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"Not even the Republic alone, nor the order on Ossus, can handle everything in the Galaxy. They may not admit it, but for change and hope, everyone must join in"- The Words of Nar Tysur on a speech to recruit soldiers.

The Elite Legions...
is a force that turns militia's and men who wish to gain credits and respect into a Army for hire. Though they can be bought into fighting, sometimes they will resist those intrested, and sometimes they will volunteer to help those in-need. However to keep their gear and ship payments up, they are still required to fight for those who pay them sometimes.


Headquarters:
The Elite Legions is mainly located on Coruscant at it's base of operations in a series of buildings and tunnels that are used for storage, training, Prison, and as a Hospital for its soldiers.


Structure:
The Elite Legions is an army, like any other, led by once Jedi, Nar Tysur, and is planning to to help the Republic against any of their opposing forces, to gain their trust as it is their name the Army borrowed.

Though recently the Elite Legions has undergone some changes. It has drastically cut down on their Merc Army Ideas, and has become an army for the greater good. Various organizations have helped pay, and donated items. Also engineers and those skilled have helped create weapons and armor for the army, lessining their dependence on others.


Military:
ARMO INFO:The basic armor, is a Plastoid/Metal mix (Assuming they have metal/plastoid mix's then), and covers most of the body. The helmet distinguishes the rank. The helmet has a ridge around the side, and the colors mean:
Grey/White (No color)=Normal Soldier
Blue = Lieutenant
Blue with White Stripes= Pilot Grade C
Green = Elite Foot Soldier
Green with White Stripes= Pilot Grade B
Red = Captain
Yellow = Commander
Yellow with White Stripes= Pilot Grade A (Elite Pilot)
Black= The Elite Front Soldiers
Black and Red= Leader.​

Equipment:
Any soldier (Not counting Pilots and Elite Front Soldiers)
-1 Vibro Blade
-1 Large Ammunition Pack
-1 Average Bolt Shooter (Rifle)

Elite Front Soldier (Front Line soldiers)
-1 Vibro Blade
-1 Vibro Spear
-1 Average Bolt Blaster
-1 Energy Shield and Pack

Unique Techs:
Their armor can take a beating, and their newly developed Bolt Sniper which uses basic gas, but a diffrent type of metal for ammo, is strong aswell, but it takes more time to fire.

Also their Elite Front Soldiers carrying Vibro Blade Spears (A metal pole with a small Vibro-blade at the end) and Shield Generators. While the Tech is not new or unique necessarirly, these troops are made for launching into battle with their shield and spear, maxamizing the damage and saving lives of the Front Line Soldier.

Fleet: The fleet has Four Frigates, very large ships, that can hold many soldiers and cargo. The frigates also have the most advanced shielding available today.
Each of the Four Frigates inside carry a squadron or two of small fighters, which can move fast. They have poor armor and decent cannons, but are known for their speed.

The Fleet also has four more Smaller Frigates that help make the Flag-Squad of the Crew. The Avenger, The Deathbringer, The Phantom, and the Arrow. The Four Frigates are usually docked at Coruscant at the main Base waiting for their moment to fly to battle. (They are only used when needed)

The Last and Final group of 40 or so custom made "Republic Aerobolts" were engineered by the The Elite Legions's finest and out-fitted for rough battles. They are smaller frigates, that are larger than a fighter, but still agile enough to navigate through things the larger flagships freighters and frigates cannot.

Army:
The Army consists of the above forces. The Army though has about 10,000 Soldiers, divided into 10 Legions of 1000 men. 5000 Elite Front Soldiers split among those legions, and 1000 Commando's. The rest of the ground forces are up in the battle ship's, and will never be deployed inless in dire need.

Intelligence: The intelligence section consists of around 800 spies, and 200 "helpers" from various companies that help relay the new designs and technology.

Important Personnel:
Ex-Jedi Nar Tysur, the Leader of the The Elite Legions.
Morse, A Ex-Jedi Knight General.

History: The Elite Legions was formed three years after Ex-Jedi Nar Tysur searched the galaxy and found a small group of men willing to go into battle at any cost. They inspired him into starting The Elite Legions, and them and many others joined the battle. Finally with great funds he was able to secure a base on Coruscant in the "scum" district.

As they fought, they gained more trust and soldiers. They became a group of mercanaries fighting for anyone who paid well. They were named and enemy of the republic, and that outraged Nar Tysur. Nar turned his views on The Elite Legions when he saw a Merc Army destroy many peaceful beings. Disgusted he decided his forces would not be Mercanaries, and would fight for good to gain the trust of the Republic.

