the eyes.

Fixed that as well though it wasn't a problem for my eyes.

Aside from Corden's points above, profile looks good. Nice to see more Mandos!

I took out the part Corden mentioned I removed the part about the armor standing for revenge and I took out the actual fight.
 
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