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Dust

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No worries. I contradicted myself! Like I said good shots and good job exposing weaknesses in my writing!
 

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"Get out of her, sir. This area is compromised."

that was a typo but its too funny to fix at this point

i'm just gonna totally take claim of that hilarity and say that it was intentional :D :P
 

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Oh god, that is amazing! I didn't even notice and it totally seems like something your Mando would say; especially based off that character! I'm crying laughing!
 

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@Thomas Cox You do know the five men gunned down weren't officers yes? They were criminals. But there's no way you could know that. If anything you just witnessed a Mando gun down five civilians. Oh and you can use this in your post; other law enforcement are on the way. So you can have fun with that!
 

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@Dust Still getting used to this... I can edit to civilians and change my post.... Next time before i pop into a story i will check the Ooc board first
 

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@Dust Still getting used to this... I can edit to civilians and change my post.... Next time before i pop into a story i will check the Ooc
board first

Also note that the 5 civilians were armed with military grade weapons iirc.
 

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It's alright! It still works well, avenge those 'civilians' you! :D and they didn't have military grade weapons, just cheap blasters. Those brave souls tried to stand up to those brutish mandos kidnapping a innocent girl!
 

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It's alright! It still works well, avenge those 'civilians' you! :D and they didn't have military grade weapons, just cheap blasters. Those brave souls tried to stand up to those
brutish mandos kidnapping a innocent girl!
I do question how they, and your character, would know that @Ral 's character is a Mando, considering he isnt really wearing anything that would define him as one.
 

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@Arclight I was aiming my reply at Bardan where he said "Having now fired and given away his position Bardan fired a shot at the wall just bellow the man's legs before stepping out of the shadows to fully reveal his armored figure."
 
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I do question how they, and your character, would know that @Ral 's character is a Mando, considering he isnt really wearing anything that would define him as one.
Educated guess on Kir's part more than anything based on his experiences over his long life; mannerisms, body language, practically reeking Mando pride. Ergo, educated guess confirmed by the presence of others in their full armor.
 

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Also just fyi Bardan is on top of a building.

@Arclight I was aiming my reply at Bardan where he said "Having now fired and given away his position Bardan fired a shot at the wall just bellow the man's legs before stepping out of the shadows to fully reveal his armored figure."
 

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Arc is right. Not sure if you could see super-sniperman. But you can see Mad Dog show up! He's not subtle :D
 

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Ok... I have another idea I could try and assist the "Civilians" in the car that Ral and the girl does that work better
 

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Your post is fine! Just change officers to civilians and sniper to armored guy by the car :3
 

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Ok so I edited for like the sixth time I think it fits better thanks for you pateince
 

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No worries! We were all new once. Patience and understanding helps turn new RPers into vets. Some people tend to forget the times they were like newer members. Hell, I mess up still and I've been rping on all sorts of mediums for years. I almost got my party killed in D&D last week...but it worked out and I pretended it was all intentional.
 
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