Shal Umkur

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NAME: Shal Umkur
FACTION: Sith Order
RANK: Sith Acolayte
SPECIES: Neti
AGE: 23
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 7
WEIGHT: 163
EYES: None
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Black
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes


STRENGTH: 6/10-8/10(He channels most of the power from Feed on the Dark Side to his strength causing it to increase with a opponents emotions the rest is channel into his attacks with the force.)He is a little bit above average in strength but not exceptionally so.
DEXTERITY: 3/10 He is slow and not agile in the least putting him at a disadvantage against foes much faster then him.
CONSTITUTION: 8/10 He is very healthy and can take quite a few hits before going down.
INTELLIGENCE: 5/10 The galaxy is still new to him as he learns new things but he has some common knowledge about it and knows some sith history.
WISDOM: 7/10 His experiences on Nal Hutta has showed him how to apply what he knows to make situations easier and to think before he acts.
CHARISMA: 7/10 Shal has learned one thing since he has been exiled and that is the art manipulation and demoralization.


FORCE POWERS:
  • Feed on Dark Side-The user can feed on the fear, hatred, or other negative emotions of those around him/her to make his/herself more powerful.(He has kept this power secret from others in order to be able to catch his enemy off guard in combat.)

  • Force Push/Pull-Telekinetic abilities to pull or push objects away, as well as enemies. The greater the user's aptitude, the heavier the object that can be manipulated or the more wide the arc or radius of the force 'wave'. It can also be used to pull weapons from enemies.

  • Animal friendship-Once calmed, the animal could be used by the Force user in various ways, including as a mount or guard beast.


SKILLS: Quick learner and patient.


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Dun Möch


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths​
Shal can use his races ability to change there size and shape at will when he sees fit. He is patient and uses it to his advantage with his Dun Möch saber style to give him a advantage in longer fights. His skin is naturally tougher since it is similar to a trees bark. He can also use his roots to restrict an enemy's movement and to defend himself in combat though his roots are sturdy enough to do any damage to a healthy foe. He also is intelligent and knows how to applies it to situations.

Weaknesses​
Shal's major weakness is his lack of mobility and flex ability in a fight against a very fast and agile opponent he would find himself at a major disadvantage. He also is very susceptible to fire as it would quickly spread through out his plant like body and cause extreme damage. He also is very afraid of fire and tries his best to avoid it due to his weakness to it. Also in order to survive without sun light, a feat most of his race can't accomplish, he has learned to feed off a very very small amount of force that runs through the planet but there is limitations if a planet is strong in the light side it weakens him while if it is strong in the dark side strengths him but regardless the force no matter of what nature will allow him to live on a planet with little sunlight and survive.


GEAR: Shal carries a hooded black robe to hide his unique appearance from prying eyes that may be looking in his direction. The robe covers most of his body only allowing his hands to be uncovered and he has small band around his waist to keep the robe tightly applied to his body. He also wears a white mask to cover his face just incase someone gets to close to him or is engaging him in conversation. He has a custom made light saber that he carries in his right sleeve the blade is red like many of the sith lightsabers or at least that is what his old master told him.


SHIP: None


DROIDS: None


PETS: Shal has a young Terentatek, that he has raised from a egg, that stands at about 4'3 and is still developing it's poison, claws, spines, and tusk. On Nal Hutta he decided to name him Omega since with Omega he planned to bring the end to his people.


PERSONALITY: Shal's mentality is that you just because someone is a criminal or a sith that doesn't mean they are evil or in the wrong they just live there life in a way that some believe is wrong and has labeled evil or wrong. He also believes strongly in every reaction deserves a equal or opposite reaction such as how his people abandoned and exiled him so he seeks to repay the gesture with them dead or enslaved. He is the type to set up long term goals and establish how he will obtain them then adapt them to new options though sometimes they are very vague routes. There is a saying he uses sometimes that is what can't be bent to someone's will is better off removed from there path. In his mind there is a path to freedom but this path can be blocked by many different things and the force is his tool to remove those things so he can one day reach freedom. To some he might seem more of a jedi in the sense that he is more patient then some sith but this patience is more of a tool for him to unleash his true power by unleashing his passion as a weapon when his pray enters his den.


