Seiya Khen'aum

Seiya

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COMPOSITION AND APPEARANCE:

Seiya dresses in silk black-worn and hooded robes, they wrap around him and seem to be perfectly fitted. He wears a belt that holds his Mandalorian iron Sabre, as well as a variety of pouches and bags. The sabre stretches about 4 and a half feet and it seems to be extremely sharp, however held in a protective holster that keeps it away from his legs enough. He stands at a height of 6 ft and keeps his posture straight and assertive. As if always taunting whoever is looking his way with his bold structure. His right arm is completely robotic but seems very human-like and exceptionally functional, however it matched the strength of his other arm and gave him no extra strength by the looks of it. Seiya wears black boots and dark grey pants that seem well fitted for him. Mysterious and edgy the figure stands, talking to him seems like the wrong move to make, but it could also be a bluff. His right shoulder has an iron plate over it, it acts as armor and doesn’t limit his mobility as much as one might think by looking at it. It is light and possibly blaster resistant. His hood buries his face in darkness, and leaves only the torn metal mask on the outside. It seemed shiny and new but it looked very beat and worn as well, refurbished recently.


PERSONALITY:

Seiya wishes for power, he was independent thought the Jedi ways have caught his attention, he looks at the Sith as a boastful and arrogant culture and has a bit more respect for the almost as unstable Jedi Order. Unsure currently how he will get this power, he is ambitious and ready to make his name heard. Fear eludes him in his current state and arrogance clouds his mind. He craves a teacher and is stressed about a search for a Force sensitive warrior. Besides power, he suffers from slight internal conflict, due to his brother and his nephew being on opposite sides in the War, his nephew a Jedi and his older brother a relatively unknown Sith who ran a small cult many years ago, both killed each other in a death battle only a few years ago, leaving a scar on Seiya, however Seiya is unsure if the Jedi are ‘good’ or if the Sith are. He wishes for power and is ready to get it in the most effective way possible however, seeming ready to push aside his hate for now, perhaps to bring it back out another day.


LIKES AND DISLIKES:


Seiya enjoys meditating and honing his fighting skills, if he is not training with his lightsaber then he is practicing how to shoot with a blaster, some might confuse him for a bounty hunter occasionally because of this trait. Sometimes you will catch him at the cantina, drinking his sorrows away or outsmarting some gamblers, maybe even stealing some money if the opportunity is seen. He enjoys fighting over anything else and loves the idea of power from knowledge. He wishes to increase his knowledge over the coming years and become stronger by doing so. He is on uneasy terms with both sides the Jedi and Sith, and is on neutral grounds with the Hutt Cartel after paying some debts back. He enjoys fixing droids from time to time or tweaking his ship.



STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Seiya is fast and light on his feet, he is knowledgable and listens closely to his surroundings, however currently suffering from internal conflict as he is unsure where to go for the power he seeks. He seems slightly vulnerable and at his current state could possibly be easily swayed to join or pick a side. He is loyal to his few friends and any groups he joins along his journey. He is a good worker and seems to be a good fighter too, using knowledge rather than brute force during a fight, however this sometimes results in short-lived fights, because he retreats if he is obviously outmaneuvered or outmatched. He knows to stay away from someone smarter than himself, unless they would benefit him somehow.


His depression makes him slower than he usually would be, but also fuels him in many different ways, confusing his path even more but making for some interesting interactions.



BIOGRAPHY:

Seiya Khen’aum was born into a family of slaves on the planet Bys, although not a native there his human family was accepted there all the same, to the locals slaves were slaves and not much else. His father was a Jedi during his early years to many people’s surprise, and was highly respected by many of the Slaves there for his wisdom. He had a brother as well formally known as Wrath, a relatively unknown Sith who rejected the current ways and chose independant while retaining his powers. Eventually his own arrogance killed him during a battle he had with his own son, Yohei an old Jedi Master who was also defeated in this battle, having dropped himself and his own father into a pit of lava, to never be seen again, seeing this to be the only way to defeat him and redeem his family name. Seiya Khen’aum wanted to learn the ways of the Force, but his father was unable to teach him as they had little to no privacy. Wrath escaped slavery before having his son, who then escaped from him and raised himself, however keeping in touch with Seiya from time to time. Seiya, now lonely on the planet of slaved seeked something more, he knew his place in the universe was one of more power and respect than his current, and so he formulated a plan and was able to convince a slave owner to buy him, once he was purchased he was taken off the planet and was brought away from the Outer Rim, he for years remained under the control of the Slave owner, believed to be a worker for the Hutt Cartel, who Seiya didn’t know the name of, he eventually fell into Seiya’s trap and was executed by the same shackles he binded on Seiya. During the battle however Seiya lost his arm by a simple sword, but it was tended to by the medical droids on board after he took control.


