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This post is shit. Should be rewritten. Entirely. Also, find a goddamn tone.
In a back alley far from watchful eyes and inquisitive people sat a quaint little place for politicians and crooks. From the outside it appeared to be nothing more than a worn, red, backdoor. Inside everything changed. The music hit you first, beating a tight rhythm of steadily paced swing through your eardrums. Then came the colors: gold walls, white ceilings, brown trim, and mustard furniture of fine woods—a flare of color that sharpened your retinas without wearing them thin.
Upon entering, each guest was searched before making their way to the receptionist. There credits were exchanged for chips and rooms and courtesans were reserved for the day. Taking a right, then a left, the place opened up: a fine lounge amidst holovids of the swoop races galactic sports. A bar and kitchen lined the right wall, making way to a fine dining hall suited to sophisticated tastes. On the far side of the lounge a long hallway sat beneath two arching stairways that met at the top. The stairs led to management and rooms for VIP guests, the hall had rooms for everyone else.
To the left of the lounge was where the real action was at: an expansive gambling den with tables for sabacc, pazaak, binspo, and more. Dancers and courtesans fluttered from table to table, serving drinks and selling themselves to finely dressed guests who gambled their credits away.
A man sat at one of the far tables, wringing a high stakes game of sabacc for every credit it was worth. He wore an unkempt fitted suit, his jacket hung at the back of his chair ajar and his tie sat loosely about his neck. His listless eyes mulled over the opposition and his glass—mind processing numbers and tells through a liquored glaze. Every hour he cued up another drink, a double, yet his finesse never faltered. He was the best kind of winner, the kind that went unnoticed.
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