BIOGRAPHY:
Chapter 1-Descent into Darkness
Shal was born as a average Neti and was gradually trained in small steps in the ways of the force but once he became 13 him and his life long friend let there curiosities get the better of them and set off from the village but unknowing to any of his people there was the ruins of a ancient sith temple in the jungle that Shal and his friend where about to discover. They where still young and didn't know better, his people had not told stories of the sith in hope them and there practices would be forgotten, they began to explore the temple his friend was afraid of it but Shal's interested was peak as they went through the temple and discovered a library of sorts that was mostly in ruins but there laid one holocron sitting above the rubble where it had almost been crushed by the ruble where the decay of old age had eroded the ceiling and caused some pieces of it to fall to the ground. Shal was instantly interested in it he had never seen such a device before and began to tamper it while his friend continued to warn him but stay clear of the device. Soon Shal would activate it leading to his decent to the dark side as the hologram of a man appeared scaring Shal and causing him to drop the holocron and his friend to take cover. Over the next couple of years he was trained in secret by the holocron in the ways of the dark side though his friend refused to ever go back and tried to convince him every time he left not to go. His people could sense the dark side growing in him with each trip he took to the temple. The Neti let there fear blind them as they should have handled it sooner rather then later as Shal was also being trained not just in the dark side but in beast control and had been raising a baby Terentatek that's egg had laid in hibernation for a new master. His instructor told him that the sith at this temple had created a sub species of them that would not grow to be as large or powerful but would be willing to serve the sith's needs.

Chapter 1.5-The Bond of Life
Darkness. Nothing but the cold chilling darkness until a small aura of red could be seen as if standing on the other side of the wall of darkness the aura gets closer and closer as I push against the wall of darkness trying to get to it. Its so warm a feeling I haven't felt for so long I continue to push till the wall of darkness crack light shining through while my prison rocks. I push again the wall of darkness giving way letting me roll out into the outside and there stood the figure with the red aura. It was the reason for my birth the reason I could escape from the chilling darkness as far as I care I owe my life to this being that stand before me radiating with a warm red aura. "master is this the creature you wanted me to find?" Shal said examining the freshly hatched creature "Yes. This is a terentatek that has been breed to serve as a pet for the sith that use to inhabit this temple." the hologram announced to Shal as he got down on his knees to examine the beast better. "What do you want me to do with such a creature master?" he said as the creature stumbled forward towards him. "This creature will serve as a practice partner and a guardian for you. Thanks to the efforts of the now long dead sith of this temple it should have already imprinted to you thanks to my teachings and the dark side of the force." and this was the beginning of the trials Shal and his pet would face.

Chapter 2-Finding a New Way to Grow
By now Shal has reached the age of 16 and had nothing less to learn from the holocron and soon attempted to teach himself unfortunately by now his village had realized that they made a mistake ad his closet friend soon told them of the events that transpired 3 years ago. His people captured him while he rested but where weak and couldn't bring there self's to kill him and instead exiled him they stuck him on a ship they secured from one of the few people who had knowledge of them and put him and his pet, still unnamed, to drift in space. Shal, without purposely doing so, used a natural ability he gained from the dark side to use it to without the suns light which his people need to live during this time him and his pet entered hibernation growing in there sleep till 5 years later he crash landed on a planet known as Nal Hutta. Thankfully his people taught basic along with there langue or he would have been unable to communicate with anyone period. He soon would hear of the new Sith Imperium and see this as a way for him to become stronger and one day find his people and seek the revenge that had grown within him as he spent two years to build up favors to get the hut to get him in noticed by the sith. His plan is to become stronger in the dark side while searching for his home world since his people never left the planet he doesn't know where it is or even what the rest of the galaxy calls it but when he finds it he will exact his revenge upon his people.

Chapter 2.5-A Weapon to Conquer With
On Nal Hutta Shal has collected the resources to be able to construct a lightsaber a tool his old master had told him that was used to crush a sith's enemies. He had hoped to construct one on his home world but they did not have the resources required to construct it but he had remembered what his master taught him about making one. Now on Nal Hutta with the proper resources and a old crystal that was found in the temple back when he still lived on his home planet he would make a weapon to carry out his plans with. He built his weapon with a easy grip to keep it from falling out of his hands in combat since he preferred to stand his ground rather then dodge. As he turned it on for the first time it took a bit before it actually worked worrying him that the crystal wouldn't work but then it finally worked as the glowing red light extended from the hilt. He tossed it around from hand to hand to get a good feel for it as Omega watched entranced by it's glow it would take practice, and unfortunately without a master a lot of it, but he would hopefully learn how to use it.



KILLS: None


BOUNTIES COLLECTED: None


DUELING RING MATCHES: None


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: None


ROLE-PLAYS: None
 
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Nightmare Moon

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I like the species - could definatly make for some unique possibilites as a Sith.

All in all a good character profile.

Message me if you need any training and stuff.
 

The Derp of Hooves

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Omega should meet Chen and yay for some else besides me using chapters :> also 23 seems a little young for a netti 0.o but that's just me....
 

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Yeah I was gonna put him in his late 20's or early 30's but I decided that if he was going to live for such a long time why not just go ahead and give him a earlier start since he will probably die of holding a torch and getting caught on fire.
 
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