After killing his Master, he and the rest of the Slaves decided to keep the ship, and respect Seiya as their current captain. He took control of the ship and decided to call it his own shortly after, it was a freighter with few turrets and or blasters, it was usually referred to as a C-ROC carrier ship and is very similar to the Merchant One. It is nothing special but for these slaves, it was home. Seiya did enjoy the small amount of power he had over these slaves and soon realized that’s what he was after, and believed power to be his very purpose in life. He seeked something more than a freighter and a rag-tag group of slaves who couldn’t fight a small squad of space-pirates if they tried. He knew he would have to set off for something more so he simply abandoned them in space after taking what was left of the fuel for his space cruiser, one he also received after killing the slave master and taking control. He did so under everyone’s nose and simply took off with the fuel, leaving the slaves to fend for themselves in the cold space, with no power left on the ship. This to him was a necessary first step to power, true independence. He traveled from planet to planet, doing a small amount of jobs for a variety of traders and even sometimes bounty hunters, being payed to find certain targets and notify them, it payed well and got him through the nights. At the end of these days it was just him and his cruiser, alone in the universe. He has told nobody about his doings and looks forward to a fresh start in the universe at this point.


Seiya trusted no one, he was unsure how the rest of the universe functioned after being solitary on a single planet for the majority of his life up to this point, there are many paths for him and he was careful not to talk to the wrong people and get himself into unnecessary trouble that would only slow him down in the long run. In order to hide his identity and potentially scare off any who pose a threat to him, he created a mask and his very own robes, not seeing the dangers in this he wore it proudly, his new face of freedom. He saw this as a new start for himself, and decided to really go for it and take all the risks required to reach his goal. His first however, find a Sith, or a Jedi and start down the path of the Force.

Later on in his life, at around the age of 19 a mysterious Sith Lord who had yet to reveal his real name to Seiya found him trapped on Tatooine due to his tracking beacon being turned on. The Sith went by the name of Darth Eco, and was a Sith who was in close connection with Wrath, believing that the current Order of Sith are slightly corrupt, and that they should remain separate for now. Seiya was taken under Darth Eco’s wing and was trained harshly. Since he started training so late he struggled to keep up with the speed at which he was training. But after only a few more years of dedication, at the age of 28 Seiya finally got what he wanted all along… was this enough for him? One might ask.., it was not. He only ever wanted more and after he Mastered the ways of the Force, he killed Eco in his sleep, in fear that Eco would one day overpower him and take his life for a new student, having noticed the theme in Sith. “I am a vessel for the darkness… I will finish what you started, Master. Your will…. is in my hands.” He claimed before taking off on his cruiser in order to seek the greater Order of Sith and bring what he has to the table.


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None yet! ~


(Since I am new I am open to the criticism that I notice is pretty popular on these profiles. However there are a few things I’d like to say about it before hand. The outfit, yeah it’s definitely cliche but when I saw this picture (It is some concept art for the Force Awakens Kylo-Ren) I really appreciated it and thought it would do well on a character of my own. I’ve been roleplaying for about 5 years now total, on one other site that I’m not going to name here unless asked~, But I definitely will change things if it bothers the community, as I respect Immersion and I want to bring good RP to anyone who comes my way. I believe the first steps in doing so is a good profile, so I definitely will take suggestions. I would also like to note that I will be working on this still and tweaking things during these next few days for sure! I will second think probably a majority of the stuff I write and I would expect to see a slightly different character soon, but nothing that strays too far from what I have originally planned here. )
 
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Saul

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Just the quick and nasty, the basics like age, height, weight, faction affiliation, eye color, would really help. If people are talking to you in a thread, they like to look at profiles sometimes to pull descriptors you might not have included in the thread. I typically measure the size of a character against my own characters size, or notice the eye color, etc. Faction and rank are just bonuses.

You have a problem of run on sentences here and there (don't worry, I'm exceptionally guilty of this) and could replace a comma here and there with a period.

Um, what else. I like the backstory. It's not clear if he's independent or Jedi and seems to be neutral with all factions, perhaps slightly hostile to Hutts due to history, but that's it. Otherwise, it looks good, I'd definitely throw him into an RP or two.

Be aware that this timeline is ending soon, and the new one will be set 1000 years before Episode 4, so think about how this character might be different in that context... if you want more details check out the timeline announcement subforum.
 
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