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Hey guys, so a few quick things before we continue on here.

@fasteagle190 I'm not sure your character should be "rushing" anywhere, or literally jumping for that matter. He took a disk to the leg, a serious wound that would definitely hinder those kinds of activities. Its fine if you hurry, but you should clarify in your post that he's limping forward or something like that, and not at top speed. He COULD perhaps use the force to give himself a boost and attain his normal max speed, but he's not doing that at the moment.

@Alejandrø77 So, is Alex using the force to stave off the choke in that last bit? Its a little unclear as its written. Also, I feel "annoyance" is a bit mild for what he should be experiencing in the opening stages of the choke. Its a prepped attempt to crush your throat, and while you don't need to die, you should probably be feeling some pain in addition to sudden loss of your airway.
 

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Hey guys, so a few quick things before we continue on here.

@fasteagle190 I'm not sure your character should be "rushing" anywhere, or literally jumping for that matter. He took a disk to the leg, a serious wound that would definitely hinder those kinds of activities. Its fine if you hurry, but you should clarify in your post that he's limping forward or something like that, and not at top speed. He COULD perhaps use the force to give himself a boost and attain his normal max speed, but he's not doing that at the moment.

@Alejandrø77 So, is Alex using the force to stave off the choke in that last bit? Its a little unclear as its written. Also, I feel "annoyance" is a bit mild for what he should be experiencing in the opening stages of the choke. Its a prepped attempt to crush your throat, and while you don't need to die, you should probably be feeling some pain in addition to sudden loss of your airway.
Oh he feels pain for sure, as your right he is currently being choked. As well as yes his main focus is to keep the grip on his throat from crushing his wind pipe. So unless somthing happens Aleks is gonna be in trouble. I could have worded it a little bit better thanks for the feed back it helps a lot for future posts.
 

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Hey guys, so a few quick things before we continue on here.

@fasteagle190 I'm not sure your character should be "rushing" anywhere, or literally jumping for that matter. He took a disk to the leg, a serious wound that would definitely hinder those kinds of activities. Its fine if you hurry, but you should clarify in your post that he's limping forward or something like that, and not at top speed. He COULD perhaps use the force to give himself a boost and attain his normal max speed, but he's not doing that at the moment.

@Narsi That's true. To tell the truth, I kind if forgot that Ilnyysh got hit with the disk, and that would take him down from max speed. Sorry! I will edit that, as no one has locked it in yet. Sorry again!
 

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Well here we are again lol

@Alejandrø77 Here is the description for the discs he's using in his lanvarok.

"hese are named with the sith word for "End" for a reason as they are usually the cause of death for any they are turned upon. They are solid and capable of significantly damaging modern day armor. However they are slightly heavier and as such must hit the the target at optimal range to do enough damage to the armor. However the blades are still more than enough to cause a target to bleed out if they are unlucky enough to get caught by a disc without the protection of armor. The blades are still enough to slice through bone and flesh with ease."

So, I'm fine with you taking only one of the discs, as it was assault from the front you could see it coming ahead of time slightly. But I feel your greatly lessening the effects. The arm doesn't need to be "gone" per say, but it definitely wont be usable anymore and it wont be recovering in this thread. I would also expect it to be leaking blood very quickly and need extensive bandaging right away to avoid bleeding out.

@fasteagle190 So...I'm don't think merely ducking out of the way is going to do it here. The distance between you two is...like five meters at the max. That's not a lot of distant those blaster bolts need to travel, and you don't have any visual cues to work off. Fact is, once you register the sound of a blaster shot...those shot are already on the way and very quickly closing in. Maybe the second one might be avoided like that, but the first is a big no way from me. Going off of pure numbers, the shot would take like 1/7 second to cover that distance. What with only having sound and it being fired at your back, I would doubt that even the force could help you avoid it.
 

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Well here we are again lol

@Alejandrø77 Here is the description for the discs he's using in his lanvarok.

"hese are named with the sith word for "End" for a reason as they are usually the cause of death for any they are turned upon. They are solid and capable of significantly damaging modern day armor. However they are slightly heavier and as such must hit the the target at optimal range to do enough damage to the armor. However the blades are still more than enough to cause a target to bleed out if they are unlucky enough to get caught by a disc without the protection of armor. The blades are still enough to slice through bone and flesh with ease."

So, I'm fine with you taking only one of the discs, as it was assault from the front you could see it coming ahead of time slightly. But I feel your greatly lessening the effects. The arm doesn't need to be "gone" per say, but it definitely wont be usable anymore and it wont be recovering in this thread. I would also expect it to be leaking blood very quickly and need extensive bandaging right away to avoid bleeding out.

@fasteagle190 So...I'm don't think merely ducking out of the way is going to do it here. The distance between you two is...like five meters at the max. That's not a lot of distant those blaster bolts need to travel, and you don't have any visual cues to work off. Fact is, once you register the sound of a blaster shot...those shot are already on the way and very quickly closing in. Maybe the second one might be avoided like that, but the first is a big no way from me. Going off of pure numbers, the shot would take like 1/7 second to cover that distance. What with only having sound and it being fired at your back, I would doubt that even the force could help you avoid it.

Thank you for letting me know, I had no idea on the information on the disks, As well as I had no plan to use the left arm anymore because of injury. I’ll be sure in my next post to say that the bleeding became more than what was originally thought, and that my character will struggle even more so since treatment has not been made. He will use his right to fight but since this would increase his heart rate the blood flow would make him bleed faster so this is very much a problem for him now.
 

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@Narsi Did we ever establish a distance between the two fights? I assumed that it was farther than that. And Ilnyysh already had his lightsaber behind his back, so I think that with the help from the Force, he could move it only a little bit and at least deflect the blaster bolts.
 

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@fasteagle190 The room size was mentioned as having a width of 15 meters and an undetermined length. Another measurement was the equal 5 meters between the combatants. I’m unsure wether the 5 is in reference to each player or if both groups were separated by 5.
 

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@fasteagle190 Honestly, five meters is pretty generous in my opinion. We know we started this fight with five meters between Jedi/Sith. Since then however, you and Rogue Navigator had closed to melee range whilst my fight stayed ranged. It can be inferred, that Sleegath and Ghusk at least started somewhat close to each other as we Jedi/Sith were side by side facing down each other. Since then...the only separation of distance has been Sleegath getting knocked back a bit.

"He was unbalanced by the first one, rocking back on his heels, and then took the next one head on. The wave shoved him backwards over a meter,"

I mean, even assuming you and Ghusk moved around some...I cant see a distance greater than five meters.

And as for the deflection, I just don't see it. I think the distance your facing would make deflection difficult even if you had visual cues, a ready stance, and full frontal motion. Lightsaber held behind your back? Only going off of sound and with a restricted range of motion. I just don't think that's plausible.
 

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I’ve got a post ready to submit but keep in mind that it won’t solidify any PvP actions since I am not apart of it.
 
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