Secret Apprentice

[Mr.BossMan]

Hello all!

Okay so as the title says I am interested in making a *Hush* "Secret Apprentice" *Hush* next Timeline. What does that mean?

Well honestly my cousin has been play in these games called "The force unleashed." So I was looking around on Wookiepedia and came across Galen Marek http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Galen_Marek and i think his life story is awesome!

First off this dudes family was killed by Vader, then he gets brainwashed and becomes Vader's "Secret Apprentice," Then the kid slowly kills Jedi, gets betrayed by Vader, gets rescued by Vader, gets sent on a mission by Vader, completes mission, gets betrayed one more time by Vader, becomes a good guy and dies a heroic death. Cool story, and it inspired my next character.

So ya i am interested in making a Secret Apprentice next Timeline.

What does that mean and how will it help you, the reader?

Basically i think that your character, will start off a powerful Sith. And like any other Sith, they want more power. So you abduct and train my character. Send him on missions to gain your characters power and test mine's skills. They form some kind of bond, wether that be a loving one a hating one idk. But we use our characters as a loose team, ones benefiting from each other.

Then somehow someway that all falls apart and our characters split.

Honestly I like this idea, a Secret Apprentice, and I want him to have a strong master (your character) then slowly I want the two to grow their relationship, what that is I have yet to decide. But that is why I need YOU!

We need to brainstorm this idea further, if anyone is interested. That way the both of us can get what we want from our characters.

So ya whoever is interested in this idea post below and we can talk further, flesh out this idea more and see where it leads us. Honestly I think this has some serious potential for both characters involved and I'd like to explore them.

 

[Braden]

Sounds like a pretty cool idea. I have always liked the thought of having a sith and his apprentice doing missions and such to further themselves instead of the order as a whole.

 

[Marf]

@Mr.BossMan

I shall have a Sorcerer and a Vader-esque, cyborg Warrior (Andromeda), so I could offer up either depending on your character's skillset.

Both will be starting with pretty average skill level though, so they could more like an older sibling figure. Though I would rather not plan too much before the timeline has even started.

It is still something to muse on however.

 

[Mr.BossMan]

@Marf

Okay I am down with that. Like I said this is still completely under a rough draft period. I still would like to flesh out the basics of this though, somehow tie in our characters in some way. Maybe how they meet and why my character must be kept secret.

Also I am okay with your character starting out on average power level. That way it would make sense for them to need my character to do the dirty work for them. Play in the shadows and get your character the what ever he or she desires.

So if you want to and are still interested PM me and we can flesh this idea out a little further.

 

[Marf]

@Mr.BossMan

Tbh I'm not really interested in drafting RP arcs before the timeline is even here. I'm still sussing out my characters and planning their profiles, which if you know me well, will not be finished until I consider them works of art.

 

[Mr.BossMan]

@Marf

Sounds good to me, take your time and make them beautiful!

And ya after reading your current character, and the personality you submitted for your Sorcerer. I can Tell right off the bat you are a far, far, better writer then me. So if we were to do this, there would be a large gap in skill.

Of course next timeline I will try much harder, simply because in have learned much about writing during my time on this site. And I want to write him better and make him make more sense. So yes I think I'll put more effort in.

That being said, just by reading your writing, I can tell that you are a far better writer than I.

So ya just letting you know.