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Phil

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You will need to add some more history and personality to the profile or else it gets locked. I believe 50 words each suffices, though I may be mistaken.
 

Brandon Rhea

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The text is incredibly difficult to read.
 

Jiang Winters

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I agree with Bac. It's pretty hard to read. Also;

NAME: Eris Sontrebren

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Weakness - His breathing disorder.

GEAR:

Breathing harness.

This seems a bit out of place. Eris Sontrebren reborn, anyone?
 

Trakon

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Good lord, text is offensive to the eyes.

But, I like the picture :)
 

Project

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I agree with Bac. It's pretty hard to read. Also;



This seems a bit out of place. Eris Sontrebren reborn, anyone?

Yeah, I thought the same too.
Sofar I recall you were shot down in a Hangar...
:CStern:
 

Jake

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Everyone is still ambidextrous. Ugh.
 
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