IN space, his fleet suffered great losses as they fought with a group of pirates which ambushed four of their Freighters and several Aerobolts. The Pirates had many small fast ships and easily decimated their forces. From this he learned the bug massive ships needed defence, and the The Elite Legions Fighter Squadrons were born.

The Elite Legions Has currently only fought in a couple small land skirmishes.

Goals: To sum things up, become a strong force, gain and grow in size, and ally with major and strong companies and Planetary Governments as a Independent militia.
Really the Greatest goal of Nar Tysur is to ally with the Republic and clear their bad name, and ultimately help attack the Alsakans.

Enlist Now: Nar Tysur, is looking for those worthy. Sign up now by Messaging me.
 
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Interesting... Has it been approved?
 

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No I assumed this is where you post to be approved. I am really confused on how this site works. Sorry for any spelling errors. Its late. I'm tired. I am not capable of thinking straight.
 

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Well, send GR1M a PM when you want to submit it to be approved. It's an interesting independent faction, to say the least.
 

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I truly got the inspiration, from Force Unleashed and Master Kota. Finished it a while ago. It was an amazing idea that during the Clone Wars, instead of Clones, He refused in built his own force.
 

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Hmm, i like this faction


heres my question, is my Jedi aloud to join it? (though he's not a jedi anymore)
 

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Well who would be the leader of this faction.

I'd preffer it if my character (my first and only character btw) was below them, as he's 23 years old.
 

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Well who would be the leader of this faction.

I'd preffer it if my character (my first and only character btw) was below them, as he's 23 years old.

Nar, the Leader is in his early-mid 30's as I described him. He doesn't reveal his true age though.

He is the leader....

Commando is actualy bellow Captain in this. I regard them as elite soldiers here. Captain and higher is officer rank.
 

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I'd preffer a postion like that, Captain or higher. I don't like the idea of "Spec ops" things. But ya i like this faction
 

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I'd preffer a postion like that, Captain or higher. I don't like the idea of "Spec ops" things. But ya i like this faction
Then you are captain of the First Legion.

How Legions Work:
General- Leads whole Legion/force given to him
4 Captain's- lead around 250 men each
Commando's-around 55 or more Commando's to every captain
Normal Soldiers- Around 200 to each Captain.

Also Every Legion has around 500 Front Line Soldiers.

Thats about 125 men to the Front of Every Captain's Sub-Legion to attack in charges.

 

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Hmm, At the same time i want to be close to the leader of the faction. Is hat possible
 

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ya alright lets go with that. When do ya figure this'll get started up
 

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ya alright lets go with that. When do ya figure this'll get started up

When it gets all approved up, which it most likely will, and we recruit 3 more Generals, and 16 Captains, and other people. Then we shall be full. Non-Important foot soldiers I suppose we can handle. Like
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Nar watched as two helpless Elite's were stabbed. In a fit of anger, he ran fowards swinging his blade but lost his footing.
"SIR!" Yelled a Soldier running at the attackers. The Soldier turned his torso and swung his Vibro-spear into the adversaries stomach, then the dull end into the side of his neck, knocking him to the ground.
 

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Ya alright, i can dig that, I'll read a little bit more of this, so i can get a better understandin
 

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I did notice something though.


This is an army of 10,000, yet the fleet is of only 4 frigates.

Consider doing a bit more detail on the ships. Like how many fighters do they have, how big are they, do they have hangers. Things like that.

I just thought it was strange that an army of 10,000 has a navy of only 4 frigates and no corvettes or anything
 

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Nar, the Leader is in his early-mid 30's as I described him. He doesn't reveal his true age though.

He is the leader....

Commando is actualy bellow Captain in this. I regard them as elite soldiers here. Captain and higher is officer rank.

Commando is a title of a kind of special forces soldier. Commander is a rank (in SW) above Captain.

Oh and currently there are no Jedi serving in the Republic; there might be some soon, but none of them will automatically become Generals. So I don't know where your ex-Jedi General has come from.

And just one more thing, that name would be illegal, as the Republic would not wish to associate itself with mercenaries (especially 10,000 of them - NB this is a very large army and would have huge tariffs on it).
 

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No arguements here on any of the things mentioned.


It's just needs a bit of fixin, but not a whole lot.
 
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